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Creatures
When the personal plane of a highly ranked Brazilian cabinet member and his family disappears in the Amazon, a search and rescue helicopter records evidence of a massive anomaly in the jungle. Doc Morrison, a renowned geologist, is called in to help investigate what could be the collapse of the largest cavern known to man. Doc and his graduate student protégés, Libby and Peter, join a team from Brazil to explore the site.
Deep in the remote jungles of South America, the team, including an elite unit of Brazilian soldiers, is soon set upon by creatures none of them could have ever imagined. Separated in small groups, they must face their fears and summon the strength to fight for their lives in the hope of getting a warning out about this terrifying new threat to mankind.
Deep in the remote jungles of South America, the team, including an elite unit of Brazilian soldiers, is soon set upon by creatures none of them could have ever imagined. Separated in small groups, they must face their fears and summon the strength to fight for their lives in the hope of getting a warning out about this terrifying new threat to mankind.
- GenresHorror
216 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 6, 2016
190 people are currently reading
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About the author
David Burkett
1 book6 followersA few years back, I told a good friend of mine about a book concept that I had thought of years earlier, but had been unable to write, as I always felt my writing to be too stilted. He loved the concept and wrote the first chapter. Over the next couple of years or so, we found time outside of our jobs and busy lives to co-write "Lethal Vision" under the pen name of Thomas Holt. That effort allowed me to understand that I can write, but more importantly, I realized just how much I love to write. “Creatures” was my first solo novel, hopefully one of many to come.
I was born and raised in the south and was fortunate to have two wonderful parents and a couple of fun (most of the time) older siblings. After a four-year stint in the navy, I went to school at the University of Alabama (Roll Tide), where I met and married the love of my life. After ten years of being a couple, we doubled the size of our family by having two amazing and talented kids. Raising them was one of the most rewarding experiences of our lives, and from the way they have turned out, I guess we can say we did a pretty darn good job.
Over the past 35 years or so, I worked as a design/development engineer for various medical device companies in California. Finding out that writing brings me the same creative joy that I feel when coming up with unique device designs was a wonderful surprise, and I’m looking forward to pursuing it full time as I head into the next chapter of my life. I hope that you will decide to come along for that ride and that you will enjoy my novels.
I was born and raised in the south and was fortunate to have two wonderful parents and a couple of fun (most of the time) older siblings. After a four-year stint in the navy, I went to school at the University of Alabama (Roll Tide), where I met and married the love of my life. After ten years of being a couple, we doubled the size of our family by having two amazing and talented kids. Raising them was one of the most rewarding experiences of our lives, and from the way they have turned out, I guess we can say we did a pretty darn good job.
Over the past 35 years or so, I worked as a design/development engineer for various medical device companies in California. Finding out that writing brings me the same creative joy that I feel when coming up with unique device designs was a wonderful surprise, and I’m looking forward to pursuing it full time as I head into the next chapter of my life. I hope that you will decide to come along for that ride and that you will enjoy my novels.
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December 29, 2022
aliens and creatures
It was an ok read… not my favorite action packed book. A team is sent to Amazon jungle to research an anomaly. Unknown creatures appear and start killing the team.
It was an ok read… not my favorite action packed book. A team is sent to Amazon jungle to research an anomaly. Unknown creatures appear and start killing the team.
August 11, 2016
Can't wait for the sequel. Obviously a page turner since I couldn't put it down and finished it in a little over 24 hours. It was well written. It is obvious that there was a lot of research done in preparation for this story.
What an imagination! I still have images in my head. Suspense, science fiction, action and even a little lovin' going on! What else could you ask for? "Creatures" would make a great movie!
What an imagination! I still have images in my head. Suspense, science fiction, action and even a little lovin' going on! What else could you ask for? "Creatures" would make a great movie!
January 15, 2017
Outstanding
I don't know where to start but this book is well worth reading. Wow......unbelievable I finished in the day. A real page turner that only got better as I read. Just imagine......this could really happen....
I don't know where to start but this book is well worth reading. Wow......unbelievable I finished in the day. A real page turner that only got better as I read. Just imagine......this could really happen....
August 4, 2018
I loved it. Fantastic. I'm reading book two next. Hope it's as good as this one. I think it's pretty farmed good for a first solo. Reminds me of Koontz early books. If recommend it to anyone that likes horror or scifi.
Review was written above. I can't rewrite it again. Sorry I wrote it in the wrong place. Keep writing like this.
Review was written above. I can't rewrite it again. Sorry I wrote it in the wrong place. Keep writing like this.
February 27, 2022
Very interesting read
What I expected was not what I got. The creatures that are discovered in a sunken area near a large Brazilian city show no remorse as they begin to destroy a small group of scientists and their military support. I had figured some sort of lost dino land animals. Boy, was I wrong. These baddies are the things nightmares are made of. I loved the touches of humor, making the characters more believable and likeable, and giving small respite amidst the horror.
I dropped one star because I felt there were paragraphs that really had no bearing on the story as it flowed. I understand the author made changes as to chronological order, but not reading the original version has left me wondering if that's why the storyline seems disjointed. I get that these spots are background info, but some had no bearing at all on the story. Case in point, the woman who receives the signal from the plane. She had little impact on the story besides being the original recipient of the signal and sending the info forward. Her dwelling on the new lingerie for her guy told in many paragraphs seemed unnecessary. That said....
I will be reading the next installment as the ending was a bit of a cliff hanger. Bring on the monsters!
What I expected was not what I got. The creatures that are discovered in a sunken area near a large Brazilian city show no remorse as they begin to destroy a small group of scientists and their military support. I had figured some sort of lost dino land animals. Boy, was I wrong. These baddies are the things nightmares are made of. I loved the touches of humor, making the characters more believable and likeable, and giving small respite amidst the horror.
I dropped one star because I felt there were paragraphs that really had no bearing on the story as it flowed. I understand the author made changes as to chronological order, but not reading the original version has left me wondering if that's why the storyline seems disjointed. I get that these spots are background info, but some had no bearing at all on the story. Case in point, the woman who receives the signal from the plane. She had little impact on the story besides being the original recipient of the signal and sending the info forward. Her dwelling on the new lingerie for her guy told in many paragraphs seemed unnecessary. That said....
I will be reading the next installment as the ending was a bit of a cliff hanger. Bring on the monsters!
July 17, 2017
Creatures
I would maybe have given a batter rating if not for the cursing. Took so much from the story. Probably won't buy another book from author because of it. The story itself was pretty good, but the ending was too Cloverfie!d, nothing explained. So vague and anticlimactic. Oh well...have at it.
I would maybe have given a batter rating if not for the cursing. Took so much from the story. Probably won't buy another book from author because of it. The story itself was pretty good, but the ending was too Cloverfie!d, nothing explained. So vague and anticlimactic. Oh well...have at it.
July 15, 2022
Very scary and written well.
The only thing I didn't like was how terrifying the creatures were! I was so afraid for the people!! But it was so well written that in that as scary as the creatures were, the people were so brave, though scared, that you were right there with them. Can't wait for the sequel. And David, you are a terrific writter.
The only thing I didn't like was how terrifying the creatures were! I was so afraid for the people!! But it was so well written that in that as scary as the creatures were, the people were so brave, though scared, that you were right there with them. Can't wait for the sequel. And David, you are a terrific writter.
March 8, 2019
meh. lost a star on the last chapter. sf I like, lovecrafian horror from outer space i don't care about, but please pick one.
June 8, 2023
Kindle Unlimited Read
Creatures served its purpose of giving me a quick monster story that kept my interest until the end. There's some editing issues here and there with missing quotation marks and typos, but nothing egregious, and certainly much better then other self published novels I've read recently. Gabriel is by far the most likeable character here and I hope he takes more of the main role moving forward - I really didn't care for Peter or Libby at all. Their flirting and groping of each other through the first couple of chapters just came across as juvenile. They did get better as the book progressed, but it wasn't a great first impression.
The titular creatures are imaginative and interesting, though I do wish the author would call them something else occasionally, like beasts or monsters - the heroes kill one creature, then a second creature appears and finds the dead creature then a bunch of other creatures show up and join the first creature.... you get to the point where the word 'creature' loses all meaning. I'm also not a fan of the 'to be continued' ending. Nothing wrong with making a series but there has to be a better way to set things up for a sequel without just not giving me an ending at all.
Anyway, there are some faults but overall it was an enjoyable monster story. I'm interested enough to try the sequel out!
Creatures served its purpose of giving me a quick monster story that kept my interest until the end. There's some editing issues here and there with missing quotation marks and typos, but nothing egregious, and certainly much better then other self published novels I've read recently. Gabriel is by far the most likeable character here and I hope he takes more of the main role moving forward - I really didn't care for Peter or Libby at all. Their flirting and groping of each other through the first couple of chapters just came across as juvenile. They did get better as the book progressed, but it wasn't a great first impression.
The titular creatures are imaginative and interesting, though I do wish the author would call them something else occasionally, like beasts or monsters - the heroes kill one creature, then a second creature appears and finds the dead creature then a bunch of other creatures show up and join the first creature.... you get to the point where the word 'creature' loses all meaning. I'm also not a fan of the 'to be continued' ending. Nothing wrong with making a series but there has to be a better way to set things up for a sequel without just not giving me an ending at all.
Anyway, there are some faults but overall it was an enjoyable monster story. I'm interested enough to try the sequel out!
December 4, 2023
Creative read!
Creatures turned out to be nothing like I expected - it’s a unique & creative story!
Pros ….
The differences which make this read what it is are what separates it from many other creature books. The author David Burkett’s attention to detail creates imagery that’s crystal clear & thrilling.
Cons ….
The constant love story (stories…) aspect gets a bit tiring at times. Especially as I’m not into the whole romance genre, at all.
Additionally, all the fabulous detail which helps this story to be engaging can also cause the story to slow too much at times. Becoming a bit dull. A tighter edit in certain chapters could easily fix the bogging down issue however.
All that said, the conclusion is satisfying as well as intriguing & has left me wanting more. I’m excited to move right on to Book 2 in this mini-series.
If you enjoy a good creature story, I recommend giving this book a go. I’m sure you’ll enjoy it!
Creatures turned out to be nothing like I expected - it’s a unique & creative story!
Pros ….
The differences which make this read what it is are what separates it from many other creature books. The author David Burkett’s attention to detail creates imagery that’s crystal clear & thrilling.
Cons ….
The constant love story (stories…) aspect gets a bit tiring at times. Especially as I’m not into the whole romance genre, at all.
Additionally, all the fabulous detail which helps this story to be engaging can also cause the story to slow too much at times. Becoming a bit dull. A tighter edit in certain chapters could easily fix the bogging down issue however.
All that said, the conclusion is satisfying as well as intriguing & has left me wanting more. I’m excited to move right on to Book 2 in this mini-series.
If you enjoy a good creature story, I recommend giving this book a go. I’m sure you’ll enjoy it!
April 25, 2023
Good creature horror story
The concept of a lost world populated with unknown species deep in the jungle is an old one. This revised novel takes the well known trope and gives it a fresh and very well done modern twist. It is part if a series, which I'm not partial to, I prefer stand alone novels, but this one is absolutely worth the read. Great characters, well managed pace, and a fantastic perilous adventure is a joy to read. It does need a little editing TLC, but the few stumbles don't take away from the story. All in all, a very good novel, absolutely worth a read.
The concept of a lost world populated with unknown species deep in the jungle is an old one. This revised novel takes the well known trope and gives it a fresh and very well done modern twist. It is part if a series, which I'm not partial to, I prefer stand alone novels, but this one is absolutely worth the read. Great characters, well managed pace, and a fantastic perilous adventure is a joy to read. It does need a little editing TLC, but the few stumbles don't take away from the story. All in all, a very good novel, absolutely worth a read.
October 11, 2024
They’re Eating the Dogs! They’re Eating the Cats!
A group of blood thirsty Haitians( Aliens) wreak havoc on an unexplored piece of the Amazon. Scientists find themselves discovering a giant cavern that houses a multitude of malignant, hungry creatures bent on the destruction of anything living around this area and survival is questionable.
Along with a contingent of Brazilian soldiers, the group of scientists learn quickly how to survive. This is their tale
A group of blood thirsty Haitians( Aliens) wreak havoc on an unexplored piece of the Amazon. Scientists find themselves discovering a giant cavern that houses a multitude of malignant, hungry creatures bent on the destruction of anything living around this area and survival is questionable.
Along with a contingent of Brazilian soldiers, the group of scientists learn quickly how to survive. This is their tale
February 17, 2017
Interesting twist on science fiction.
Really enjoyed the story, but would have preferred it to start at the beginning instead of being a flashback story alternating with the "now" story. Maybe if he had stayed with the flashback until it caught up before continuing with the current events it would have been a better flow..
Really enjoyed the story, but would have preferred it to start at the beginning instead of being a flashback story alternating with the "now" story. Maybe if he had stayed with the flashback until it caught up before continuing with the current events it would have been a better flow..
December 29, 2017
MIKE
I FOUND THIS STORY TO BE UNBLEAVABLE IN THE PLOT AND STORY LINE
IT WILL BE INTERESTING TO SEE IF THE ENDING IS COMPLEAT OR
IT LEAVES YOU HANGING WITH NO FINISH
I FOUND THIS STORY TO BE UNBLEAVABLE IN THE PLOT AND STORY LINE
IT WILL BE INTERESTING TO SEE IF THE ENDING IS COMPLEAT OR
IT LEAVES YOU HANGING WITH NO FINISH
December 9, 2021
Great read!
Read this in one sitting; it didn’t disappoint! If you like McBride or Robinson, you’ll love this. Can’t wait for the continuation!
Read this in one sitting; it didn’t disappoint! If you like McBride or Robinson, you’ll love this. Can’t wait for the continuation!
December 14, 2021
Creature feature
I love a fast paced creature feature ! This book has every thing I want. Blood guts and gore with a small love story.
I love a fast paced creature feature ! This book has every thing I want. Blood guts and gore with a small love story.
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January 29, 2022Very entertaining
Creatures were unique and terrifying. Good characters that you really cared about and felt their emotions. Can't wait for the next book!
Creatures were unique and terrifying. Good characters that you really cared about and felt their emotions. Can't wait for the next book!
May 11, 2022
by in large this was a good read but way to many details and gore for my taste don't think i will finish the series
September 28, 2025
Great book.
Forest, creatures, action, gore.
Everything I wanted in a creature feature.
Definitely worth the read.
Forest, creatures, action, gore.
Everything I wanted in a creature feature.
Definitely worth the read.
July 6, 2023
I liked the story but the two characters that were in love annoyed me. Radio silence when you have deadly creatures around you, not I love you’s. Ha. I will probably read the next one in the series but I’m in no hurry.
October 15, 2021
This was a very fun and nerve racking read. There were so many tense moments that had the hair on the back of my neck on full alert. Looking forward to reading the next one.
February 11, 2017
Adventure and monsters, Awesome
This book was excellent. Keeps you hooked. What an imagination the author has. Love this book. Different kinds of creatures, with lots of action, and suspense. Very likeable people in the book. And great job of describing thee creatures and the jungle environment. Hope there will be a continuation of this book. Thank you David for an excellent, awesome book.
This book was excellent. Keeps you hooked. What an imagination the author has. Love this book. Different kinds of creatures, with lots of action, and suspense. Very likeable people in the book. And great job of describing thee creatures and the jungle environment. Hope there will be a continuation of this book. Thank you David for an excellent, awesome book.
February 4, 2017
Just another poorly written monster book. The dialog was just so bad i couldn't finish it. Boring...
February 6, 2017
Creatures
Very well written for first time author. Good characters and storyline. I can see this as a stand alone or a series.
Very well written for first time author. Good characters and storyline. I can see this as a stand alone or a series.
May 3, 2017
Suspenseful
Good story, fully developed characters, imaginative creatures. The setting was well described, my only problem was with the dialogue that seemed somewhat forced and trite. I would definitely get a second title from this author.
Good story, fully developed characters, imaginative creatures. The setting was well described, my only problem was with the dialogue that seemed somewhat forced and trite. I would definitely get a second title from this author.
June 18, 2017
Pretty good
I vacillated between a three and a four as I read this book. The three was due to badly written slow spots. However the story picked up again and started gaining some decent momentum. So, I settled on a four. Give it a try. If you read and liked any books by Thomas D Holt this is the same author. You probably like this too.
I vacillated between a three and a four as I read this book. The three was due to badly written slow spots. However the story picked up again and started gaining some decent momentum. So, I settled on a four. Give it a try. If you read and liked any books by Thomas D Holt this is the same author. You probably like this too.
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