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238 pages, Unknown Binding
First published April 30, 2013


He pulls at my jeans, and I look over his right shoulder and see the keys on the floor near my left foot.If it hadn’t been within the last few pages of the book, I would have DNF’d it right there.
I hook the heel of my boot around the ring and slowly bend my knee, dragging the keys up the left side of my body, cradling [name's] legs, and fake a sexy sigh.
[...] “That’s more like it,” he moans. “You might as well enjoy it.”
“I know. You’re right. Here, let me help you with my pants,” I whisper.
I put on a large fleece sweatshirt, a pair of jeans, a drab ecru down parka with a hood, and my UGG boots.What thrift store is she shopping at that carries UGG, Coach and Dior? Another big detractor from Bea’s characterization in Sketchy was the abundance of dialogue infiltrating every scene. Very little was said about how Bea was feeling, what anyone looked like or how those around her were reacting, during any conversation; everything read flat, and straight to the point.
I lock my bedroom door, strap on a green leather Coach backpack, and walk over to the window.
[...] thank goodness for the ugly Isotoner leather gloves I found tucked in the pockets of the parka.
Willa digs around [Bea's bag] and finds a pair of oversized, round Dior shades.
“How typical. They hate me already, and I haven’t even done anything yet. It’s my hair.”And it goes on. Nothing to indicate how Bea feels about this conversation. Nothing to indicate what tone of voice Chris is using – is he being sarcastic? Energetic? Empathetic? I’m not even going to get into how Chris was characterized – think of every stereotypical portrayal of any gay boy in high school, and you’ve got Chris down to a T.
“Your hair is fierce, Bea! Rule number two: don’t speak to the cheerleaders unless you are spoken to first.”
“Excuse me?”
“They’re harmless. Besides, they’re in mourning.”
“What do they have to be sad about?”
“Oh my god! You didn’t hear about the rape?” Chris whispers.