An excerpt reprinted here from my blog: Kite Without Strings:
Eleanor Bertin’s first novel Lifelines (Word Alive Press, 2016) nudges the reader to look inward, to dust off the brain cells, plus think about mortality and his/her purpose on Earth.
On the surface, it’s a home-spun heart-warming yarn threaded with Anna Fawcett’s unflinching morals and the scent of freshly baked cinnamon buns. Reach deeper and it’s an intellectual debate peppered with such hot topics as religion, an unexpected pregnancy, abortion, special needs care, ageing, evolution, and the environment. If you’re prone to tears, expect to cry. If you prefer laughter, you’ll find humour too.
Each chapter begins with an epigraph which foreshadows the scene and/or launches the reader into a new arena of thought. For example in Chapter Nine, Bertin quotes the title of a 1988 book by Jamie Buckingham: “The truth will set you free but first it will make you miserable.”
Many of Bertin’s characters are miserable. The protagonist Dr. Q. M. Robert Fielding is a pompous biologist struggling with recent losses. In the first chapter, in the first line, he “is vexed –with the prickly branch of overgrown rose bush that had just scraped his face…He blew pent-up air out of tight lips, pffpllpff.”
Other struggling characters are Amelia who is facing a recent pregnancy on her own; and Joan, the neighbourhood cat-lady who felt “it was downright miserable out there and some people should wake up to the fact.”
Add the ordinary and more positive character Anna Fawcett plus her Down syndrome son Jesse to the storyline and the plot unfurls in surprising but believable ways.
The dialogue is strong indicative of each character’s personality. The well-researched viewpoints are balanced. Sometimes the chatter is superfluous reflecting the mundane and lonely life of a character. Sometimes the bantering of scholarly facts may bog down the uneducated but it adds depth to those looking for deeper discussions and meanings.
To state anything more about the plot would ruin the natural and gentle unfolding of character development and the reader’s experience.
However, Bertin’s premise that people can be “touched by the power of even those with obscure and ordinary lives” reminds me of Mitch Albom’s bestselling novel The Five People You Meet in Heaven and how each individual is special and vital to the well-being and learning experiences of those around them.
Beautifully written, thought-provoking, Lifelines “puts things into perspective” and offers readers “a lifeline of stability.” Bravo! Quite an achievement for a first time novelist!