DNF around the half-way mark
Chapter Two was weird. It reads like you're listening to an audio recording. You don't know who it is that's speaking or what's physically happening other than a few 'sound' effects, like *CRASH!* and *sigh* and *WHAP!*.
And there are some weird phrases. *He eats, shits, and breathes football*. Shits? Really? And, *he smells like a mixture of water, earth and musk*. How does a person smell like water?
I didn't really care for Sabrina. She's bitchy to Saint for no real reason. She's been holding on to a three year crush on a guy who shows zero interest in her romantically and lets him treat her like a piece of furniture when they have their "working" dinners, she's overly stubborn in a way that seems very unprofessional, and she's a spaz! She's anxious all the freakin time, so, I wanna scream at her, "will you calm down!" whenever her narrative comes around.
At around the half-way point, I'm thinking I don't really like anyone in this book. The banter between the mcs is, I'm sure, supposed to be charming, but really isn't. They both seem like assholes. So, I'm gonna call it here, in the middle of chapter eleven. It wasn't horrible, but did nothing but annoy me.