This was a fast, well-written, romantic, mysterious, and exciting story. This book had a lot going on, skipping around in between genres and times and settings and points of view. And it's short. But I liked it a lot. I definitely wanted more story, but at the same time I think that this book told what it wanted (or was meant) to tell. I liked the characters (though I didn't necessarily get that attached to them…), I liked the pacing of the story, the narration (especially when narrated by the main character in present day) and I didn't really have any glaring issues with it (I mean, obviously small things, because otherwise it would have a higher rating, but it generally really worked for me.) Also, exquisite narration, in my opinion. Big fan, but just couldn't push a higher rating from me.
This book is about Emma, who at the beginning of the 20th century, with her family and her boyfriend's family, drunk from the Fountain of Youth. And became immortal. However, her family, and her boyfriend's family, were kissed by the Church of Light, a fanatical religious group that hated them for who they became. Only Emma and Charlie, her boyfriend, survived, only to soon after split up. Now, as a private investigator, Emma looks into mysterious deaths that happen around her, and to people like her, while always looking for Charlie and hoping that he is still alive.
SPOILERS DISCUSSION!
So, if I had to have one negative comment, it's that I didn't really get attached to the characters. Like, this story was sad and intense and kind of should have made me really cling to these characters, but in reality I kind of experienced it from afar. And, in some ways, I think that fits the story that was told. Like, we're meant to be distant from Emma of 1913 because Emma of 2016 (or whatever year, not sure if it's stated) is so distant from that past Emma. And we're meant to be distant from current Emma because that's how she has to live her life. I don't know, in some ways I think that distance really felt true to the nature of the story, but I also wanted some of that grittiness and emotional proximity that I just didn't get here. I'm undecided.
I really liked the writing. It was atmospheric when in Florida, which I liked and fit really well with that setting and mood, and then a lot more witty and, not like gritty but grittier, and less romantic and idealistic, in modern day. That being said, Emma was still a pretty romantic and idealistic character. I don't know, the narration was a big part of my enjoyment of this novel though, so make of that what you will.
So, for some reason, I was pretty chill with this romance. Like, it felt like this kind of love created by two teenagers in a similar situation who just formed this bond… I'm not explaining this properly, but basically what I want to say is that though I would usually be against this, like, immortal love throughout the ages idea, and like the kind of obsession they both have with each other, given the circumstances and the way that Ms. Preble told their story it worked for me. So, props for that.
And in regards to the ending, like, yeah it would have been nice to get a little bit more about the two of them. To see them actually try again, to see them live their lives (forever and ever and ever) but I also understand why it kind of had to end right here. I have faith in them, I don't need their entire story spelled out. I like it as is. (Also, I don't want a sequel. It would feel like pushing for another plot.)
I kind of wish that the religion aspect had been spelled out a little bit more. It was one of the things that really drew me to this book. You don't read a lot of YA about religion (at least, not the YA that I am exposed to) and I was really intrigued about how it was all going to be handled. It was definitely there, but I wanted more insight into the cult mentality, how everything came together, and how these people truly believed in what they were doing. I just didn't get as much of those elements as I might have liked.
Also, this book doesn't really feel like YA. Much of it is told by a 117 year old woman and the other large section is told by a 17 year old, but with a narrator pointing out all of her mistakes and stupidity at being 17 years old.
Immortality was handled brilliantly. It's a topic that I don't usually like, but here I just thought it was SO GOOD. Like, the narrator looking back at them while they were younger and talking about youth and for some reason it didn't feel overly preachy or like the narrator was looking down on teenagers and saying they aren't capable of anything… It was a more distant, detached view of time (I mean, duh, kind of) and it just worked for me (though, for the record, 17 year olds are capable of a hell of a lot.)
Also, because of the way the story was told etc, I was kind of okay with this not-at-all-explained magic system. Not totally okay, like I would have appreciated some more explanation (like, what is the "murder" clause? What, exactly, works and what doesn't?) but also, again, I get it. This is not an established high fantasy world, this is two (well, three) people who drank from a stream and are immortal and how are they gonna figure out the rules? Are they going to try to kill themselves and see what works? No. And (if they were kind of evil) they don't even have more tea to make people drink and then try methods out on them. So, I get that we can't know all that much about the magical element. I wish we could, but I get that we can't.
I thought that Pete was really great and a super fun, lovable (and loving) character. Definitely cut some of the intense characters a little bit, while not being a total goofball or anything.
I liked hearing from Charlie and others in the italicized print nearing the end. I think that it could have been sprinkled in a little more earlier, but also maybe we needed the base story before starting to embellish upon it… I don't know, but I found the progression of his story really intriguing as well.
Will definitely check out this author's other work because I quite liked this!
FIN!
Wonderful narration and packed story: 90%