As a HUGE Kristen Ashley fan, I had to see for myself how this book compared to Motorcycle Man, as I had read favorable comparisons on Goodreads. Though there were some similarities in the beginning, I found at around 60%, definitely not so much. Mainly because that is when the writing started to really lose its mojo with me. It was around then the quality of the writing just wasn’t there for me, folks, and when this likable alpha “no one messes with me, my club, or my woman” MC Prez hero commenced to talking about feelings A LOT it all started to seem out of character. Yes, I prefer that over an obnoxious jerk but just like too much sugar in a dessert, it can ruin the literary recipe/effect. Thinking back it didn’t bother me he had a sensitive side, it was likely I just didn’t care for how it was scripted.
I have to agree with the many reviewers who found the heroine annoying at times. But only slightly so, in fact, again it came down to the writing. I feel like I should say, “Hey, don’t hold it against her, she couldn’t help it she was written this way.” Meaning, again, I think it was a writing issue, not a character one.
It was sweet, romantic how the hero was patient, had to earn her trust, and they weren’t intimate until they actually got to know each other.
However, despite the multi-layered action drama unfolding, I found myself becoming disengaged after halfway through it. By 80%, instead of hanging on every word, I instead began wishing the second half had been written as well as the first part. I’m undecided at this point if I will read the other books in the series. I read this as part of my kindle unlimited subscription, so other than time spent away from my long ARC to-be-read list, I didn’t have anything to lose. Plus, I am a sucker for a MC romance featuring the prez. I might venture back into this MC literary neighborhood some day when I’m looking for tough guys with softer sides. I just won’t expect it to be as well-written as a KA read.
(These comments are based on KU version, not an ARC.)
Title: Cal, Series: The Ride (Book 5), Author: Megan O’Brien, Pub. Date: 10/11/16, Kindle Unlimited version, heroine has a small child/getting a divorce from an abusive OM, stand-alone but most would recommend reading the series in order, MC romance theme, some violence, heroine is injured, no cheating, no love triangle, no OW/OM drama, hero seems to already be in love with her, VERY smexy with lusty language.