DELICIOUSLY DARK, SERIOUSLY SEXY AND DELIGHTFULLY ENTERTAINING !!! Title: His Vengeance Series: The Alpha Billionaire's Revenge, A Dark Romance Designation: Books One thru Five of Nine Book Serial, NOT a Standalone, DOES CONTAIN CLIFFHANGER Author: Deana Farrady My Rating: FIVE SERIOUSLY SEXY STARS***** Wow! I love this series, or I should say serial because the story was originally released in installments but is now complete. None of the books in this serial are standalone reads and each release does contain a cliffhanger but maybe I'm just a bit weird because I love this concept, especially when the book is part of the Kindle Unlimited program. These short installments are perfect for a quick naughty break. I read each of the nine installments as they were originally released. Fortunately, the author has now released the first five installments into one convenient box set and has also released another collection containing the four remaining installments. Now having warned everyone right up front, I'd like to talk about the story itself. Quite frankly, this is my first time reading Deana Farrady's work and I had no idea what to expect. I saw an advertisement offering the first book for free and after reading the blurb, I decided I would try it, read a few pages and if I didn't like it, I'd just stop reading. Well, I didn't stop reading because I couldn't! I was immediately drawn into this story and fortunately there were six more books in the series already available so I binged and read all seven in one sitting. I loved it! I'm a little fickle about reviewing a 'new to me' author so I decided to hold off on leaving a review until I had a better grasp of the story and the author's talent but now after having read the first eight books, I can honestly state that I'm very impressed with Farrady's skill as a writer. Some people are born with a natural innate ability as a storyteller and Farrady seems to be abundantly blessed with this gift. I was also impressed by her language skills. This story is beautifully written with good grammar and spelling, great sentence structure, good punctuation and exceptional vocabulary/word skills. The narrative is written in the third person with alternating his and her points of view. The dialogue is seductive, well executed and flows effortlessly. But it's the magnificent cast of well developed characters that will draw you in and steal your heart. The interaction and sexual chemistry between the male and female protagonists is so darn hot, it sizzles! I know this breakdown of the story may sound pretty boring but it takes all of these elements to craft a great book rather than just a good book. I'm not a professional reviewer but I do know what I like, what I love and what I don't, and I truly love this story. Satin Vengeance is the fifth release in The Alpha Billionaire's Revenge and believe me when I say, it is definitely a dark romance as the title states and not for the meek of heart but if you love a steamy, seductive read filled to the brim with danger, drama, blackmail, suspense,revenge, erotic domination and dreamy sex, then you will love this story! Handsome billionaire Jonas Westerling has everything wealth could offer - money, clothes, real estate, an endless string of women vying for his attention but there's still one thing he wants more life itself. Jonas Westerling wants revenge and he's determined to have it. He's been planning it for 10 long years and he will not be denied. An unknown young woman almost destroyed his fourteen year old brother, ruining any chance for a normal future, and she must suffer! He's been searching for ten long years and he's finally found her. Now she will pay - not with money for she has none but he wants something even more valuable - the unconditional surrender of her body and her will. He's going to break her and when he's finished using her, he'll toss her away like the garbage she is. Or will he??? Timid, naive Linnea Melbourne has had very little experience with men, sex and life in general. She's definitely not a social butterfly and only wants to finish her schooling, find a good job and be left alone. But when she's literally abducted and forced to meet the wealthy billionaire Jonas Westerling, she has no idea what's happening or why - until she realizes that he has obviously mistaken her for her twin. She's immediately drawn to the handsome, dark, brooding and often cruel businessman but how can you be attracted to someone who wants to destroy you? Someone you know you should hate??? And how can she prevent him from discovering that the person he seeks is not her but actually her twin sister? Well, that's quite the quandary, isn't it??? One that may put Linnea in harm's way. Unfortunately Jonas Westerling is a man with enemies who have now become a threat to Linnea's safety - enemies who now see Linnea as the perfect means to destroy Jonas Westerling. Oh my! No spoilers from me but I will say this...Handsome and sometimes cruel billionaire intent on revenge-check! Beautiful young woman determined to protect her sister regardless of the cost-check! Danger, drama, lies, blackmail, mystery, suspense and intrigue-check! Heated attraction, fiery passion, arousing domination, steamy sex and dreamy romance-you bet! That and a whole lot more! Fabulous entertainment and an awesome read!
I usually stay well away from serial reads, but this was sent to me to review by the author and well, I'm glad she sent it!
What I liked the most about Revenge Volume 1, is the easy to fall into read. I didn't agree with all the prose as in how they act together outside of having sex, Linnea wound me up a few times as did Jonas but for all intent and purposes this is good easy reading. I liked Linnea for the most part, I didn't like how easily she went into the agreement with Jonas. I prefer Jonas out of the two, his vernacular for the most part was deffo dominant and assertive, but I wanted him do follow through with his 'punishments', this could be a darker read and very satisfying if gone down that route. For instance when he let her go from the office the first time, he should have stood his ground. As it stands I don't see much in the way of him digging deep to forgive Linnea all the while he doesn't know the truth, he acts very much concerned about her welfare. But I do really like him.
I cannot fault the explosive sex, I did do a little sigh with the toy play at the dinner, I feel that's been done so many times now it's a tad 'old hat.' I did feel a connection with their chemistry, I don't feel they would have fallen for each other in two days though, or her, especially under the circumstances, but this is fiction so I'm cool that anything goes.
I am really intrigued to see what happens in volume 2, I am glad I have that on kindle already to dive straight into. I really like reads like this, it's not exactly a page turner it's just like good easy listening music, fun to read and easy to digest.
I received this to review and I thank Deana for introducing me to her work, I like discovering new talent and she definitely has talent to spin a good story. My reviews are my own and 100% honest.
The Alpha Billionaire’s Revenge volume one containing book 1 through 5 from His Vengeance series by Deana Farrady.
Billionaire Jonas Westerling has everything you can think of from money to a brilliant mind, but he’s also known for his protectiveness when his family is concerned. But, right now this billionaire has a craving…for revenge.
Linnea Melbourne is alone in this world. No family, lovers or friends to keep her company. She’s gotten used to the isolation and not being on anyones radar, but that’s about to change when Jonas makes his move…
Will Linnea be able to get into the billionaire’s mind to prove her innocence before he destroys her completely?
Deana Farrady is a new author for me and I have to say that I really enjoyed The Alpha Billionaire’s Revenge. This story has it all; from black mail and suspense to erotic scenes with sweet manipulation. After 10 years of searching, Jonas is able to set his plans in motion and oh does he! This man oozes charisma, but underneath all that, his dark side is ready to play. Linnea on the other hand gets to explore a whole new side of her with the guidance of Jonas, but when she finds out about his revenge plan…will she even be able to leave or will she stick by his side?
I wish I could say more, but that’s all. I would highly recommend this book for those who enjoy dark erotic romances. This is not for the faint of heart. (Side Note: Vol 1. does end in a cliffhanger.)
Review on Behalf of Once Upon An Alpha **ARC for Honest Review**
Chicago, IL. East Lake Shore Drive. What did Jonas Westerling (billionaire tech mogul) discuss with Linnea Melbourne (28, Irish)? He knew her past, what options did he give her?
Warning: This book is for adults only & contains extreme violent or graphic adult content or profanity &/or sexually explicit scenarios. It may be offensive to some readers.
I did not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing this book. While I receive free books from publishers & authors, I am under no obligation to write a positive review. Only an honest one.
A very awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A fairly well written erotic book. It wasn’t always very easy for me to read/follow from start/finish, but never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters to keep track of. It might make another great erotic movie, or better yet a paid-per-view mini TV series. To be continued. Not a whole lot to the story content for me, so I will only rate it at 3/5 stars.
Thank you for the free Eileen Cruz Coleman; Amazon Digital Services LLC; book Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
How far would you go take revenge on someone who hurt your family? Jonas Westerling, self made billionaire, is determined to go as far as it takes to avenge the wrong done to his brother. Linnea Melbourne has lived her life playing it safe thanks to a twin sister who was the complete opposite by delving into drugs. Now she finds herself, after being sequestered, in front of a man with the means to destroy her family. This is how this serial begins. Page by page the story develops and secrets are revealed. Jonas comes off in the beginning as cold and calculating. Slowly you begin to see the many layers behind the man. Linnea is determined to protect her sister but being with Jonas forces her to explore aspects of her life choices and unleashes her inner sensuality. Their story starts off dark. I happen to like dark. This is a book for a rainy day while you sit in your favorite reading spot and your favorite hot beverage (coffee for me) in hand. Looking forward to reading volume two.
I really wanted to enjoy this story (warning, despite being 5 books, it is not the whole story). But two things detracted far too much to forgive:
The main character, Jonas, is petty and cruel in ways that strain credulity. The female lead, Linnea, is not a heroine, more like a self-debasing doormat who accepts his "punishments" for her own reasons.
Secondly, the writing is uneven, there is no other way to say it. Stilted dialogue and overworked descriptions that go nowhere.
Likely some enjoy the cruelty and debasement. I simply do not.
Not a page turner but still nicely paced. Everything occurs in less than 72 hours. No buildup. I like the tension. I enjoy the drama. I just want writers to be counselled on their use of time. Given time this author has potential.
HOT!!!! Jonas is disturbingly Hot and kept intrigued through the entire box set. I can't to find out what he'll do once he finds out the he's been taking his revenge out on the wrong sister. Truly a worth while read!
Okay so I have to start by saying that I'm disappointed by how the book ended. I'm happy that I can immediately start reading the second book. So far it good and I hope that it have a happy ending.
Warning: very explicit sex scenes. Jonas pushes Linnea past all sexual borders she believes she has. Everything is not exactly as it seems. To trust or not to trust? Sizzling hot sex scenes. Jonas is demanding. Linnea is infuriated, stimulated, coddled, but never bored.
Plot moves along at a brisk pace...a lot of talking and resolving matters in the midst of all that sex. Hero is SICKENINGLY soppy sappy sweet...so sweet, I think I got tooth rot. YES!
Deliciously Dark and Addicting i Loved it ❤️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 big stars This is my first book by Deans Farrady and I loved it. The story was not only well written but very compelling with lots of twists and turns. This is quite a dark story and Jonas has been plotting his revenge on Linnea for a long time. He had his men drag her to his office and tells her he has decided she'll pay her debt by being his sex slave basically and she agrees, even though we know she is inn0cent in order to protect her twin. The sex between the two is so,e of the hottest scenes I have ever read. I couldn't put it down. The characters were meticulously thought out and the story flowed so easily before I knew it I was done part 1. Absolutely recommend, 5 big stars
I like Jonas but I hate him too. I was internally screaming the whole time because he didn't know it was her sister. It was killing me. KILLING ME. The whole time she didn't tell him was ridiculous. Their relationship was sexy and fun and I can't wait to read the next one. Hoping he figures it out soon!
Not impressed. Way too many graphic sex scenes that were more porn than steamy, sexy and totally not romantic. Ended in a cliffhanger and I'm not tempted to buy the next book.
Yep, five hot stars for this erotic adventure. You'll experience many emotions throughout the trials between Jonas and Linnea. You won't know how to feel by the end.