This was an ok book, I’ve read worse, & was able to at least finish it. But it definitely could have been better if it went thru editing/beta readers again (if it went thru them to begin with, if it did, the author needs a new editor!). There were a lot of misspellings, words placed out of order, wrong words used, sentences that didn’t make sense, odd word phrasing, conflicting statements from one chapter to the next, etc. This was a purchase, so is published, which makes me not be able to overlook that.
The plot was totally predictable; it was like driving by a car wreck & can’t look away, that’s not always a bad thing for light reading. The flow was good & the world building was good. The ending & epilogue felt rushed. There were a lot of un-answered questions to events /things that happened in the story. The characters of Aubrey & Isaac are ok but not really developed, almost one dimensional & never really have any growth. Aubrey is a bit of a doormat in my opinion, & Isaac is just odd. The sex scenes were rather bland; I skipped thru a few paragraphs because it was just blah. Not sure the love between them is believable, as it’s mostly a lust fueled chemistry type relationship, with a side of bad family history for them both. There is a HEA, which is always appreciated.
*Spoilers*
How could Aubrey be so stupid as to be best friends with Chloe, being put down since childhood by Chloe? So after Chloe did what she did, did Aubrey pick up with her blog again to try to salvage it, or just quit on it since she is no longer reading books, it’s never really mentioned again? The part about the police letting her back into the house that same night of her aunt’s murder didn’t make sense, it would have been considered a crime scene & since the aunt was murdered IN the house, not sure any normal/sane person would have been comfortable staying in the house until the person who murdered the aunt was caught or identified. What happened to the jewelry (Aubrey’s mother’s rings that they had resized for Aubrey) that her aunt was murdered over, since he came back looking for them again when he attacked Aubrey? It’s never mentioned again, other than she inherits a bunch of jewelry from her aunt. Not sure how she healed by sex with Isaac- from the murder of her family & from her being assaulted in her own home, but I guess that’s just me. Not sure how his career would have tanked for being found out as “Baby Charlie”, that just never felt legit, I would think it would help his career, after all the sympathy it would generate- the famous always say there is no bad press. What kind of jerk (Isaac) doesn’t even ask her side of things to find out if it was her that out-ed his Baby Charlie story?! (She was in Paris with him when it happened) How could he let something that stupid influence his relationship with her? I wouldn’t have wanted him back over that. Not sure what to make of his family making up at the end, how convenient for them to come around after a FEW years -a month before their baby is due. It felt wrong; I wouldn’t have forgiven them for hurting Isaac like that, I’d have given in to pregnancy hormones & had a fit.