A complete BWAM story, brought to you by Kelly Cole of BWWM Club. When Shonelle's brother dies, she sinks into depression. But when she meets her brother's best friend John at the funeral, they find comfort in one another after such a huge loss. Soon, they find themselves undeniably attracted to each other too. But their budding love is threatened when Shonelle gets a mysterious call, saying her brother was mixed up in a shady underworld and owes big money to loan sharks. Shonelle and John find themselves in the loan shark's den, trying to find out the truth. Will Shonelle and John's new love be destroyed as they try to unravel the past? Or will they be able to clear her brother's name and start a fresh as a new family? Find out in this sexy and gripping romance by Kelly Cole of the respected BWWM Club. Suitable for over 18s only due to sex scenes guaranteed to get your pulse racing.
idea was a good one. a fine story got waylaid by overblown and flowery speech. say it once and say it well - repetition is not a writer's friend. i found myself falling back into teacher mode and grading this manuscript. i give it a c plus for creativity and effort.
The book was so slow that it was actually pretty boring. I was hoping it would pick up some but it didn't, so I skipped several chapters and went to the end.
The plot and story was good. The style of the writing was not to my liking. It was more narrative and repeated phrases too many times. The sex was meant to be loving but they use coarse language and certain descriptive words that me shake my head and laugh. Grammar and idealism a little to hard to fully believe. 2.5 stars.
Barely started the book before I put it away. I can't force myself to read something so repetitive and too wordy. Flowery descriptions have a place but with this writing style it just seems silly and unnecessary.