Very “clinical” and poorly written, had a lot of potential but fell VERY short!
Man did this storyline have potential! But, oh BOY, did it fall short!!! It is very clinically written and even goes so far as to, repeatedly, use the word penis, anus and COLON while in the depths of the “love scene”! The author also repeatedly used the characters names instead of “he” or “him” which got incredibly redundant and downright ANNOYING! I do wish the author was more organic in their writing because there was so much potential but it fell so very flat! I really wanted to like this navela on its concept alone but the clinical writing just ruined it and I will NOT be reading the second half even though it is advertised as a free download. I just can’t bring myself to go through that again! Reading this book was downright TEDIOUS and reading should be anything BUT tedious!