This wasn't bad per se, but especially the first part took ages to get going. And I just don't like her uke all that much, I have realized; they tend to be whiny and tsuntsun and the same time... this wasn't completely bad and definitely had its moments but I would be lying if I said I liked it, so "okay" it is.
(Possible bonus point for never before seen sex kink maybe although it was rather weird. )