It really pains me to rate this one star, but anything more would be dishonest. I've been a big fan of Kim Harrison and I've read the Hollows series as well as her YA trilogy. Even though a lot of her long time fans were critical of The Drafter, something about the book still interested me enough that before reading The Operator, I reread The Drafter, huge plotholes and all.
I gave The Drafter a 4 star rating after I read it when it first came out. In retrospect, the first part of The Drafter was what caught my attention, but about halfway through the book, the entire plotline just kind of devolved into random new characters showing up, nonsensical kind of decisions/actions, and really, stuff stopped making any sense whatsoever. This is why I reread The Drafter in the first place. I remembered that I lost track of what was going on toward the end of the book but after a reread, I can safely say that it's not because I wasn't paying attention or forgot, the pacing and plot is inherently flawed. However, I wanted to know whether Silas ever got back together with Peri (whether she ever remembers him & realizes what she/they sacrificed).
The Operator picks up where the Drafter left off, which goes a long way toward explaining why it took me over two WEEKS to finish this book when normally it would take a couple of days. In fact, I was so frustrated with this thing, I went and read three other books in the meantime. If it were any author other than Harrison, this would have been an DNF. As it was, I read and skimmed and read and just couldn't believe how much of a train wreck this novel was for me. Did I actually like Peri or Silas at one point? Did I ever care about what happens to Jack, Bill, or Opti? The nonsensical aspects of drafting+covert operations that were never really explained in The Drafter sort of blew up here.
So these drafters can rewrite time for about 45 seconds, at the cost of forgetting what happened/forgetting chunks of memory. I get that they can "erase" mistakes like getting shot, but I always had a hard time understanding why 45 seconds is all that crucial to super important world changing "Billion by 30" shady government activities and such. Still, at least I could see what The Drafter was trying to be or trying to do, and if I thought I missed it, the constant harping on corruption and corrupt agents/Opti/everything signals where the author's going.
In comparison, the Operator just went off on the deep end. What is this book supposed to be ABOUT? Book 1 was about Peri vs. Opti's corruption, which turned into Peri vs. herself in some aspects as she reclaims her memories/past and figures out what her real role is as a double agent sent to get proof of corruption. Ok. Book 2 is...Peri the addict who apparently has no real sense of self and may or may not be dumb enough to still trust Jack (or make constant excuses for him), may or may not be obsessed with luxury living enough to continue working for Bill, may or may not be hung up enough on remembering her drafts that she's willing to turn herself into a vegetable/addict to do it. It's never clear to me exactly why she's obsessed with remembering, because while Book 1 established that she lost big chunks of time, like months or years, it was artificially done to her in order to control her. Book 2 seems to establish that she only loses the time that she drafted, e.g. she comes out of a draft missing the last 45 seconds worth' of memory so she isn't entirely sure what is going on. But seriously, we're supposed to understand why Peri would risk completely insane or dying from addiction to recover 45 seconds of memory in a supposedly rarely occurring event? That seemed to be the whole plot of Book 2 in a nutshell. How can something with so much action feel so incredibly repetitive? It was just one mess after another.
I hated Jack and that translated back into irritation at Peri. Harmony was shaping up to be interesting but then she teamed up with Jack and disappeared toward the end, so I'm not sure what that was all about. This book would've had at least another star if Jack's totally unnecessary and frankly just irritating character wasn't in it.
I really tried to get into this series but after the chore it was to get through this book, I'm done with the series. I can't believe I'm saying that about a Harrison book but by the end, I realized I just don't care what happens to Peri.