Nicky What’s that sleek yuppie doing down here? And why does he keep staring at me? He’s so out of line if he thinks that he can win me over with his cocky attitude. However, it can’t hurt to have him pay for my drink, right? Or spend the night with him. Just once. But how am I supposed to ignore that fire he lit within me? He’s nothing like I expected. Turns out, he’s anything but normal, anything but boring. He gives me everything I need. But he expects a kind of commitment that has shown too much for others.
Evan Success, money, power. I have it all. Does that mean I have to hang out at cocktail parties with a bunch of wealthy narcissists? F*ck no. They bore the sh*t out of me. I just want to blow off some steam, relax among another crowd. But when I see her on the dancefloor, I’m quickly reminded of what I really want, what I need. A girl like her. Beautiful, strong-willed and offbeat. Nicky tries to fend me off with her sassy attitude, but her attempts are in vain. I can't wait to tame her, make her bend to my commands. I know she’ll love it.
This ** steamy Romance contains explicit BDSM scenes and is aimed at audiences 18+. It is a full length novel with no cliffhangers and a HEA ending. **
Undisclosed Desire has been previously published as a serial under the name His Unknown Side .
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In "Undisclosed Desire", we meet very Alpha, very Dominant Billionaire Evan Beckhart who meets his sub of his dreams, but winning her may be a bit of a challenge.
Nicky has talked her old college girlfriends into going to this hidden basement grunge club, but after an hour together, they have ditched her complaining all the way, right down to how she dances, but Nicky does not care she would have preferred to go out with her roommate Yuka. So Nicky just hits the dance floor harder throwing her whole body into the dance working up a sweat. Taking a break at the bar she catches the out of place yuppie " Evan", looking at her, but can not be bothered with him, not her type( for now). Evan has to have her, he moves in and tries to dance with her, but finds her leaving the dance floor so he Perseus her right outside and strikes up a conversation, or tries to anyway; eventually leaving it with him going for a snack and smoke at the place across the street with an offer for Nikky to join him. Nikky heads back in to the bar , but not before long curiosity gets the better of her. A smoke and a drink lead to a hot night at a hotel, somehow wanting to submit to this mans desireseven though she ksastrong do it on your own out of the bedroom it seems this mambas the power to bring out a submissive that's been hiding in her and deliver the most delicious sexual experience , leaving her wanting more.Evan very quickly puts the ball I. Her court and gives her a card with his number . When Nikky gets home and sits down for some coffee and a meal reading Yuka's gossip rag provided her more enlightened than she can handle; turns out her hook-up last night is a billionaire and she oddly resembles his last serious girlfreind. Leaving her questioning why he did not say anything to her, is she just going to his dirty little secret, does she even want to get involved with him and his dominance games, her independent, strong, snarky women says hell no, but her body is thrumming a different tune! Sooo, coffee together to talk about his undisclosed information leads to another round of submission and pleasure at his hotel room, but Nikkyngets another wake up call when leaving the hotel lands the. Smack in the middle of a paparazzi mob,one that Evan clearly was not expecting, however Evan tells her to keep her head down and get in the car he redrew for her while he goes to his. He promised to protect her if she was his, and he just did that, but their is still that niggling I the back of her mind that he may be embarrassed by her. When it turns out that a picture and a nasty caption turn up,and she is being noticed at her job, suddenly this man who said he would protect her if she was his is no were to be reached! Evan is livid, livid at his Pr manager who did not prevent that photo and nasty article from being printed and livid because he is being advised to stay away fro. Nikky, to let o tie down for a few months then keep it secret, livid because of five missed calls for. Nikky and Two very upset voicemails and he feels imptant to do anything. His desire to keep her safe finally wins out, however it may be too little , too late. What will Evan do? Will Nikky let him back in? Will she forgive him? Will she submit?
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Undisclosed Desire Linnea May Author review 4 billionaire stars
I love a good billionaire story, and so many are all the same these days. Poor girl, meets high flying billionaire, they fall in love and live happily ever after. Undisclosed Desire is like this but with a small difference. See super wealthy Evan Beckhart, heads unto grunge dance club he is taken by a gorgeous woman with her cheap beer, smudged makeup and don’t give a crap attitude towards other danced there.
After being dumped by her friends , Nicky is happily dancing until she bumps literally into Mr mysterious from the bar earlier. Although he does not fit in, in his suit pants and dress shirt, he sets his sights on her and that is that.... You see, this is dominant Evan, and not one for not getting his own way, he follows Nicky outside with a invitation for a drink and talk.... yep, that’s it.
It isn’t long before the pair are heading to a hotel for a get together of a different kind. But Nicky has no idea of who she is literally jumping into bed with. Evan is big time. Wealth and paparazzi fodder it isn’t long before Nicky’s non-worth is laid bare for the world to see. The poor waitress dating a millionaire, is left high and dry by the one man she thought she could trust.
Evan finds himself stuck between his wealthy world, business and publicist keeping them apart, but his heart and want for his Submissive is to strong. He will win her back, but not before falling for charms. Something about Nicky really brings him to his dominant knees. He’ll work hard for this woman who enamoured him on 1st sight.
I enjoyed this read, but my only beef is that I wanted more. It seemed like it wad cruising along, and I’m checking my progress and seeing so much more to come... but it got the good bit, then it was epilogue time. But if that is the only complaint, I’ll class this one great.
Cliche'. Maybe. To date I have fallen in love with the writings of Ms. May. The ones I've read are sweet, with a touch of erotic romance. Just the type of dream nearly every women might dream of. Love the escape from reality!
I chose to read and review this book. I liked the plot. I liked how the characters met and interact together. It is sweet how they come together and everything is well-written and developed
I received this ARC book from the Author in exchange for my honest review.
W...O...W!!!!! So hot and so dark and so awesome!!!
Nicky is a girl who can be snarky and sarcastic, but really has never been given the chance to be treated like a treasure. She is out with her friends, and she is dancing (which embarrasses her friends and causes them all to leave, but she stays....and you need to know that we are ECSTATIC that she stays at the club) She lets herself get lost in the moment in the music. She knows she isn't the greatest dancer by far, but she is in her own element. She stops to get a drink at the bar. Then she notices the odd man in a suit (when grungy, techno college kids are hanging out - yep sticks out like a sore thumb) who orders the same beer she does. She also notices him seeing her check him out, so she goes back to dancing.
Evan is a man who is a self made billionaire. He came to this club to get away from all the fake, snobby people he was just around where he was. He is a confident man, a man who knows what he wants and gets what he wants. He knows what to look for in regards to what he is needing and looking for. Lo and behold he spots this girl dancing by herself, being free of thought and just being in the moment. He knows what he is, and feels that he will have NO issues making her his....she just doesn't know it yet.
He continues to watch the "crazy dancing" girl on the dance floor. He is totally intrigues with her, can't look away....drawn to her. So, he starts to get out on the dance floor to get closer to her, and she bumps into someone and loses her balance. Evan is there to help. She is 100% against "his type" of person. She has her mind set against people that look like him (meaning absorbed with their jobs, their status, their way of looking and living life) He may be that on the outside and mindset is a little like that, but he also is sure Nicky is exactly what he is hoping for. Can he convince her? Will she freak out once she knows? Does he tell her at all? Does she want what he is offering?
Once he catches her from falling after being bumped into, she rushes outside. There is something so wrong with her conflicting thoughts, she is completely anti whatever type of man he looks to be, and yet when they make eye contact she is unable to look away and there is a sense of being drawn into him, and that freaks her out. He goes outside looking for her. He knows she will put up guards and fight a little, that is a perfect challenge for him, and again just what he is hoping to have, only she is unaware of it yet. She puts on her best tough girl attitude, but he sees right through it. He sees what is hoping will lead to the best thing he has ever had, and hoping she will want it as badly as he does.
He asks her to put aside her prejudices of him and meet him at the bar across the street, after she goes back in to dance. She starts with no but is unable to unwrap him from her thoughts, and across the street to meet him she goes. They talk, small talk mostly with a bit of her snarky attitude and it progressively moves forward from there. Does he come clean with her about what he likes and what he is? Does she approve or even reciprocate his dark side? Is this something she is willing to go along with? Does she like it too? Can they build on this together and have a happy ever after?
Without giving anything away by telling you more than I should (and spoil it for you) I can say that there are little twists and turns in their journey, some are expected and some are going to be like a roller coaster. You will definitely need to read this book to see what happens, how things turn out. All I can say is I really had hoped throughout this entire book that Evan would have been real and I was Nicky (she is SOOOO lucky)....seriously too delicious.
Main Character’s Descriptions: Nicky: Different from her friends. Naturally sassy but submissive in the bedroom especially for evan. Evan: Billionaire, In his most recent relationship he was left because of how he is. He is looking for a submissive to be his and only his.
Summary paragraph: Light Dom/Sub Scenes.
Nicky Busy but in her own way. Evan a Dom in every aspect of his life he wants a sub to be his for a while. Evans past comes back to haunt his new d/s relationship.
Will they let it get in the way or will they get through it all.
What the reviewer liked: The way the story unfolded was very good
Favorite Quotes: “Right now, I an in charge. At his mercy, of course. But still I am the one who is on the giving side. And I am enjoying it far too much.”
Who I would recommend this book to: Erotic., Dom/Sub Readers. Or someone looking to break into the BDSM erotic books but wants an easy way in
3.5 Stars! Nicky goes to a grunge club with some friends to dance. When it turns out to be to grungy for her friends, she stays to dance. When she sees a man over-dressed for the club she thinks he must be in the wrong place. She is instantly attracted to him but she doesn't like the yuppy type. So she goes back to dancing. Evan is tired of his life, he ends up at a grunge club and notices a beauty on the dance floor. He has to have her and Evan is the type to get what he wants. He meets her and wants to spend more time with her. Can he show her what he wants without scaring her off? Will Nicky stick around when she learns who he really is? I liked this story but it seemed at times to be slow and lacking some excitement. I think they needed more time outside of the bedroom to help the relationship grow. It seemed to me they were good together even when they were just talking. **A free copy provided by the author in exchange for my homes review**
I received this book as an ARC for a honest review. Evan is a Dom. He likes his relationships to be Don/Sub or nothing. Nicky is a free spirit. Evan is a self made billionaire. He life was not easy growing up. Nicky works 2 jobs. She doesn't believe in 9 to 5 work hours. Oh and she hate rich people. They have a chance meeting in a bar on a dance floor and Evan has to have her. He believes he has found the perfect Sub. But Nicky is sassy and spunky. Evan does bring her into his world as his Sub but some of the things that he did I was not so sure about. But most of their story is HOT! Both Evan and Nicky have their own past secrets. But they are great together. I recommend this book to EVERYONE!!!
Nicky is floundering, struggling to decide what she really wants to do with her life, what is her passion. She meets Evan at a dance club, a suit, and she is startled by her attraction to him. Evan goes after what he wants and Nicky presents a carefree, strong woman that he wants to explore. When he approaches Nicky, she is shocked, he is so not her type yet, she feels a pull she can’t describe. After a night of hot erotic sex, will these two come back for more? Evan leaves it to Nicky to contact him, he is a Dom looking for a sub and he senses she will be a perfect fit for him. Will Nicky be able to embrace this side to herself? Can she let go of the control she uses as her armor to get through life? Jump in for a sexy, hot, erotic journey. I was given a copy for an honest review.
He is looking for a sub to meet his needs. She is just looking for some fun. When these two meet, sparks fly.
These are two very different people. He is living a wealthy lifestyle and loves to be in control. He meets her and won't take no for an answer. He thinks he has found the perfect sub. She doesn't want to focus on work and does what she needs to make a living. She is not looking for someone as complicated as him but the attraction is very strong.
It has a good storyline and held my attention. The characters have great chemistry. He has secrets that complicate the situation and keep it interesting.
Evan and Nicky are hot! They meet at a hipster grunge club one night and have a seriously sexy one night stand. Nicky is a free spirited woman who seems to automatically dislike the rich lifestyle that she has no idea Evan is a part of. She also has no idea she caught Evan's eye because she bears a strong resemblance to his ex. That is, she has no idea of these things until the next morning when she sees an article about the rich billionaire accompanying a picture of him with his ex.
Undisclosed desire is sexy and sweet, and the passion is sizzling and includes some nice BDSM scenes. If you have any interest in this, give it a read!
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.....
Wow! This is one is little short for my taste. I wanted more of Nicky and Evan! It was kind of rushed as well. I did love the plot and it flowed smoothly as well as kept me interested. I wanted a little more of the back story for both characters. I loved the chemistry between Nicky and Evan too! While there was one aspect of the story I didn't like nor cared for ( I won't say what it was - most of you probably will know when you read that part), it didn't stop me from enjoying this story. This is another great read from Linnea May!
Undisclosed Desire is a hot, quick read! Evan is dominant in his personal life and he finds the perfect submissive in Nicky. She is reserved about some things he wants her to do and do to her, but she likes Evan and the way he makes her feel. If you're into BDSM then this is the book for you. Hot scenes and a happy ending! I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
I really liked this story. The heroin is fun, and quirky, and not afraid to say it like she sees it. The hero is your typical billionaire, hard working and arrogant. Somehow these two make a great couple. The budding romance is wonderful. I would have like to have read more about this couple. The end came way too soon.
Undisclosed Desire is a steamy D/s romance. Evan is the billionaire dom who thinks Nicky is perfect for him. Nicky has reservations at first but is surprised to find she has a submissive side and Evan is everything she never knew she needed. Despite the steam this story is pretty tame and still very enjoyable.
I received a free copy of this book in return for an honest review.
I enjoyed this one. When Nicky meets Evan the strong connection they feel is not what she expected. Can two people from two different worlds have a future? How serious could it be? If you like a steamy story with an alpha male you will enjoy this one. My only issue is I felt the ending was rushed. Would not have minded seeing a little further into their relationship.
I received this ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Nicky is a free spirit, she does things her own way. She isn't much of a dancer but when Evan sees her on the dance floor he is determined to have her as his sub. Nicky and Evan are sexy well written characters that discover the importance of sharing the past. Sizzling hot read, I thought it was fantastic!
Nicky is a fun loving free spirit when she meets Evan he looked totally out of place. As soon as Evan see Nicky he wants her but what will happen when Nicky learns who he is and what he wants. This was an okay read for me, felt a bit rushed. Would have liked some more character development and more story. Entertaining read.
Got this in exchange for an honest review. And holy hot cakes. This is one hot, intense story between Nicky & Evan. I instantly like Nicky & wish I could be a bit more like her in some ways. This book reminds a little bit of my fav book; 50 shades of grey. Great book!!!!
I received this book for an honest review. Nicky saw Ethan and knew he didn't belong. Ethan saw Nicky and knew he had to have her. lovely story. Ending seemed rushed.