Oh boy, where to start? At the beginning? Sure.
To start off, the hook at the prologue of the book was pretty awful. The whole concept of sentience arising out of nothing is interesting, but the author somehow managed to make it utterly confusing and boring. Instead of introducing us to the world, the "visions" left me feeling like this is set in a world that I should already know about.
So, in the first chapter, the unknown sentience now has a body, and boy is she hot. I know that she's hot, because the man who brought her into being is completely and utterly entranced by her good looks, even though he totally didn't mean to create a beautiful naked lady in his study. I can't roll my eyes hard enough.
She's beautiful, and has a childlike innocence that makes Blaise's attraction kind of creepy, even though she's also totally attracted to him too. To make things worse, he just happens to have some gorgeous clothing that somehow fits her perfectly, left behind by his ex-fiancee.
Now, the book starts to make even less sense. Apparently the world is some sort of computer program, and their "magic" is them manipulating it with code. Gala is like the magic version of a really advanced AI. But somehow not everybody can learn how to program this magical computer world, and they're reduced to peasants. There's also been a drought that's been making things tough, even though there's no explanation as to why the sorcerers can't just program it away, aside from a vague statement of "it's too difficult", though, as far as I know, none of them have actually tried it.
This is a common theme throughout the book. All the supposedly powerful characters are too defeatist to even attempt to do anything cool. We get a few brief bits of flashy spells here and there, but it's just window dressing to assure us that the sorcerers really can do magic.
Except for Gala, who is totally beautiful and perfect in every way, because she is the incarnation of whatever computer program generated this world. She's an incredibly boring character, who really has no depth to her character progression. She only gets more awesome, instead of actually developing believable character traits. She would have made a better robot, but that would have nuked the flimsy romance that the author seemed hell-bent on forcing into this godforsaken story.
Oh, and Blaise's ex-girlfriend finds out about Gala, and throws a massive bitch-fit. Turns out that this world has a version of the story of Frankenstein, and Augusta is terrified of Gala, and jealous that Blaise fell in love with her. So logically, she freaks out and tries to kill Blaise while he's trying to reassure her that the robot-woman isn't dangerous. Obviously the version of Frankenstein she read missed the bit where it was everyone's fear of the monster that made it dangerous.
So, then, a bunch of stuff happens where Gala gets even more perfect than before, and she's off taming lions and shit. Again, let me roll my eyes.
Next up, Augusta and her totally buff army-guy lover decide to kill Gala, even though she's totally awesome and they're afraid of her. So they confront her, and she totally awesomes all over the place, and awesomes most of them to death. Then she heals everyone, ends the drought, and everyone flies off into parts unknown to have their happily-ever-after. Except there's somehow a sequel, so I'm guessing they get found by the guys Gala healed, and we have to rehash all of this again.
Seriously, this book was shit. If I wasn't intending to waste a bunch of time, I wouldn't have finished it.