It wasn’t horrible. I liked how it began and the action part of it where they were trying to take out the bad guy. Some of it was confusing and the bad guy just kind of gave up and killed himself and they got rescued. It was kind of weird how it just fizzled out after all he did and the fact that he killed 2 passengers for no reason. But I was able to suspend reality and just go with it.
Once the danger was over, their relationship moved super fast into sexual territory and then…it just ended. It was so jarring!
The book takes place over a few days. One day on the boat then a few days in the hospital which is mostly glossed over. Then she goes to his house, they have sex, take down another bad guy who comes after them, kiss some more and then…it’s over. Like, what?? That’s all we get of their “relationship?”
The whole reason they met in the first place is because she saved his daughter from being on the ferry which most likely would have ended with her being killed. The daughter and the daughter’s mother are so grateful to the h and want the H to go and save her now that she’s a hostage on the boat, so he does. But we never get to see the h meet the daughter or the mother. We never see if there is any kind of bond made. We don’t get to see anything! If this had been advertised as an action type book, ok I can deal with it. But it’s supposed to be a romance and we don’t get any kind of closure.
I wouldn’t even call this a HFN because hell, maybe they didn’t even last for a week after this. There are no I love you’s, no relationship development, nothing. You can sign up to get an epilogue and normally I don’t mind signing up for bonus content, but I didn’t even bother with this one. I shouldn’t have to jump through hoops to get the end of the damn book.
There were some continuity errors that annoyed me. The captain of the ferry had white hair and reminded her of Santa clause, then a few chapters later he had sweat dripping from his bald head. She used her cardigan to stop the H’s bleeding and since it was soaked in blood, she threw it under the boat’s helm. Then a few chapters later she’s putting a gun in the pocket of her cardigan. I really don’t understand how a book can go through edits, beta readers, arc readers, etc and still come out with these dumb errors.
Overall it had a lot of potential but ended up being a disappointment. I’d say it’s probably more of a 2.5 star read but I’ll round up because I’ve read way worse and I sure couldn’t do better. At the beginning of the book I thought I’d be continuing with the series but now I’m not going to because I don’t see the point. If I wanted to read action books, that’s what I’d read. I don’t want to invest all that time into reading something that only has a blip of unfinished romance.
Safety: The H is with a ONS at the beginning of the book. He’s clearly a manwhore pig after his marriage failed. There are no details and the sex isn’t on page. Since it was before he knew the h existed it didn’t bother me. The h has had a recent bad breakup and had a run in with her ex on her way to the ferry but she just kind of brushes him off so no real drama. Other than that, no OW/OM drama.