I was glad this was a short book because within even the first two chapters I had serious questions.
A very nice police chief of a small town pulls Annie over for speeding, and nicely questions why she's in town. She wanted to see what the town was like, might even live there.
The next day she's employed as a fry-cook for the restaurant he frequents. He loves her twist on the BLT he ordered. This is their second meeting.... He knows nothing about her, but he's curious.
Then it gets strange.
She’s not under suspicion, he's just curious. So, when you’re curious about someone, you follow them, right? And if they go to a big city, say Atlanta, and she's invited into a private residence there, you stealthily follow her in there too, right? Um, no... And as you're passing through this person's house you see a man struggling with her, and they both fall on top of an end table... you automatically shoot at the man who fell with her, right? And at close range you miss so he skeedaddles it out of the house, right?
A police chief, or should I say, a NORMAL police chief would never have done anything like that. If he followed her, but stayed in the car (still weird), he would not have heard their struggle, and would have had no reason to enter. So for him to hear a struggle, he had to be in at least the next room. 🤨🙄
At the hospital later, when she regains consciousness, they both have questions. She asked how he knew she was there? His answer...He followed her. She didn’t even ask why. Even if someone did save my life, I’d still want to know what he was thinking following me into a private residence when there was nothing suspicious to pin on either of them. Just didn’t make sense.
Then he informs her he sent some officers to her apartment to pick up extra clothes. Her apartment? How does he know where she lives, and why didn’t he get permission to do so? After all, they've only met twice, aren’t friends, and cops don’t usually go into strangers' apartments to get their clothing.
There were more items that defied police procedure, but mostly it lacked essential detail to give it depth and intrigue.
Faith issues were the best part. Done well in conversations. Not preachy, just honest sharing.
Now, if the intended audience is a middle schooler, this would be a good book. At least a 4-star, as it was clean, not too gory (Annie witnessed her employer being shot point blank in the head.). And maybe a middle schooler wouldn’t note the weirdness.
I wish I could have enjoyed it more. It’s just not one that I wouldn't call it good at all....Yet...maybe with rewrites..(?)