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Revisions to the Truth #1
Birthrights
Civil war looms, defeated foes plot revenge, and an ancient deity schemes to extinguish all life. In this land where magic has faded into legend, the son of a street sweeper may hold the key to the fate of the realm.
The last in line of a disgraced family, Whym accepts an apprenticeship with a master seeker his parents fear and revile. He soon finds himself entangled in a web of treachery and on a perilous journey to locate a creature of myth and magic.
Meanwhile, Quint, the privileged son of a powerful religious leader, abandons his faith and family to join the fight against a corrupt council. As the adviser to a remote tribe in the Fringe, Quint must find within himself the wisdom and fortitude to save the Dragonborn from an invading army—and their own leaders.
Told in alternating perspectives against a backdrop of heightening civil unrest, Birthrights is a fantasy of magic, power, corruption, and coming of age—and the beginning of a saga certain to captivate epic fantasy fans.
The last in line of a disgraced family, Whym accepts an apprenticeship with a master seeker his parents fear and revile. He soon finds himself entangled in a web of treachery and on a perilous journey to locate a creature of myth and magic.
Meanwhile, Quint, the privileged son of a powerful religious leader, abandons his faith and family to join the fight against a corrupt council. As the adviser to a remote tribe in the Fringe, Quint must find within himself the wisdom and fortitude to save the Dragonborn from an invading army—and their own leaders.
Told in alternating perspectives against a backdrop of heightening civil unrest, Birthrights is a fantasy of magic, power, corruption, and coming of age—and the beginning of a saga certain to captivate epic fantasy fans.
552 pages, Paperback
First published June 6, 2017
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J. Kyle McNeal
1 book85 followersKyle grew up on the side of a mountain in Western North Carolina, far enough from neighbors that imagination was often his primary companionship. He’s been making up characters, worlds, and stories in his mind ever since. Now, after a business career that included a decade working in China, he’s putting those stories on paper.
From his home in Fort Mill, South Carolina, he merges the nuances of the real world with the magic of imagination and weaves stories to both entertain and provoke reflection.
From his home in Fort Mill, South Carolina, he merges the nuances of the real world with the magic of imagination and weaves stories to both entertain and provoke reflection.
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January 30, 2020
I got a galley for this from netgalley and only just got around to reading. I did really enjoy it however, much more than I would've expected to. It took me a little while to get into the book though. It does switch from character to character quite frequently and it takes a while to grasp the different cultural/faith aspects associated with the different characters. It can also make it quite annoying when one tries to get invested in the characters since you don't get to spend that much continuous time with the character. Also wasn't a fan of the excerpts from texts that were included in between different parts of the book, it was kind of annoying to go through and I also just didn't care that much. I do feel invested in Whym now though and probably will pick up any future books.
June 23, 2017
My full review can be found on United by Pop.
This is both a coming-of-age tale and a story that sits firmly in the adult fantasy genre. The topics discoursed often trespass on the potentially triggering, and maturity of the reader is advised before beginning this book. For this is a dark read, in the way that only the best of fantasies are!
One particularly recurrent topic, in the book, is that of faith. Each of the character’s individual beliefs are repeatedly tested and queried, and all they each thought of as the accepted truth is twisted and turned beyond all recognition. In this way, both characters and reader are invited to suspend belief and challenged to reconsider everything they thought they knew.
This corruption of the truth is duplicated in the politics of the lands. Again, the reader shares in the characters’ struggles as they each work to discover the meaning of the truth buried securely in the rife deception haunting every aspect of this story.
The astounding levels of political intrigue combined with the interesting central characters and the intricate world and personal histories, all combined to make this a complex yet alluring read. Whilst not initially immerse, due to the immensity of information, this is a solid first instalment in what is sure to be a highly renowned high fantasy series.
This is both a coming-of-age tale and a story that sits firmly in the adult fantasy genre. The topics discoursed often trespass on the potentially triggering, and maturity of the reader is advised before beginning this book. For this is a dark read, in the way that only the best of fantasies are!
One particularly recurrent topic, in the book, is that of faith. Each of the character’s individual beliefs are repeatedly tested and queried, and all they each thought of as the accepted truth is twisted and turned beyond all recognition. In this way, both characters and reader are invited to suspend belief and challenged to reconsider everything they thought they knew.
This corruption of the truth is duplicated in the politics of the lands. Again, the reader shares in the characters’ struggles as they each work to discover the meaning of the truth buried securely in the rife deception haunting every aspect of this story.
The astounding levels of political intrigue combined with the interesting central characters and the intricate world and personal histories, all combined to make this a complex yet alluring read. Whilst not initially immerse, due to the immensity of information, this is a solid first instalment in what is sure to be a highly renowned high fantasy series.
November 14, 2017
I want to give a huge thank you to J. Kyle McNeal for providing me with a copy of Birthrights in exchange for an honest review. I appreciate this opportunity. All views and opinions expressed are my own.
Synopsis: Whym and Quint are two completely different young men, from seperate social statuses, and with two different perspectives.The two young men will travel on their seperate journeys and the author takes us on an adventure that we won’t forget from all POVs.
Quint is kin to a very powerful and religious family. He has no responsibilities and is use to living under his family’s care. Suddenly, Quint is thrown into a whirlwind and has to become a leader and take care of the dragon people. With living such a sheltered life, will Quint be able to be the leader his people need?
Whym is the last heir from his disgraceful family and was backstabbed by his best friend Ather, resulting in tragedy and execution. Whym is the grandson of the executed leader of the Reformer’s Rebellion. He is suddenly given an opportunity of choosing to become the apprentice of Stern, who is a disgrace to the Ellenronds(Whym’s family).
Both Whym and Quint are at a lost by the expectations of their birthrights. They both make a choice to try and fulfill their destiny. During their travels, they are on the brink of a civil war and trying to decipher between the truth and many lies. With strain from their previous life experiences the two men and other characters have to face treachery, scandals, violence, battles, suffering and trying to stand for what they believe to be the right perspective of the truth.
The reader is taken on a journey through other multiple characters’ POV and how their beliefs are tested through chaos. The young men are effected by their family ties but must go through this journey to try and fulfill their destinies and figure out where they stand for the upcoming battle. The reader is taken on these two seperate journeys with these men but both face similar trials and adventures as they navigate to finding the truth. The characters are taken through a journey where their faith and personal beliefs are tested in the battle to find the truth. Will these two young men be able to come to the grips of realization that the truth is mostly a matter of perspective? Will Whym and Quint be able to fulfill their destinies? Read Birthrights by J. Kyle McNeal to find out!
Review: WOW! This was an epic fantasy lover’s dream book. I give this book 5 out of 5 magical stars! This book captivates it’s readers attention from the beginning and carries it through the end. When I started reading this book I was going through a hard time and felt that this book had the ability to take me to a fantasy land that was full of adventure to escape my reality!
This is the perfect first installment of the series and it is sure to grab the reader’s attention from the beginning. I will be waiting patientlyfor the next in the series! The more I read this book the more I wanted to turn pages quickly and when I got near the end I never wanted to stop! The characterization and point of views were very intriguing and captivating. The only thing is there is some intense violence so this might be a trigger for some. I am so glad that I chose to read this book and miss the fantasy land already! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!
Synopsis: Whym and Quint are two completely different young men, from seperate social statuses, and with two different perspectives.The two young men will travel on their seperate journeys and the author takes us on an adventure that we won’t forget from all POVs.
Quint is kin to a very powerful and religious family. He has no responsibilities and is use to living under his family’s care. Suddenly, Quint is thrown into a whirlwind and has to become a leader and take care of the dragon people. With living such a sheltered life, will Quint be able to be the leader his people need?
Whym is the last heir from his disgraceful family and was backstabbed by his best friend Ather, resulting in tragedy and execution. Whym is the grandson of the executed leader of the Reformer’s Rebellion. He is suddenly given an opportunity of choosing to become the apprentice of Stern, who is a disgrace to the Ellenronds(Whym’s family).
Both Whym and Quint are at a lost by the expectations of their birthrights. They both make a choice to try and fulfill their destiny. During their travels, they are on the brink of a civil war and trying to decipher between the truth and many lies. With strain from their previous life experiences the two men and other characters have to face treachery, scandals, violence, battles, suffering and trying to stand for what they believe to be the right perspective of the truth.
The reader is taken on a journey through other multiple characters’ POV and how their beliefs are tested through chaos. The young men are effected by their family ties but must go through this journey to try and fulfill their destinies and figure out where they stand for the upcoming battle. The reader is taken on these two seperate journeys with these men but both face similar trials and adventures as they navigate to finding the truth. The characters are taken through a journey where their faith and personal beliefs are tested in the battle to find the truth. Will these two young men be able to come to the grips of realization that the truth is mostly a matter of perspective? Will Whym and Quint be able to fulfill their destinies? Read Birthrights by J. Kyle McNeal to find out!
Review: WOW! This was an epic fantasy lover’s dream book. I give this book 5 out of 5 magical stars! This book captivates it’s readers attention from the beginning and carries it through the end. When I started reading this book I was going through a hard time and felt that this book had the ability to take me to a fantasy land that was full of adventure to escape my reality!
This is the perfect first installment of the series and it is sure to grab the reader’s attention from the beginning. I will be waiting patientlyfor the next in the series! The more I read this book the more I wanted to turn pages quickly and when I got near the end I never wanted to stop! The characterization and point of views were very intriguing and captivating. The only thing is there is some intense violence so this might be a trigger for some. I am so glad that I chose to read this book and miss the fantasy land already! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!
June 10, 2017
This full review can be viewed on my blog along with others: She's Going Book Crazy
I received this copy from the publisher via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
As the first installment in a four-part series, this book takes no attention away from each character and plot detail. This world is dense---and I mean that in a good way. In the first few pages, I could feel that much thought and time had been given to creating this world and developing its depth.
A coming of age tale, the issues each characters face include both young and old readers, but it falls comfortably into the Adult genre as it discusses several topics that require a mature countenance. Sexuality, brutality, war, rape, and other unpleasant topics are prevalent, and I wouldn't recommend this for a younger reader.
The novel reads like an epic fantasy, and draws from Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time series style. So, if you are a fan of that massive series, this may be another one for you to check out!
There are many characters in this book, with their own specific and influential purpose to the plot throughout the Lost Lands. At times, all of their purposes were perplexing. Written in the perspective of more than one character, we mainly follow the tale of Whym and Quint.
Whym is a boy who grew up in the poor village, where his father holds the "title" of being the degraded Rat Man. Eager to get away from humiliation and poverty, he accepts an apprenticeship when he comes of age, with a man who is intertwined with his own family's history in ways that are rather unpleasant.
Quint, the high-born son to a powerful religious family in the land, has a rather easy life laid out for him. When he is introduced to the tribes of the Dragonborn, his life plan is derailed as he is forced to reconsider his faith and the foundation of his existence.
In a way, each character is challenged to reconsider everything they know and believe. Everyone has a motive---some for selfish reasons---others for society's gain. But which side, and motive, is right? The consequence of war is death. Can those deaths be recompensed with their willing, or taken, sacrifice?
Seeing how this is a series, not every character's purpose, action, and intent are revealed. Especially with epic fantasies, the reader must be patient in order to grasp the full story, as they journey through the plot with the characters. I am curious to see how the tale will continue in Broken Oaths , scheduled to publish in 2018!
Violence: Quite a bit.
Sexual Content: Quite a bit, including a rape scene.
Vulargity: Some.
3 stars.
A big thanks to the publisher for providing me with a copy of this book!
I received this copy from the publisher via NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.
Wise men don't just see, they bend the future to their will.
As the first installment in a four-part series, this book takes no attention away from each character and plot detail. This world is dense---and I mean that in a good way. In the first few pages, I could feel that much thought and time had been given to creating this world and developing its depth.
A coming of age tale, the issues each characters face include both young and old readers, but it falls comfortably into the Adult genre as it discusses several topics that require a mature countenance. Sexuality, brutality, war, rape, and other unpleasant topics are prevalent, and I wouldn't recommend this for a younger reader.
The novel reads like an epic fantasy, and draws from Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time series style. So, if you are a fan of that massive series, this may be another one for you to check out!
There are many characters in this book, with their own specific and influential purpose to the plot throughout the Lost Lands. At times, all of their purposes were perplexing. Written in the perspective of more than one character, we mainly follow the tale of Whym and Quint.
Two birthrights. I could have been First Lord of the Council of Truth. But thanks to by great-grandfather, I'll be Rat Man of Riverbend.
Whym is a boy who grew up in the poor village, where his father holds the "title" of being the degraded Rat Man. Eager to get away from humiliation and poverty, he accepts an apprenticeship when he comes of age, with a man who is intertwined with his own family's history in ways that are rather unpleasant.
Quint, the high-born son to a powerful religious family in the land, has a rather easy life laid out for him. When he is introduced to the tribes of the Dragonborn, his life plan is derailed as he is forced to reconsider his faith and the foundation of his existence.
In a way, each character is challenged to reconsider everything they know and believe. Everyone has a motive---some for selfish reasons---others for society's gain. But which side, and motive, is right? The consequence of war is death. Can those deaths be recompensed with their willing, or taken, sacrifice?
Whym thought about the players in this evolving battle over the Lost Land---Lord Fen and the Council, Stern and the resistance, Salazar and the Faerie. There wasn't on side he felt he trusted. They were all hush with secret schemes and hidden agendas.
Seeing how this is a series, not every character's purpose, action, and intent are revealed. Especially with epic fantasies, the reader must be patient in order to grasp the full story, as they journey through the plot with the characters. I am curious to see how the tale will continue in Broken Oaths , scheduled to publish in 2018!
Violence: Quite a bit.
Sexual Content: Quite a bit, including a rape scene.
Vulargity: Some.
3 stars.
I'm tempered. I'm quenched. But I'm yet to comprehend. What master do I serve?
A big thanks to the publisher for providing me with a copy of this book!
June 9, 2017
Originally posted on: The Quirky Book Nerd
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review*
This was an extremely solid start to a very promising new fantasy series. Richly detailed, thought-provoking, and highly intriguing, I was very easily pulled into the narrative. Though it took a little while to fully immerse myself in the world and its history—the lore at the heart of every character’s life—once everything was set up, I felt completely absorbed into the words. There was something to find engaging about every moment of the narrative. This is intrinsically a coming of age story, but past that, you begin to see the intricate complexities of not only the characters but the of society they live in.
In this novel, we follow multiple characters’ lives as they weave together into one, captivating picture of the Lost Lands. Primarily, we follow two young men named Whym and Quint. Whym has reached the point of his life where he must begin an apprenticeship, and he is willing to do anything to break away from the poverty of his parents’ lives—even if it means working with a potentially dangerous man who has a past that connects darkly with his own. Quint comes from the most powerful religious family in the Lost Lands, his future laid out solidly before him. But when his long-held faith is ripped from him, he begins a journey to bring the truth to light.
Despite its initial appearance, this is not just a simple tale of two young people coming of age. It is a story about faith and beliefs. About corrupted politics and the inciting of a rebellion. About history and finding out where you fit into that which is being made around you. About discovering the meaning of truth and extracting it from the harshness of deceit. These characters are having their eyes opened to the society they are living in, one where the foundation is deception and the currency is lies.
As in most fantasy novels, there are always some aspects that take a little while to fully grasp. Building up the world, introducing the many characters, laying down the backstory and lore, all take a while to set up and for the reader to become involved in. It took me about a third of the novel before I felt I had truly gotten into things, so the beginning was a bit slow. However, this minor sluggishness in the beginning took the place of a short but massive and confusing information dump. The opening chapters are not fast-paced and packed with action, but are a gradual and meticulous composing of an intricate world.
I was a bit confused toward the start as I began piecing the backstory together but, at the same time, there was never a moment were I did not feel very engaged in the plot. The measured construction of each and every element ended up serving the narrative well. By using this method, McNeal allows the reader to take the time needed to become connected to the story and its expansive cast of characters. He also saves them from the confusion that can come with trying to convey too much information to quickly. As a whole, though the pace might feel slow, it establishes a solid foundation for the reader right from page one.
McNeal did a wonderful job building and growing his various, multi-dimensional characters, as well as giving them each a distinctive voice and personality. They were vivid and very easy to like or dislike, as the case may be. Whether hero or villain, each one was memorable and well-developed, which worked favorably with the regularly shifting perspectives of the narrative. I also highly enjoyed the dynamic and relationships between the various characters—they were very interesting to follow. I was particularly intrigued by the relationship between Whym and Kutan.
I have to admit, there were a few times where it was difficult to remember who a minor character was and what role they had played in previous chapters of the novel. This was due in part to their short appearances, stemming from the frequent jumps in perspective. Another issue that I had character-wise was that I never quite understood the concept of “the Rat-Man”. I also wish that there had been a bit more of a glimpse at some characters’ storylines, but I am hoping this will be rectified over the course of the rest of this series. All-in-all though, these were very small problems for me, and did not detract much from my overall reading experience.
McNeal’s writing in this novel was absolutely spectacular. The scope of this enchanting world that he has created leaves him endless opportunities to spin an absorbing story in his unique voice. I found him to be a brilliant storyteller; the prose was beautiful. His writing flowed incredibly well, and it was very easy to be carried away by his words. This was a strong debut novel, and I believe that he has shown a great talent and will go far in the future.
Overall, I had quite an enjoyable time delving into this tale. Once I began to feel involved in the characters’ lives, I found myself lost among the pages. This novel held so many of the elements that make me love the fantasy genre. I now feel extremely invested in these characters and their futures, so I am highly anticipating the upcoming installments in the series. If you are a fan of high fantasy or, especially, if you are just discovering the genre, this is a series that I would definitely recommend giving a try.
*I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review*
This was an extremely solid start to a very promising new fantasy series. Richly detailed, thought-provoking, and highly intriguing, I was very easily pulled into the narrative. Though it took a little while to fully immerse myself in the world and its history—the lore at the heart of every character’s life—once everything was set up, I felt completely absorbed into the words. There was something to find engaging about every moment of the narrative. This is intrinsically a coming of age story, but past that, you begin to see the intricate complexities of not only the characters but the of society they live in.
In this novel, we follow multiple characters’ lives as they weave together into one, captivating picture of the Lost Lands. Primarily, we follow two young men named Whym and Quint. Whym has reached the point of his life where he must begin an apprenticeship, and he is willing to do anything to break away from the poverty of his parents’ lives—even if it means working with a potentially dangerous man who has a past that connects darkly with his own. Quint comes from the most powerful religious family in the Lost Lands, his future laid out solidly before him. But when his long-held faith is ripped from him, he begins a journey to bring the truth to light.
Despite its initial appearance, this is not just a simple tale of two young people coming of age. It is a story about faith and beliefs. About corrupted politics and the inciting of a rebellion. About history and finding out where you fit into that which is being made around you. About discovering the meaning of truth and extracting it from the harshness of deceit. These characters are having their eyes opened to the society they are living in, one where the foundation is deception and the currency is lies.
As in most fantasy novels, there are always some aspects that take a little while to fully grasp. Building up the world, introducing the many characters, laying down the backstory and lore, all take a while to set up and for the reader to become involved in. It took me about a third of the novel before I felt I had truly gotten into things, so the beginning was a bit slow. However, this minor sluggishness in the beginning took the place of a short but massive and confusing information dump. The opening chapters are not fast-paced and packed with action, but are a gradual and meticulous composing of an intricate world.
I was a bit confused toward the start as I began piecing the backstory together but, at the same time, there was never a moment were I did not feel very engaged in the plot. The measured construction of each and every element ended up serving the narrative well. By using this method, McNeal allows the reader to take the time needed to become connected to the story and its expansive cast of characters. He also saves them from the confusion that can come with trying to convey too much information to quickly. As a whole, though the pace might feel slow, it establishes a solid foundation for the reader right from page one.
McNeal did a wonderful job building and growing his various, multi-dimensional characters, as well as giving them each a distinctive voice and personality. They were vivid and very easy to like or dislike, as the case may be. Whether hero or villain, each one was memorable and well-developed, which worked favorably with the regularly shifting perspectives of the narrative. I also highly enjoyed the dynamic and relationships between the various characters—they were very interesting to follow. I was particularly intrigued by the relationship between Whym and Kutan.
I have to admit, there were a few times where it was difficult to remember who a minor character was and what role they had played in previous chapters of the novel. This was due in part to their short appearances, stemming from the frequent jumps in perspective. Another issue that I had character-wise was that I never quite understood the concept of “the Rat-Man”. I also wish that there had been a bit more of a glimpse at some characters’ storylines, but I am hoping this will be rectified over the course of the rest of this series. All-in-all though, these were very small problems for me, and did not detract much from my overall reading experience.
McNeal’s writing in this novel was absolutely spectacular. The scope of this enchanting world that he has created leaves him endless opportunities to spin an absorbing story in his unique voice. I found him to be a brilliant storyteller; the prose was beautiful. His writing flowed incredibly well, and it was very easy to be carried away by his words. This was a strong debut novel, and I believe that he has shown a great talent and will go far in the future.
Overall, I had quite an enjoyable time delving into this tale. Once I began to feel involved in the characters’ lives, I found myself lost among the pages. This novel held so many of the elements that make me love the fantasy genre. I now feel extremely invested in these characters and their futures, so I am highly anticipating the upcoming installments in the series. If you are a fan of high fantasy or, especially, if you are just discovering the genre, this is a series that I would definitely recommend giving a try.
July 4, 2017
Two young men, one burdened with the stain of his family’s past, the other the son of a powerful religious leader must accept and grow into the roles life has given them. Will Wym, the descendant of a disgraced leader be the one to lead the people into their future? Can Quint become the advisor to the dragon people, of whom he knows little? Both young men will be called on to go above and beyond what any could expect from them and they must divine the truth from the lies that are freely tossed all around them. When the dust has settled, where will they stand?
Prepare to fall into another world, place and time where magic and myths from the past will become more than just stories and unlikely heroes must decide where they stand and how far they will go on the stage of life, death and civil war.
BIRTHRIGHTS by J. Kyle McNeal is an epic fantasy lover’s dream! Completely removing us from our world we are transported to a place and time where the citizens fear both the power of their leaders and the unknown beyond their front steps. Feel the grit of the streets, the chilling darkness in the hearts and minds of people in power and follow the tales of two young men destined to become a part of history. Watch as each learns lessons of life from treachery to trust and envision each scene as if you are there, sword in hand as faith is tested and truth is a commodity often obscured by the smoke of thinly veiled lies.
Colorful scenes, unique characters and an intriguing plot make for a firm foundation for a series that is worlds away.
I received this copy from Elevate Publishing in exchange for my honest review.
Series: Revisions to the Truth - Book 1
Publisher: Elevate Fiction (June 6, 2017)
Publication Date: June 6, 2017
Genre: Fantasy | Adult
Print Length: 552 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
Prepare to fall into another world, place and time where magic and myths from the past will become more than just stories and unlikely heroes must decide where they stand and how far they will go on the stage of life, death and civil war.
BIRTHRIGHTS by J. Kyle McNeal is an epic fantasy lover’s dream! Completely removing us from our world we are transported to a place and time where the citizens fear both the power of their leaders and the unknown beyond their front steps. Feel the grit of the streets, the chilling darkness in the hearts and minds of people in power and follow the tales of two young men destined to become a part of history. Watch as each learns lessons of life from treachery to trust and envision each scene as if you are there, sword in hand as faith is tested and truth is a commodity often obscured by the smoke of thinly veiled lies.
Colorful scenes, unique characters and an intriguing plot make for a firm foundation for a series that is worlds away.
I received this copy from Elevate Publishing in exchange for my honest review.
Series: Revisions to the Truth - Book 1
Publisher: Elevate Fiction (June 6, 2017)
Publication Date: June 6, 2017
Genre: Fantasy | Adult
Print Length: 552 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
February 23, 2017
This was such a good read. The story is richly detailed and intriguing. It's actually several stories interwoven. The characters are well written and have interesting back stories to flesh them out. It's tough to pin this one down. It's not 'just another book about...'. This is actual storytelling. I never wanted it to end. I can't wait to read the next one to find out what happens!
May 26, 2017
I received an ARC of this novel through the Amazon Vine Voices program.
I am sure there will be readers who find this fantasy world created by author J. Kyle McNeal a fascinating reading experience. Unfortunately I am not one of those readers. Boiled down to the most basic level I would say the book is about varying beliefs in faith and heritage and what is "true". Even after reading the book I find myself slightly confused about who believed what and why.
The novel is presented from the viewpoint of many different characters in the very short chapters. A consequence of presenting all of these perspectives was to keep me from forming a close bond with any one character because they would disappear for long stretches of time. Some simply left completely. It might have helped if there had been a glossary to help me keep in mind who and what I was reading about. Since I was reading an ARC a segment such as that might be included in the published novel. There is a line drawing map showing the many regions of this kingdom and I had to make use of that very often. There are also line drawings scattered throughout the book which actually helped me quite a bit. Characters such as the Rat Man were so much more understandable when shown in a drawing. The downside to that was the character left the narrative almost as soon as the picture placement was left behind. Secondary characters pop up as the focus of a chapter and I would have to spend time trying to remember who they even were and what they had been involved in previously.
Sadly, this novel is just not for me. That doesn't mean it will not be a delightful and enjoyable read for you, though. Tastes differ and my inability to have any curiosity or concern for the overall cast of characters meant I found the book a hard chore to read instead of a delight. I hope you will fare better. There is a short excerpt from the second book in this four book set immediately following the end of the first novel. According to the page count there are 529 pages in Birthrights.
I am sure there will be readers who find this fantasy world created by author J. Kyle McNeal a fascinating reading experience. Unfortunately I am not one of those readers. Boiled down to the most basic level I would say the book is about varying beliefs in faith and heritage and what is "true". Even after reading the book I find myself slightly confused about who believed what and why.
The novel is presented from the viewpoint of many different characters in the very short chapters. A consequence of presenting all of these perspectives was to keep me from forming a close bond with any one character because they would disappear for long stretches of time. Some simply left completely. It might have helped if there had been a glossary to help me keep in mind who and what I was reading about. Since I was reading an ARC a segment such as that might be included in the published novel. There is a line drawing map showing the many regions of this kingdom and I had to make use of that very often. There are also line drawings scattered throughout the book which actually helped me quite a bit. Characters such as the Rat Man were so much more understandable when shown in a drawing. The downside to that was the character left the narrative almost as soon as the picture placement was left behind. Secondary characters pop up as the focus of a chapter and I would have to spend time trying to remember who they even were and what they had been involved in previously.
Sadly, this novel is just not for me. That doesn't mean it will not be a delightful and enjoyable read for you, though. Tastes differ and my inability to have any curiosity or concern for the overall cast of characters meant I found the book a hard chore to read instead of a delight. I hope you will fare better. There is a short excerpt from the second book in this four book set immediately following the end of the first novel. According to the page count there are 529 pages in Birthrights.
June 6, 2017
Birthrights, Book One of the Revision to the Truth Series, is the riveting story of two young men’s struggle to survive in a harsh land and come to grips with the realization that truth is often a matter of perspective. It is a textured narrative that has broad appeal .
The reader who just wants an engaging and exciting adventure story will not be disappointed. The author’s organic plot and character development that allows the reader to meet the characters and experience the cultures rather than be told about them does make the beginning a bit slow, but the action picks up and the development makes for a richer reading experience in the end. Once the action starts, it doesn’t stop and there are plenty of twists and turns to keep the journey exciting.
The reader who appreciates a literary touch, careful word selection and a thought-provoking story will also not be disappointed. Many of the chapter headers would make great topics for a book discussion group or just a conversation with friends. I also enjoyed the occasional poem in the headers. Though not burdened by excessive detail or novelty, there is enough of both to create a fascinating world that will capture the reader’s imagination.
The author convincingly breathed life into his characters and I look forward to continuing my journey with them in Book Two. I’ve read many entertaining books whose plots I can now barely remember, let alone the characters. I will not forget these characters.
The reader who just wants an engaging and exciting adventure story will not be disappointed. The author’s organic plot and character development that allows the reader to meet the characters and experience the cultures rather than be told about them does make the beginning a bit slow, but the action picks up and the development makes for a richer reading experience in the end. Once the action starts, it doesn’t stop and there are plenty of twists and turns to keep the journey exciting.
The reader who appreciates a literary touch, careful word selection and a thought-provoking story will also not be disappointed. Many of the chapter headers would make great topics for a book discussion group or just a conversation with friends. I also enjoyed the occasional poem in the headers. Though not burdened by excessive detail or novelty, there is enough of both to create a fascinating world that will capture the reader’s imagination.
The author convincingly breathed life into his characters and I look forward to continuing my journey with them in Book Two. I’ve read many entertaining books whose plots I can now barely remember, let alone the characters. I will not forget these characters.
July 1, 2017
As an avid fantasy reader, it takes a lot to get me into a new world. This author did a superb job of making sure you know every character without making you wonder why you just read (x) number of pages. It pulls you through a great coming of age story and leaves you with an intrigue to know what will come with the next installment. That said, this is not a book I would recommend to all audiences, it is, to me, an adult fantasy novel with a character coming-of-age. I also know not all will find the author's particular style as engaging as some others, but I think with the right mindset to dive into something new and different and keeping an open mind, any redr willing to pick this book up will not be disappointed!
May 19, 2017
Across the Lost Lands, from brothels to temples and everywhere in-between, McNeal's debut sows the seeds of a provocative epic.
Whym Ellenrond's grandfather ArWhym led the failed Reformers Rebellion against the corrupt Council of Truth. Betrayed by his closest friend, Ather Sandoval, old Ellenrond ended up severed from his head. His few descendants live in ignominy in the slums of RatsNest.
Now, at sixteen, Whym finds himself apprenticed to the traitor's son, the bounty-hunter/hit-man Stern Sandoval. As Whym trails his taciturn master across the landscape with fellow apprentice Kutan, it becomes clear that the history of his betrayed grandfather and the conquered Rebellion is more like a legend written by the winners. But true or not, history may be about to repeat itself.
Broad and complex, Birthrights is rich in world-building, depth of character, and stirring prose. Treachery, intrigue, plots and schemes, lost loves and broken hearts, battle-field glory and back-alley shame, Birthrights delivers. Highly recommend.
Whym Ellenrond's grandfather ArWhym led the failed Reformers Rebellion against the corrupt Council of Truth. Betrayed by his closest friend, Ather Sandoval, old Ellenrond ended up severed from his head. His few descendants live in ignominy in the slums of RatsNest.
Now, at sixteen, Whym finds himself apprenticed to the traitor's son, the bounty-hunter/hit-man Stern Sandoval. As Whym trails his taciturn master across the landscape with fellow apprentice Kutan, it becomes clear that the history of his betrayed grandfather and the conquered Rebellion is more like a legend written by the winners. But true or not, history may be about to repeat itself.
Broad and complex, Birthrights is rich in world-building, depth of character, and stirring prose. Treachery, intrigue, plots and schemes, lost loves and broken hearts, battle-field glory and back-alley shame, Birthrights delivers. Highly recommend.
June 30, 2017
This was a very interesting book. I do like fantasy stories but this took it a bit further. I really enjoyed how each chapter, if you want to call them that (there was no numbering, just new titles for each section specifying where they were located) started with a poem or a review of a historical document pertaining to the story. The characters were explained quite well and it definitely made you love or hate one character or another. The locations were described very well to make you imagine you were actually in those places.
All and all it was an enjoyable story and I am excited to read the next book in the series.
All and all it was an enjoyable story and I am excited to read the next book in the series.
July 13, 2017
Brightrights is the first book in the “Revisions to the Truth” series by author J. Kyle McNeal. He’s able to lay the groundwork for an interesting universe that will have you looking forward to the next book.
I have read a lot of fantasy books and I think that has led to me having high standards when it comes to what makes a good fantasy story. Birthrights, McNeal’s debut novel, has what it takes to create an interesting fantasy world. But some readers might sense pacing problems during the start of the story. The cover is gorgeous, though! And there are also drawings inside.
Full review: http://thegeekiary.com/birthrights-mc...
I have read a lot of fantasy books and I think that has led to me having high standards when it comes to what makes a good fantasy story. Birthrights, McNeal’s debut novel, has what it takes to create an interesting fantasy world. But some readers might sense pacing problems during the start of the story. The cover is gorgeous, though! And there are also drawings inside.
Full review: http://thegeekiary.com/birthrights-mc...
June 6, 2017
Birthrights by Kyle McNeal is a must read fantasty book that focuses on man's determination to escape from his past in order to seize control of his own destiny. The story is fast paced and the characters are well developed which gives the reader an overwhelming feeling of excitement and adventure on every page. I thus highly recommend Birthrights to everyone who wants to explore a challenging, fantastic world where each character has to make life or death decisions that will alter their future and ultimately determine their identity. Indeed, I am so thankful that I read Birthrights. Without a doubt, Birthrights is an absolute must read.
June 14, 2017
[Disclaimer: I received a free e-copy ARC of this book from NetGalley. Thank you to the publishers!]
4.5 stars.
This is the first book of a 4 book series by Mr. McNeal. Those who know me, know that I read a lot of fantasy, I mean a lot. And it usually takes a very complex universe and well developed characters for me to actually finish a fantasy novel. This book had both. It was very well thought out, had a very unique universe, great backstory (done a la Brandon Sanderson at the top the chapters), complex and well developed characters and great plot. For me, it is something between The Wheel of Time and A Song of Ice and Fire (do not get attached to any characters - they will die).
SPOILERS.
The book is written from multiple POVs with Whym and Quint being the main characters. While the book starts off when both are very young, it does progress into their late young adulthood and grows from YA fantasy to complete adult fantasy. The novel explicitly deals with death, betrayal, sexual content, torture and rape just to name a few. I was pleasantly surprised at the adult motifs of the novel as I was expecting a more of Dawn of Wonder bildungsroman. I really cared for the characters and Mr. McNeal even made me like and understand some of the bad characters in his book. I got a feeling that Mr. McNeal does not create one dimensional bad characters, they are complex and relatable, even if you suppose to dislike them and he devotes a lot of time to create them this way. I really enjoy that.
My only issue with this novel, and why I did not give it 5 stars is the rape. While I understand that rape is something that happens in real life and we are suppose to talk about it and not sweep it under the rug, I felt like that it was too much here. Not only does a female character gets raped, twice, we then stop hearing from her for the rest of the book and I was honestly very upset about that. Her voice is silenced (literally and figuratively). And yes, I understand why (and you will too once you reach the end of the novel), I just feel like it's such a harsh treatment for a female character. There are other ways to make a female character into a badass character, without the rape. Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, Jay Kristoff and Mark Lawrence are just some of the authors who create really badass female characters w/o the need to make them go through rape first. I honestly hope that the next book will redeem itself in this regard.
That being said, I really want to know more about the world and Whym and Quint. Also I would love a POV from Kutan.
4.5 stars.
This is the first book of a 4 book series by Mr. McNeal. Those who know me, know that I read a lot of fantasy, I mean a lot. And it usually takes a very complex universe and well developed characters for me to actually finish a fantasy novel. This book had both. It was very well thought out, had a very unique universe, great backstory (done a la Brandon Sanderson at the top the chapters), complex and well developed characters and great plot. For me, it is something between The Wheel of Time and A Song of Ice and Fire (do not get attached to any characters - they will die).
SPOILERS.
The book is written from multiple POVs with Whym and Quint being the main characters. While the book starts off when both are very young, it does progress into their late young adulthood and grows from YA fantasy to complete adult fantasy. The novel explicitly deals with death, betrayal, sexual content, torture and rape just to name a few. I was pleasantly surprised at the adult motifs of the novel as I was expecting a more of Dawn of Wonder bildungsroman. I really cared for the characters and Mr. McNeal even made me like and understand some of the bad characters in his book. I got a feeling that Mr. McNeal does not create one dimensional bad characters, they are complex and relatable, even if you suppose to dislike them and he devotes a lot of time to create them this way. I really enjoy that.
My only issue with this novel, and why I did not give it 5 stars is the rape. While I understand that rape is something that happens in real life and we are suppose to talk about it and not sweep it under the rug, I felt like that it was too much here. Not only does a female character gets raped, twice, we then stop hearing from her for the rest of the book and I was honestly very upset about that. Her voice is silenced (literally and figuratively). And yes, I understand why (and you will too once you reach the end of the novel), I just feel like it's such a harsh treatment for a female character. There are other ways to make a female character into a badass character, without the rape. Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, Jay Kristoff and Mark Lawrence are just some of the authors who create really badass female characters w/o the need to make them go through rape first. I honestly hope that the next book will redeem itself in this regard.
That being said, I really want to know more about the world and Whym and Quint. Also I would love a POV from Kutan.
June 6, 2017
I recently read Birthrights by J Kyle McNeal Birthrights and was pretty impressed. McNeal managed to write an epic fantasy book that didn't cater to the young adult crowd, but didn't gloss over them either. This is a book that any age reader could enjoy. He alludes to some torture and sexual abuses to some characters, but doesn't hit you in the face with graphical or gory details. It's a subtlety that many of today's writers lack. Sometimes, it takes more skill and effort to dance around a disgusting detail than it does to just take the lazy route and slap the reader with it for shock value. Young adult readers are aware of these facts of life, but don't necessarily need to be hit over the head with them. The same applies to their adult counterparts. This book again proves that you can have adult themes and issues and depict them in a subtle, yet impactful way.
Birthrights is the beginning of the story of a bounty hunter/assassin's apprentice(s) and (of course, the inevitable) "quest". But McNeal managed to make the quest less about a goal/destination to be achieved, than the journey of the apprentices finding out who they truly are in relationship to the rest of the world and to themselves personally. The characters were not two dimensional tropes, but flawed and human.
The cover art is as layered and multi-dimensional as the characters inside. As an artist, I stared at the art inside the drawings and was envious of the depth the cover artist displayed.
I have met Kyle and it is to his credit that he has been able to separate himself from the story. In other words, you don't see him when you read about the protagonist. I love the work of Jonathan Maberry (Ghost Road Blues, Dead Man's Song), but with his background in martial arts and his regional history, it is easy to spot which character he has (loosely) based on some of his own traits. McNeal has managed to create characters with their own personalities that don't echo his own. I think we will see great stories come from this young man.
Epic fantasy is not a genre I typically lean toward, but found Birthrights engaging and interesting. It was a quick read and I was always interested in what would befall the heroes next. There were a few twists and turns I did NOT anticipate and that makes it more enjoyable to me.
I would recommend Birthrights to anyone who enjoys epic fantasy.
Birthrights is the beginning of the story of a bounty hunter/assassin's apprentice(s) and (of course, the inevitable) "quest". But McNeal managed to make the quest less about a goal/destination to be achieved, than the journey of the apprentices finding out who they truly are in relationship to the rest of the world and to themselves personally. The characters were not two dimensional tropes, but flawed and human.
The cover art is as layered and multi-dimensional as the characters inside. As an artist, I stared at the art inside the drawings and was envious of the depth the cover artist displayed.
I have met Kyle and it is to his credit that he has been able to separate himself from the story. In other words, you don't see him when you read about the protagonist. I love the work of Jonathan Maberry (Ghost Road Blues, Dead Man's Song), but with his background in martial arts and his regional history, it is easy to spot which character he has (loosely) based on some of his own traits. McNeal has managed to create characters with their own personalities that don't echo his own. I think we will see great stories come from this young man.
Epic fantasy is not a genre I typically lean toward, but found Birthrights engaging and interesting. It was a quick read and I was always interested in what would befall the heroes next. There were a few twists and turns I did NOT anticipate and that makes it more enjoyable to me.
I would recommend Birthrights to anyone who enjoys epic fantasy.
May 11, 2017
This was the first book since Hunger Games that I could not put down. I found myself staying up late unable to break away from the captivating fantasy world McNeal creates. The story follows two main characters, Whym and Quint, with a sprinkling of other characters giving the reader an opportunity to view the world and events through a variety of viewpoints. Much like Game of Thrones, McNeal portrays characters shaped by their experiences and beliefs; characters that are unpredictable and reactive, characters much like the people in our world today. These characters, and the way they change or respond when presented with new experiences or information, provide many plot twists and turns that keeps the reader anxiously waiting to see what will happen next. I absolutely love this book and can't wait to read more of this series and more from this author.
August 4, 2017
An epic fantasy worth all the five stars! Thank you, J. Kyle McNeal, for reaching out and giving me access to the novel through NetGalley.
Two young men from different circles have a greater destiny beyond their wildest dreams and hopes. Quint is the son of a powerful religious family and leads a sheltered life, but everything changes with the introduction of the tribes of Dragonborn. When his life is turned upside down, Quint has to lead and advise his people. Will he be able to since he knows very little of his responsibilities? On the opposite side, Whym’s life has always been haunted by poverty, being born in one of the poorest parts of town; he has little hopes for the future. His life changes when he is given the opportunity to become the apprentice of a mysterious figure. Both men will have to face the journey of their lives, forced to go through dangerous geographical and political paths and war, filled with hidden enemies, dangerous lies and glimpses of truth.
I have a lot to write about on this novel. I loved every moment, every page of this story: I was taken into a different world, immersing myself in its history, its complexity, its characters and social life. But allow me to start from the top.
The style of writing is mesmerizing and I truly admire how the author managed to described and give depth to the world of the Lost Lands and its characters without leaving the reader bored or tired of the descriptions. Furthermore, the organized and methodical structure of the novel leaves no space for loose ends, which is the best satisfaction a reader like me could have. It starts with the lightness in the first chapters, thoroughly building up, providing background stories, introducing characters that sooner or later will have an impact in the story. I have this image that the words are like puzzle pieces that come together to create something bigger and beautiful. I got completely absorbed by the words; it was difficult to put the book down.
The characters are just as complex as the reality they live in. I have to be honest and confess that I did have to make a list with the names of the characters and who they were since I did end up forgetting who they were at some point, but that didn’t influence my view of the novel at all. It is an extensive list of characters however and all of them have a distinctive way personality, and they are all very aware of the issues of their society. They have depth and are well-developed; it was easy to connect with them. The way the novel is written gives the reader the opportunity to get to know the characters as individuals and then as a group. I really felt their connection with each other, not only based on their conversations but also their actions.
Overall: beautiful scenarios, unique characters and a thrilling story-line make this a very promising fantasy series! I vividly recommend this novel to all the fans of fantasy that want to live a unique adventure in this wonderful world!
Two young men from different circles have a greater destiny beyond their wildest dreams and hopes. Quint is the son of a powerful religious family and leads a sheltered life, but everything changes with the introduction of the tribes of Dragonborn. When his life is turned upside down, Quint has to lead and advise his people. Will he be able to since he knows very little of his responsibilities? On the opposite side, Whym’s life has always been haunted by poverty, being born in one of the poorest parts of town; he has little hopes for the future. His life changes when he is given the opportunity to become the apprentice of a mysterious figure. Both men will have to face the journey of their lives, forced to go through dangerous geographical and political paths and war, filled with hidden enemies, dangerous lies and glimpses of truth.
I have a lot to write about on this novel. I loved every moment, every page of this story: I was taken into a different world, immersing myself in its history, its complexity, its characters and social life. But allow me to start from the top.
The style of writing is mesmerizing and I truly admire how the author managed to described and give depth to the world of the Lost Lands and its characters without leaving the reader bored or tired of the descriptions. Furthermore, the organized and methodical structure of the novel leaves no space for loose ends, which is the best satisfaction a reader like me could have. It starts with the lightness in the first chapters, thoroughly building up, providing background stories, introducing characters that sooner or later will have an impact in the story. I have this image that the words are like puzzle pieces that come together to create something bigger and beautiful. I got completely absorbed by the words; it was difficult to put the book down.
The characters are just as complex as the reality they live in. I have to be honest and confess that I did have to make a list with the names of the characters and who they were since I did end up forgetting who they were at some point, but that didn’t influence my view of the novel at all. It is an extensive list of characters however and all of them have a distinctive way personality, and they are all very aware of the issues of their society. They have depth and are well-developed; it was easy to connect with them. The way the novel is written gives the reader the opportunity to get to know the characters as individuals and then as a group. I really felt their connection with each other, not only based on their conversations but also their actions.
Overall: beautiful scenarios, unique characters and a thrilling story-line make this a very promising fantasy series! I vividly recommend this novel to all the fans of fantasy that want to live a unique adventure in this wonderful world!
August 22, 2017
(A copy was sent to me for review by the author - all thoughts are 100% my own.)
3.5/5 stars
I was kindly sent a copy by the author for review and read it almost immediately because I was so excited to jump into a new YA coming of age fantasy. Upon starting the novel, I found that there were several darker elements of fantasy including rape and violence so just to put that out there for anyone.
Birthrights follows two main characters: Whym (the great grandson of a failed traitor) and Quint (the son of a powerful religious leader). While their paths never actually cross in this novel, their individual plots set up the overall story for the rest of the series. This novel is very much a beginning foundation for the series. The first half drags on for a while and it just set up the scene for the rest of the novel.
“Learn when to talk and when to listen. If you're unsure, listen.”
While there are these mini climaxes throughout the novel, the whole story seems to be building up for a climax that will happen in the later books - essentially it does a good job in building anticipation while still providing some high points that are both shocking and exciting. There were actually a couple parts where I was thought that that would be the main climax but realize that we still had a whole lot of story left.
“It matters not whether you're led by chains or kind words, by need or greed, by conviction or fear, by truth or deceit. Intent is unimportant. Results endure.”
There are a lot of characters and with that comes a lot of twisted political webs that can get quite confusing. I'm still not sure how all the plots are going to intertwine and how all the figureheads of power will reveal to just be puppets for bigger players. On that topic, I found some of the chapter switches to be a bit confusing as when the first switch happens between Whym and Quint occurred, it took me a while to realize we were in a different character's POV. However, as you get comfortable with the setting and several characters, it all gets easier.
“Sometimes it's not the intent, but the result, that matters.”
Now onto our two main characters. Both are incredible headstrong and go through so much character development throughout the novel. Quint was an interesting character as he is portrayed as an unbeliever who joins the Shades to have something to fight for. He was definitely my favorite among the two but he really played his card wrongs and lost a lot.
“No one took a smiling jailer seriously. A smiling executioner was worse.”
Now...I'll admit that I wasn't a fan of Whym at the beginning but then, I believe we started with his profile while he was much younger than Quint. Somewhere along the line, crazy stuff happened and now I'm honestly just really confused. Essentially, to avoid spoilers, he goes through some weird character transformation and I'm really intrigued to see how he will continue to grow.
“A man who would give advice without understanding is a fool.”
One final thing before this review becomes a novel - I really loved how this novel addressed faith. Each character has their beliefs thoroughly challenged and their truths are twisted beyond their understanding. This challenges them to reconsider everything they thought was true and brings to question the idea of motives - everyone has them, but which one is right?
Originally posted on Le Petit Photograph.
3.5/5 stars
I was kindly sent a copy by the author for review and read it almost immediately because I was so excited to jump into a new YA coming of age fantasy. Upon starting the novel, I found that there were several darker elements of fantasy including rape and violence so just to put that out there for anyone.
Birthrights follows two main characters: Whym (the great grandson of a failed traitor) and Quint (the son of a powerful religious leader). While their paths never actually cross in this novel, their individual plots set up the overall story for the rest of the series. This novel is very much a beginning foundation for the series. The first half drags on for a while and it just set up the scene for the rest of the novel.
“Learn when to talk and when to listen. If you're unsure, listen.”
While there are these mini climaxes throughout the novel, the whole story seems to be building up for a climax that will happen in the later books - essentially it does a good job in building anticipation while still providing some high points that are both shocking and exciting. There were actually a couple parts where I was thought that that would be the main climax but realize that we still had a whole lot of story left.
“It matters not whether you're led by chains or kind words, by need or greed, by conviction or fear, by truth or deceit. Intent is unimportant. Results endure.”
There are a lot of characters and with that comes a lot of twisted political webs that can get quite confusing. I'm still not sure how all the plots are going to intertwine and how all the figureheads of power will reveal to just be puppets for bigger players. On that topic, I found some of the chapter switches to be a bit confusing as when the first switch happens between Whym and Quint occurred, it took me a while to realize we were in a different character's POV. However, as you get comfortable with the setting and several characters, it all gets easier.
“Sometimes it's not the intent, but the result, that matters.”
Now onto our two main characters. Both are incredible headstrong and go through so much character development throughout the novel. Quint was an interesting character as he is portrayed as an unbeliever who joins the Shades to have something to fight for. He was definitely my favorite among the two but he really played his card wrongs and lost a lot.
“No one took a smiling jailer seriously. A smiling executioner was worse.”
Now...I'll admit that I wasn't a fan of Whym at the beginning but then, I believe we started with his profile while he was much younger than Quint. Somewhere along the line, crazy stuff happened and now I'm honestly just really confused. Essentially, to avoid spoilers, he goes through some weird character transformation and I'm really intrigued to see how he will continue to grow.
“A man who would give advice without understanding is a fool.”
One final thing before this review becomes a novel - I really loved how this novel addressed faith. Each character has their beliefs thoroughly challenged and their truths are twisted beyond their understanding. This challenges them to reconsider everything they thought was true and brings to question the idea of motives - everyone has them, but which one is right?
Originally posted on Le Petit Photograph.
June 30, 2017
Birthrights Book One Of The Revisions To The Truth Series is an excellent fantasy with adventure that keeps you wanting more. at the end of the book I found myself looking forward to the next book.
This is a story of the search for ones place in the world split by beliefs and those who control others by fear and intimidation. The search for Truth and what that means. It's one boys struggle to find his place and not just be known as the grandson of a rebel leader. Whym is learning the ways of the seeker and trying to overcome his families past. He is seeking The Truth. He must learn the ways of the seeker and in a world split between the beliefs of what is right and wrong in The Truth he finds strength, skill and danger.
This book has an excellent plot that leads you on a extraordinary journey through a fantasy world full of conflict, danger, a mystical creature and a realm where the Leaders of the Truth rule against the ones who want the real Truth and what's best for all people. It has strong characters that grow as the story unfolds to finding themselves and which side they belong on.
I liked this line "make others see you as you wish them to see you, but never believe the disguise yourselve; The Truth is a book, but real truth depends on your perspective"
this sums up the struggle found in this story.
I found this book very interesting and a wonderful page turner. If you liked the Hungar Games or Eragon then I think you will like this book also.
If you are a fan of fantasy then be sure to check this book out.
I received this book for my honest opinion and review.
This is a story of the search for ones place in the world split by beliefs and those who control others by fear and intimidation. The search for Truth and what that means. It's one boys struggle to find his place and not just be known as the grandson of a rebel leader. Whym is learning the ways of the seeker and trying to overcome his families past. He is seeking The Truth. He must learn the ways of the seeker and in a world split between the beliefs of what is right and wrong in The Truth he finds strength, skill and danger.
This book has an excellent plot that leads you on a extraordinary journey through a fantasy world full of conflict, danger, a mystical creature and a realm where the Leaders of the Truth rule against the ones who want the real Truth and what's best for all people. It has strong characters that grow as the story unfolds to finding themselves and which side they belong on.
I liked this line "make others see you as you wish them to see you, but never believe the disguise yourselve; The Truth is a book, but real truth depends on your perspective"
this sums up the struggle found in this story.
I found this book very interesting and a wonderful page turner. If you liked the Hungar Games or Eragon then I think you will like this book also.
If you are a fan of fantasy then be sure to check this book out.
I received this book for my honest opinion and review.
July 7, 2017
The book focuses on the lives of two characters Whym and Quint who had two different upbringing. Whym was born in poverty and Quint was born in a powerful religious family. Whym during the choosing ceremony which is an initiation into adulthood was offered apprenticeship by Stern who was despised by Whym's family. On the other hand Quintran away from his faith to join a corrupt leader. The theme of the book is about becoming of age and the challenges that come with it. The challenges that we face in relationships are also shown throughout the this book. People fall in love but love also has its challenges and in life we do not necessarily end up with the love of our lives most of it due to situations beyond our control as shown in the book. Whym and Quint were tested throughout the whole book on what they believed in, which is the why the author called it the revision of the truth and it makes you wonder how some the things that we believe in life might not be the real truth. this draws me a lot to the book because it can easily be related to some of the things that we encounter in life.
At the beginning the author writes the book in a flashback narrative which gives the book a lot of suspense which draws the reader in. The flashback narrative also makes it a hard book to read because you have connect the dots going back and forth. There are also too many characters at the beginning making it a hard to really follow through with the story which is the reason why I gave it a 4 star.
The quotes that the author uses are also relevant to the present day life although the book is an adult fantasy. One quote that stayed with me throughout the was, and I quote,"Asmile is the deadliest weapon". The quote resonates throughout the book because everything that you believe in is tested.
I was given an advance copy by the author. I cannot wait for the second book and this was my first fantasy book and I am sold.
At the beginning the author writes the book in a flashback narrative which gives the book a lot of suspense which draws the reader in. The flashback narrative also makes it a hard book to read because you have connect the dots going back and forth. There are also too many characters at the beginning making it a hard to really follow through with the story which is the reason why I gave it a 4 star.
The quotes that the author uses are also relevant to the present day life although the book is an adult fantasy. One quote that stayed with me throughout the was, and I quote,"Asmile is the deadliest weapon". The quote resonates throughout the book because everything that you believe in is tested.
I was given an advance copy by the author. I cannot wait for the second book and this was my first fantasy book and I am sold.
June 30, 2017
This is the first book in a four part fantasy series following the lives of Whym and Quint and their struggle to find the truth. Both men are disillusioned by events and expectations of their families and birthrights. Whym is the grandson of the executed leader of the Reformer's Rebellion group and Quint is the son of a religious leader. Both learn early in life that nothing is as it seems and both are on a journey where faith and beliefs are challenged in the struggle to find the truth. Fantasy is not a genre I normally choose to read, but I was intrigued by the world presented in this book. The writing is complex and beautiful, and the character development is very well done. Some of this book is very dark with brutal killings, betrayals and rape. Political intrigue and trickery are at the core of this story and as it is the first installment the reader is left wondering what direction it will take in the future installments. I highly recommend this book to those who enjoy fantasy and to others as well. The story will quickly draw you in.
I was provided an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
I was provided an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.
June 21, 2017
Fascinating worldbuilding. I love the world that McNeal created. Full of intriguing characters and a fascinating plot. You can read about the plot in the description but I definitely liked it.
The books narrative is so dense and wonderfully wrought that you cannot help but continue turning the pages. The settings are well described. I read an Advance Copy which did not include a map. But the map is very helpful (like on many fantasy novels) for seeing the bigger picture and the lay of the land. The characters are written such that you care about them and what happens to them. They are multidimensional and well written. Their reasons for actions are purposeful and known without beating you over the head with it.
Over all very enjoyable and I cannot wait for the rest of the series.
However, I would have liked to have seen more strong female characters. Unfortunately epic fantasy authors rarely give us that. For too many horrible things happen in epic fantasy to strong female characters. Male characters are able to become strong without being raped or punished for their strength but that is rarely the case for female characters in epic fantasy.
The books narrative is so dense and wonderfully wrought that you cannot help but continue turning the pages. The settings are well described. I read an Advance Copy which did not include a map. But the map is very helpful (like on many fantasy novels) for seeing the bigger picture and the lay of the land. The characters are written such that you care about them and what happens to them. They are multidimensional and well written. Their reasons for actions are purposeful and known without beating you over the head with it.
Over all very enjoyable and I cannot wait for the rest of the series.
However, I would have liked to have seen more strong female characters. Unfortunately epic fantasy authors rarely give us that. For too many horrible things happen in epic fantasy to strong female characters. Male characters are able to become strong without being raped or punished for their strength but that is rarely the case for female characters in epic fantasy.
July 1, 2017
I can honestly say that I could not get through this book. I sat down with it one evening and hoped to settle in for a good read, but found myself getting lost in the details and the back and forth of the story. I was confused by the names and places and I couldn’t follow what was going on. While I am not typically a fantasy genre reader, I do like to branch out every once in a while and get lost in a story filled with magic and wonder. This, however, did not strike my fancy, and after picking it up and putting it down several times, I finally gave up and it has been collecting dust for about a week now. I don’t ever like to give up on a book, especially one that I was chosen to review for free, but I honestly could not get into the book and find the hook that normally keeps me turning pages.
August 5, 2019
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I don’t know why it took me this long to read this epic high fantasy when there are dragons and faeries and all sorts of magic involved. But it did and here I am. I absolutely enjoyed myself while reading this book. It was entertaining and I loved reading about the characters and all the different plots that were somehow going to align at the end. I found the history of the world to be fascinating specifically the Dragonborns, the Stewards and how the faeries came to be.
Even though there were many POVs in this book, it primarily focused on two characters, Whym and Quint. To be honest, I wasn’t a huge fan of Quint – I found him to be really selfish and clueless. The worst part was that he was selfish but didn’t know it and somehow dragged others down with him because of his cluelessness. But for Whym, I liked him a lot more even though I also did find him to be clueless and too reserved at times especially when it came to his childhood friend. However, I did like seeing his growth from when he was a child to learning more about fighting, being a seeker and magic.
I would love to dive right into the sequel but I’m not even sure when the author will have it out. I believe there were some publishing issues so I’m not sure when the rest of the books will be out since it’s supposed to be a 4 book series. That being said, I probably won’t continue with the series just because the idea of rereading a 500+ epic high fantasy is a bit daunting.
I don’t know why it took me this long to read this epic high fantasy when there are dragons and faeries and all sorts of magic involved. But it did and here I am. I absolutely enjoyed myself while reading this book. It was entertaining and I loved reading about the characters and all the different plots that were somehow going to align at the end. I found the history of the world to be fascinating specifically the Dragonborns, the Stewards and how the faeries came to be.
Even though there were many POVs in this book, it primarily focused on two characters, Whym and Quint. To be honest, I wasn’t a huge fan of Quint – I found him to be really selfish and clueless. The worst part was that he was selfish but didn’t know it and somehow dragged others down with him because of his cluelessness. But for Whym, I liked him a lot more even though I also did find him to be clueless and too reserved at times especially when it came to his childhood friend. However, I did like seeing his growth from when he was a child to learning more about fighting, being a seeker and magic.
I would love to dive right into the sequel but I’m not even sure when the author will have it out. I believe there were some publishing issues so I’m not sure when the rest of the books will be out since it’s supposed to be a 4 book series. That being said, I probably won’t continue with the series just because the idea of rereading a 500+ epic high fantasy is a bit daunting.
June 30, 2017
The first in a fantasy series. It is a good start. I must say that I was confused in a few places. But all-in-all, a good start to this series.
July 20, 2017
It has been a long time since I have read a fantasy novel that grabbed my attention so quickly. I am very excited about this debut novel and subsequent novels in the series.
The two main characters, Whym and Quint have been raised in totally different worlds. They realize early on that they wil be on a journey in faith. This brings them to the struggle with the truth.
A a warning before you read this book that there are some disturbing scenes such as killings and rape. These are not the core of this book, just the opposite. The characters are very well written and look forward to the next installments and adventures.
This book will have you wanting more! Can't wait to read the next book in the series.
I recieved an arc of this book for an honest review.
The two main characters, Whym and Quint have been raised in totally different worlds. They realize early on that they wil be on a journey in faith. This brings them to the struggle with the truth.
A a warning before you read this book that there are some disturbing scenes such as killings and rape. These are not the core of this book, just the opposite. The characters are very well written and look forward to the next installments and adventures.
This book will have you wanting more! Can't wait to read the next book in the series.
I recieved an arc of this book for an honest review.
June 5, 2017
This is definitely a book for fans of epic fantasy. We follow a young boy, and his 2 companions ,on their quest to find a mythical figure called "the Stewart". But somewhere in the middle the tension wavers. There are too many storylines, different factions and the story becomes, unnecessary, over complicated.
Fortunately, the story, and tension, picks up again and it ends( at 553 pages no less) with a feeling that one wants to read the second instalment.
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Fortunately, the story, and tension, picks up again and it ends( at 553 pages no less) with a feeling that one wants to read the second instalment.
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June 30, 2017
Birthrights
by J Kyle McNeal
Review by Jessica Secrest
I enjoy fantasies. This one intrigued me. I knew religion would be a part of the story, but I didn't realize to what extent.
When I received the book, a paper had been inserted inside the cover revealing a little about the publisher and the author. I appreciated this courtesy. It made me even more curious. I wanted to know how a boy from the mountains of North Carolina, who spent 25 years of his adult life in China would approach religion. Now, I know. There are a lot of different religions in the story.
Quint, one of the main characters, grows up in a temple, but ends up on the outskirts of the world, living with a people whose religion he knows nothing about. Because of this he makes some unwise decisions.
These people are the Dragonborn. They worship dragons. The dragons never materialize in the story leaving me disappointed.
I like the second character's name and spelling, Whym. His father has the lowly distinction of being the Ratman, because of Whym's great-grandfather's noble sacrifice that left his family disgraced.
Men with dubious, treacherous ideas rescue Whym from the fate of being the next Ratman.
Whym is naive young man at the beginning and even though he grows and changes through his travels, he still seems naive at the end of the story.
There are several incidents where I questioned whether this particular story line was necessary to move the story, or if it was filler.
War is talked of throughout the story, but there are no real battles. There are a lot of deaths, several are surprising, leaving me to wonder about the next 2 books.
Quint and Whym never meet. Quint takes an active role in what is going on around him, trying to protect the Dragonborn from total annihilation. I don't think he suceeded. There are so many secrets that directly affect Whym that he knows nothing about, so many experiences happen to him as he is trying to find the last Steward, that he has no time to reflect and learn. All through the story he is busy reacting and dealing with the latest incident. A lot of them are strange and have to do with the religions that him comes across in his travels.
There are faeries. Whym doubts their existence. Discovering the faeries is interesting.
The story is well written, but I'm not sure how I feel about it. Some of the religions remind me of the Greeks and Romans with their gods and demigods. Some are just confusing to me. Some are a little more intriguing and I wish the author had explained them more. It was definitely an interesting read.
by J Kyle McNeal
Review by Jessica Secrest
I enjoy fantasies. This one intrigued me. I knew religion would be a part of the story, but I didn't realize to what extent.
When I received the book, a paper had been inserted inside the cover revealing a little about the publisher and the author. I appreciated this courtesy. It made me even more curious. I wanted to know how a boy from the mountains of North Carolina, who spent 25 years of his adult life in China would approach religion. Now, I know. There are a lot of different religions in the story.
Quint, one of the main characters, grows up in a temple, but ends up on the outskirts of the world, living with a people whose religion he knows nothing about. Because of this he makes some unwise decisions.
These people are the Dragonborn. They worship dragons. The dragons never materialize in the story leaving me disappointed.
I like the second character's name and spelling, Whym. His father has the lowly distinction of being the Ratman, because of Whym's great-grandfather's noble sacrifice that left his family disgraced.
Men with dubious, treacherous ideas rescue Whym from the fate of being the next Ratman.
Whym is naive young man at the beginning and even though he grows and changes through his travels, he still seems naive at the end of the story.
There are several incidents where I questioned whether this particular story line was necessary to move the story, or if it was filler.
War is talked of throughout the story, but there are no real battles. There are a lot of deaths, several are surprising, leaving me to wonder about the next 2 books.
Quint and Whym never meet. Quint takes an active role in what is going on around him, trying to protect the Dragonborn from total annihilation. I don't think he suceeded. There are so many secrets that directly affect Whym that he knows nothing about, so many experiences happen to him as he is trying to find the last Steward, that he has no time to reflect and learn. All through the story he is busy reacting and dealing with the latest incident. A lot of them are strange and have to do with the religions that him comes across in his travels.
There are faeries. Whym doubts their existence. Discovering the faeries is interesting.
The story is well written, but I'm not sure how I feel about it. Some of the religions remind me of the Greeks and Romans with their gods and demigods. Some are just confusing to me. Some are a little more intriguing and I wish the author had explained them more. It was definitely an interesting read.
July 12, 2017
He’d [Stern’d] realized the Council of Truth itself was a paradox – a well-intentioned but flawed idea. No matter how many revisions were made, there could be no single truth – no single answer to accommodate the diversity of the whole realm. My father and ArWhym failed because their goal was reform. This time, the rebellion will disband the Council and devolve power to the regions. The regions wouldn’t rise for reform. They will for freedom.
I am so glad I am finally. done. reading. this. book. It took way longer than it should have. Not entirely the book’s fault, since I had other things going on, but I still wasn’t itching to get back to the world between the pages when I was away. Don’t get me wrong, it was good, just not great.
J. Kyle McNeal’s Birthrights (Book 1 of the Revisions to the Truth Series) tells the story of Whym, who accepts an apprenticeship under the man whose father betrayed his grandfather to the Council of Truth. Along with his master (Stern) and fellow apprentice (Kutan), they go on a dangerous journey to locate the last known Steward, a race who once used to roam the lands but has faded into myth. At the same time, Quint joins the army fighting oat the Fringe, abandoning his religious faith in Bothera. As war creeps closer and plots become more sinister, both Whym and Quint have to figure out their own Truths and where their allegiances will lie in the war.
This book had a very interesting concept. There were sinister plots and hints of magic and races of old that have since faded into myth. Unfortunately, I think it fell short of its potential.
My main problem is that there were so many layers to the book that the overall story became muddled and confusing, at least for me. There were so many characters and plots and places, making it hard to keep everything pinned down mentally. The pacing of the plot was also all over the place. There was not very much buildup of events; instead, things just more-or-less happened and that was that. The characters themselves also weren’t that interesting, and I don’t think their development was entirely believable, either. Often a character’s response to a huge plot twist – e.g. another character’s death – was not believable because they would act like it already happened and really weren’t surprised.
In terms of the writing itself, I will not even mention the author’s aversion to Oxford commas, which was disheartening in and of itself. In addition, some of the language choices were awkward at best, especially when it came to (but not limited by) dialogue. I have highlighted a few examples below.
Quint hung near the back, watching the stars play peekaboo through the smoke and clouds.
…the seeker placed a finger over his lips to stop him, then bent close enough he could have licked their faces.
…saggy bosom…
But for all its quirks, this was a good start to a new fantasy series. The complexity of this book is something readers will either love or hate; I personally liked it, even though I was often a bit confused, but I feel a lot of the confusion will be clarified in subsequent books. All-in-all, I think this will be an interesting fantasy series, and I look forward to seeing what happens in the sequel, Broken Oaths, which is set to be released next year in 2018.
Thank you to NetGalley and Elevate publishing for an advanced copy of this book, both in paperback and eBook format in exchange for an honest and unbiased review.
Pst, you can also checkout this review on my blog, Allison's Adventures Into Wonderlands!
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