Well, this one was unfortunately not for me. I'm pretty picky these days about fluffy tropes, but the concept of this appealed to me. A writer still raw from a breakup meets sexy stranger in Maui? I'm game. Throw in a friends to lovers trope on top of that? Yes please. But as much as I liked where the author was going, it didn't work for me.
There were some important parts of the plot they made no sense to me. Sam is an out gay dude. Yet he keeps his orientation a secret from a random, hot stranger for some reason, then keeps up the cover even after they become friends. Okay, anxiety and stuff, sure. But then how did Drew have no clue Sam was into dudes? He caught Sam checking him out on the plane. All the flirting. Calling Sam out mid word for saying he was gorgeous. If Drew was supposed to be an idiot, I'd buy it, but he's not. It all just seemed out of character for these guys. I would've had an easier time buying Drew trying to give Sam a handie on the plane, then Sam being scandalized.
The voices of the characters didn't work for me either. For first person perspective switching to work for me, I need to hear very different voices. They sounded pretty much the same, with the exception of Drew saying "fuck" more. They didn't feel their age to me either. It had a bit of that "how do you do, fellow kids" feel to it at times. It just felt... inauthentic. And while I'm a sucker for emotional, weepy stuff, it felt forced with these guys. Conversations felt like they were between client and therapist. Like.. "Let's go swimming in the ocean. So tell me about your family dynamic as a child." This kind of thing happened way too much for me.
The drama felt really predictable. It got to where I was guessing, with pretty decent precision, what was going to happen in the next sentence, page, and chapter. I'm all for some good fluff, but I've gotta be emotionally invested. I wasn't.
So yeah, great concept, I just didn't like the way it was executed. I felt like I was reading a lot of the cliches in M/F that I find bothersome. The "oh, I'm so unlovable; someone as dreamy as Sam could never love a wretch like me" business in particular. All the griping aside, it was a sweet story, and the writing isn't bad (though there were a few wtf moments). This is one I may have liked when I first started reading M/M, but i can't say I'd recommend it to more experienced romance readers.