Where do I start?
The book started out great; it was alluring, and mysterious, and I thoroughly enjoyed the diverse characters that were gradually introduced. And I especially loved that Medeleine Roux incorporated parts of Mr. Morningside's journal into the chapters. It was creative and made the story feel more alive. But for me, that's all that was good about it.
The story progressed in inconsistent bouts of sluggishness and lightning fast. One moment, nothing of any particular interest is happening, the next, everyone is dying. The consequential events happened too fast and without much reason (good reason) to it, as if they were only there to progress the story instead of adding depth to it. There were also a lot of holes despite the author's ingenious effort to explain things. I know there's still a second book coming out, and I shouldn't be too rash to point this out, but there was just so many things explained in such shallow detail. The damned book, the residents, the Unworld - I understand them, but I wish Madeleine Roux could have given more insight.
And now, the characters. I;m sorry, but this is going to be a rant.
It is very rare for me to dislike a book's main protagonist, let alone loathe her/him. I'm sorry, I really am, but I have never despised a character as much as I despised Louisa. She is the most obnoxious, scattered-brain, selfish character I've ever come across. Throughout the book, she falls into these constant bouts of tantrums and rebuttals, going back and forth between defending herself and insulting others, and annoyingly being so contradicting. She is such a contradictory character. She wants pity, but gets angry when you show it to her; she wants to belong, but goes about insulting and pushing away people that have been nothing but kind to her and reach out to her (but hey, she has noooo problems being kind to Lee); she prides herself in having the will for self-preservation and doesn't need anyone to help her, yet she'll take advantage of the first person who'll offer their help. It's frustrating. And her selfishness is aggravating, to say the least. I mean, come on, she only saved Lee because she could not handle the guilt of leaving him there to die. Throughout the book, she has never thought outside of her own bubble whenever it came to her decisions or actions. If it involved someone else, it was usually because they had a part in her plans. Also, the fact that she thinks, and at times, treats the Coldthistle peeps so badly is one of the biggest turn offs about her. Mary, Chijioke, and Poppy treat her like family, even risk their lives for her, and all she could think about them is monsters, monsters, monsters. Jesus, after all they've done for her, it's Lee whom she calls friend.
And there's another one. Lee. To be brutally honest, he's useless to me. Stupid, and useless. He does nothing in the story if not to push it forward. And it irks me that Louisa would call him friend after, what, three awkward conversations? Just because he's the only that doesn't scare you, Louisa? I know nothing about Lee, which tells a lot about what kind of character he is. All I know is that he's blonde, handsome, and very incompetent when it comes to life-threatening situations. For someone who is so consequential to the story, he's pretty much a filler. And i will never forgive Louisa and Lee for what happened to Mary. I mean, MARY OVER LEE? Sweet, selfless Mary, over Lee? No, just no. At this point, I like the Residents more than Louisa and Lee.
This could have been a very, VERY, good book for me. I just couldn't handle too much annoying Louisa/Lee moments, and too little insight into the story. Things were just happening, but not properly explained. I might buy the second book, but only to find out what happens to the story and the Coldthistle residents. I can't find it in myself to care about Louisa, to be honest.