From the cover and the title’s play on words, I was ready for a lighthearted murder mystery involving witches. However, there were many issues that caused me to struggle through the book, and I can’t recommend it without at least warning potential readers.
PLOT -- N.M. Howell took a long time to start the murder part of the story, spending almost the first third of the book introducing all the characters. I was waiting for the real story to begin, so the large info dump at the beginning seemed more like filler rather than important details. The book would have been better served if the author would have started the mystery aspect much sooner and wove the characterization around that. River is the main character, a newspaper reporter in a small town. Due to her college studies (which included criminology), she is enlisted by the sheriff’s office to help solve the murders. More on this later.
THE WRITING -- The book is written in first person, so we spend a lot of time with River, getting her perspective on life in Brimstone Bay. The difficulty with first person is getting the main character to yield some time, so the other people in the story don’t come off as mostly one-dimensional. Unfortunately, that didn’t happen with this story. We receive a full view of River, and not much on everyone else.
BRIMSTONE BAY – Be prepared to suspend disbelief, over and over and over. I was okay with the main premise, that there are witches and paranormal types in the world, and that non-magical people either don’t believe or might suspect but can’t prove the neighbor down the street is a witch. Throughout the book, though, the author vacillates between people being non-believers to times when suspicion is so high that a suspected witch will be harassed. It is almost as if the people in this small town aren’t aware of each other’s actions. The story would have read better if Ms. Howell had chosen one approach and run with it.
THE PEOPLE – River tells us she found a job after college with a fledgling new paper in a small town. She lives with three other witches (not sure why the three don’t live elsewhere, as River talks a bit about the life for paranormals in the cities) and an older woman who is also a witch. We don’t learn much more about the town’s residents except for the coffee shop owner and his son, as well as the mayor and the sheriff. Character descriptions of everyone besides River are mostly descriptions, and motivations are kept to a minimum.
POLICE PROCEDURE – It was jarring to have River know more about police procedure than the sheriff. Crime scenes were not officially closed off from the public, and officers will never put a gun to a non-suspects head (used in the story to create a false tension). While the book is not a police procedural story, coming close to actual practice would have added necessary realism to the tale.
EDITING & OTHER STUFF – There are enough minor editing errors (punctuation, wrong words that software spell checkers won’t catch) to cause me to notice. The use of vulgarities is at the low end of the spectrum, though in at least one place there is a curse that may upset some Christians.
BOTTOM LINE – The story is “cute” in that it would work with a YA audience, if the author had intended for that to happen. If so, the unbelievable aspects of the story would have been much easier to swallow, and younger audiences are more forgiving or not aware of the missteps. Telling potential readers this is a paranormal mystery leads readers to expect something else, and the story asks for us to ignore too many aspects of how life in the real world actually works. I hope the author finds a balance in subsequent books in this series…unfortunately, I will not be traveling with her. Two-and-a-half to three stars.