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In a far future, Earth had already been visited by an alien race called the Sominids, who came here for the express purpose of drinking and having sex with everyone they could. When one of their infamous parties resulted in the moon being cut in half and killing everyone who happened to live there, they quietly left. Their encounter with the Sominids had taught the human race many things, primarily that faster than light travel did not exist. Denied the stars, the human race began to dwindle in numbers and terminate all of their space programs.

A thousand years after that, a scientist named Edward Q. Rohta circumvented anti-AI laws, laws which had been on the books for millennia, by creating organic creatures to provide manual labor. Instead of dying after ten years, as promised in the company brochure, they would develop flu-like symptoms and go into hiding. Eventually, fed up with the mistreatment they suffered at the hands of humans they rose up and killed every man, woman, and child on the planet.

This is the story of what happens next.

The Brittle Riders; Apocalypses are funny that way.

396 pages, Kindle Edition

Published September 15, 2016

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Bill McCormick

39 books102 followers
Bill "McSciFi" McCormick is an award-winning and critically acclaimed science fiction author, publisher, and raconteur celebrated for his vivid storytelling and unique blend of sci-fi, humor, and social commentary. Known affectionately by fans as "McSciFi," Bill has carved a niche in speculative fiction with works that challenge conventional narratives while exploring complex characters and futuristic worlds.

His bibliography includes standout titles such as The Brittle Riders trilogy, a post-apocalyptic saga hailed for its originality and depth, and Goptri of the Mists, which captures his trademark mix of wit and world-building. Beyond his novels, Bill contributes to comics and graphic novels, such as Legends Parallel and Marcie's Marvels, bringing his creative voice to dynamic visual storytelling.

A tireless advocate for indie publishing and creative collaboration, Bill frequently appears at conventions, panels, and events, sharing insights and connecting with fans. When he's not crafting new tales, he's an active force in the literary and entertainment communities, blending his passion for sci-fi with a commitment to fostering emerging talent.

With a knack for weaving humor and humanity into high-concept stories, Bill "McSciFi" McCormick continues to captivate audiences, leaving a lasting mark on the science fiction landscape.

Find out more about him at BillMcSciFi.com

Awards:

Sci-Fi Editors' Choice 2013 - Bewildering Stories
* A Letter from an Editor

Best Sci-Fi Novel of 2020 - Critters Readers Poll
* SPLICE: HIT BIT TECHNOLOGY

Best Sci-Fi Novel of 2022 - Critters Readers Poll
* The Brittle Riders: Book One (Second Edition)

Best Dystopian Sci-Fi Novel of 2025 - LA Book Fest
* The Brittle Riders: Book One (Second Edition)

Best Science Fiction Novel of 2025 - Hollywood Book Festival
* The Brittle Riders: Book One (Second Edition)

Bronze Medal Science Fiction/Dystopian Novel of 2025 - Global Book Awards
* The Brittle Riders: Book One (Second Edition)

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Profile Image for Claire.
Author 32 books237 followers
October 22, 2017
Recap:
The tyrannical wizard Xhaknar rules over Arreti using brute force and fear tactics. He has a tendency to wipe out those races - or brands - that don't agree with him. But a fellow wizard, or Rangka, called Geldish, brings together an unlikely group of brands known as The Brittle Riders and together they begin planning how to defeat Xhaknar.

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My biggest gripe is having the highly detailed appendix right at the beginning of the book. When world-building, appendices are important so that those readers who want to know the intricate ins and outs of each race etc can refer to them. I'm afraid I fall into the category of reader who doesn't usually bother with them. I prefer to get a feel for the different and unique characters through the book prose. I do have to commend the author on having built such a hugely detailed world with so many different brands although I admit I did struggle to keep them all apart while reading.

At times the prose felt stilted which made it heavy going to read but the fact that the main characters were interesting and there was just enough uncertainty as to whether the daring plan would work out or not meant that I had to read to the end to find out.
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Author 12 books71 followers
November 13, 2018
The world-building was top notch! Take everything a health-nut fears about GMO food and throw it in your Nutra-bullet with the Elfstones of Shannara! Out of this world. That’s a good thing. Actually, it is on this world, but in a future where us products of natural causes (evolution or magic immortal bearded white guy in robes five thousand years ago, whatever you prefer) are long gone and only genetically enhanced “brands” remain. People whose genes are scientifically enhance with animal traits.

This is a big world, too! Full of weirdos of many types, all of whom I grew to love, but admittedly was a lot to take in. This is a preference thing. I’ve come to love little stories in big places, while this is just big. Epic even! The fate of the world hangs in the balance, because some d-bag named Ex Hackner was genetically engineered to be a psychic Hitler on steroids! What’s a badger-person to do but rebel? Right?! By the middle (and admittedly, I’d skipped the “brands” glossary) I’d learned what everyone was and fell into the story. Then it got great!

I’d been long interested in McCormick’s series because we are in a Facebook writer group and his posts are hilarious enough to make me curious about his long form. Then he submitted an article about worldbuilding to my home, the Science Fantasy Hub, and it worked! I bought his book and bumped it in front of all the freebies I try out. I’m glad I did!

Why are you still reading this? Do the right thing. Buy this book and then comment about how much you also enjoyed it. Word of mouth makes good books legendary, after all!
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Author 1 book21 followers
November 28, 2017
In this Book, “The Brittle Riders I,” it tells a story of a new world, “Arreti.” After the human era, many brands live in the new earth. Actually, they were artificially created by human. They sense the seasons: Dark Sun, Dim Sun, Full Sun, and Warm Sun. And many things are happening there. The new world, full of new artificial beings, is no longer like the one we have known before.

For me, it’s not easy to get in the beginning of this book, especially the chapter 1: those details of brands I think readers can skip them. So, I gave this book 4 stars. Maybe the serials are good for TV shows. 

Story: 4.2 stars.

Writing: 4 stars.

Flow: 3.5 stars.

Creativity: 4.5 stars.

Thanks for those ideas of fantastic creatures. I enjoyed them.
216 reviews4 followers
August 20, 2023
The Brittle Riders, the first book of a trilogy, made me feel like there was still work to be done. 'Tell me more, FFS!' sort of way.
But the tale ends on its own. Nevertheless, it piques interest in learning more.
The first page of the book introduces the reader to a post-apocalyptic fantasy Earth where humans have vanished. All other species now roam the world and reign, having emerged through experiments with animals thanks to something dubbed the Gen-O-Pod War.

I think it extremely refreshing that Bill begins his book by outlining the history of the Brittle Riders for his readers. Particularly the bit about the initial iteration (which may have never been released and as a result.
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Author 39 books102 followers
January 24, 2017
This is my first, full length, novel. Below is a quick blurb to let you know what it's about.

In a far future, Earth had already been visited by an alien race called the Sominids, who came here for the express purpose of drinking and having sex with everyone they could. When one of their infamous parties resulted in the moon being cut in half, and killing everyone who happened to live there, they quietly left. Their encounter with the Sominids had taught the human race many things, primarily that faster than light travel did not exist. Denied the stars, the human race began to dwindle in numbers and terminate all of their space programs.

A thousand years after that, a scientist named Edward Q. Rohta circumvented anti-AI laws, laws which had been on the books for millennia, by creating organic creatures to provide manual labor. Instead of dying after ten years, as promised in the company brochure, they would develop flu-like symptoms and go into hiding. Eventually, fed up with the mistreatment they suffered at the hands of humans they rose up and killed every man, woman, and child on the planet.

This is the story of what happens next.

The Brittle Riders; Apocalypses are funny that way.
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Author 60 books178 followers
September 20, 2017
I have to be honest here, this book was a little of a surprise. The cover almost seems the wrong way around. Intentional or not it's weird but catching.

The beginning of the book wasn't for me, it's a set of explations of the world and story and in my mind really should be at the back of the book. While there were some fantastic creatures and mixtures explained it was too much. And towards the end I skipped it.

What I did find interesting after that fact was how quick the story unfolded. Bill has a great way with throwing his characters in at the deep end and right away you start to feel for them. I thought if he'd just put chapter 1, right at the beginning well I might well have given him 5 stars.

What I enjoyed the most I think were the character interactions, some strange names for me to get my head around, but once you were used to them, it settled and I was able to get through the novel pretty quick. An extremely well written story with an intense ending. I sort of wish it were told maybe from some different perspectives, almost felt sumarised, maybe due to the scale of it, I'm not sure. I can see why there are some more books in the series and I look forward to seeing where they go, thank you for the entertaining read.
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Author 9 books8 followers
August 10, 2023
Right of the bat, Bill tells his readers the origin story of the Brittle Riders, and I find that quite refreshing. Especially the part about the first iteration (that has never seen the light of day, and all of us might be better off due to this fact), and how much drugs played into this first creation. While that story is not the one we're reading here, it does explain a lot. It also kind of sets the stage nicely for what to expect.

What fascinates me, though, is the fact that this story doesn't feel as old as it actually dates back. The underlying theme of humans playing God by manipulating genetic material and the results of said experiments coming back to bite humanity in the bottom isn't totally new, to be honest (I'm getting some Jurassic Park vibes here), but this particular brand of genetic experiments gone wrong is not really new, but the presentation is. If the Jurassic Park franchise and the Planet of the Apes franchise had a lovechild, it would probably look like this.


I think he would like to meet his creator. And eat him.

Jurassic Park also wasn't mentioned casually. If you've been around the block long enough (as I have), you'll remember that the scientist in the original Jurassic Park made an error - they only created dinos of one gender, to prevent them mating. But some species on this earth can change their gender - some reptiles do it, clownfishes do it, too. In the case of brittle riders, those genetic experiments should all have died after ten years, but they simply shrugged it off as a flu. So apparently, genetic scientists get their job wrong all the time!


And you botched it.

The subtitle - Apocalypses are funny that way - already tells you this will be quite a humorous read. To give you an example, the alien race of the sominid is described this way:

... they came to Earth for one reason: to party. Like good house guests anywhere, they brought their own brandy. Unlike good house guests, they destroyed the moon and killed tens of thousands of people. However, the incident was alcohol-related and not purposeful.


The question of what genre this book belongs to is not so easily answered. There's a dystopian edge to it, certainly, but that's more of an added adjective to the genre, for which I will probably settle on Epic Fantasy with a touch of the Dark. Because, yeah, despite the genetic modifications, the world is more akin to an Epic Fantasy world, but everything is darker and grittier and dirtier, so it's not High Fantasy.. Which would also be clear from the motley crew of, well, let's call them heroes for lackment of a better term. Bandits would also fit the bill well. Come to think of it - Conan the Barbarian did occasionally battle some overlords without really being a good guy, so maybe Sword & Sorcery is the right genre, for certain definitions of sorcery.

But Epic Fantasy might really be the best description, because Bill made an error that all authors of Epic Fantasy are prone to repeat: he created a whole new vocabulary. It's in the appendix, which - despite it's name - comes before the story. And this really is a point of critique, because it's force feeding the reader with the world building in a way that ensures the reader have forgotten the information faster than they can read it. Yes, that's happening, and it shouldn't be. That's the one thing where the story shows its age, because back in the eighties, that kind of Fantasy was all the rage.


Me, trying to keep up with the appendix

*****

All in all, I think this is kind of a funny read, but it cannot really hide that it started life as a drug fueled story back in the eighties. I would go with 4 stars, but really, all that new vocabulary makes it oftentimes confusing to read, so let's go with 3.5 stars. If you aren't afraid of that - and you like some dark humor - then this might just be what you're looking for!
165 reviews3 followers
August 27, 2023
"The Brittle Riders" is a dystopian science fiction novel that immerses readers in a grim and unsettling future. The story unfolds in a world profoundly affected by the enigmatic Sominids and the consequences of their reckless actions. The narrative takes a dark turn with the emergence of Edward Q. Rohta's organic labor force, which ultimately leads to a devastating apocalypse that wipes out humanity.

Author crafts a narrative that is undeniably unique and thought-provoking. The premise of an alien race, the Sominids, visiting Earth for hedonistic purposes, only to inadvertently destroy the moon and abandon the planet, sets the stage for a world full of mysteries and unanswered questions. This initial scenario is intriguing and raises numerous possibilities, creating a compelling backdrop for the story.

One of the novel's standout features is its exploration of the consequences of circumventing anti-AI laws by creating organic laborers. The gradual revelation of these creatures' abilities and their ultimate rebellion against their human oppressors adds a layer of tension and moral ambiguity to the plot. The story raises pertinent questions about ethics, the treatment of artificial life forms, and the potential consequences of unchecked scientific advancement.
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The writing style is evocative and descriptive, painting a vivid picture of the desolate world and its inhabitants. The author's vocabulaury shines as it creates a future Earth that feels both haunting and believable. The characters, though often morally ambiguous, are well-developed and add depth to the story.



In conclusion, "The Brittle Riders" is a chilling and thought-provoking exploration of a dystopian future where humanity's actions have dire consequences. It challenges readers to consider the moral and ethical implications of scientific advancement while providing a gripping and unique narrative that lingers in the mind long after the final page is turned.
151 reviews2 followers
August 30, 2023
Intermittently, each of us has inevitably indulged in contemplations regarding the impending tapestry of our future world. These ruminations have, in cinematic form, portrayed a shifting of epochs, where the denouement of one era heralds the advent of a nascent dawn.

Contained within these pages lies a trilogy encompassing the realms of science fiction and fantasy, an opulent narrative that unfolds across three distinct volumes. Though my predilection typically veers away from this particular genre, I embarked upon this literary odyssey with an inquisitive disposition. The expedition, in turn, proved to be a captivating foray – an exploration characterized by resplendent thrills within a realm seemingly bereft of human presence.

Upon navigating the tapestry of the inaugural volume, my insatiable curiosity endured unrelenting. The seamless transition from the first tome to the subsequent ones engendered a swift and unbroken immersion. Indeed, an unquenchable thirst to discern the trajectory that lay ahead was evoked.

The odyssey, intricately interlaced with characters of profound dimension, is characterized by a discernible metamorphosis. These literary personae undergo a palpable evolution, acquiring a near-tangible authenticity. The narrative current flows with graceful lucidity, a testament to the author's consummate skill in crafting a compelling yet intelligible journey.

In summation, this literary enterprise beckons with an inexorable allure. The equilibrium maintained between style and substance remains strikingly poised, while the narrative arc is propelled by an undercurrent of evolution and transmutation. To discerning bibliophiles seeking a literary work of substance, I wholeheartedly proffer an earnest recommendation to engage with this trilogy.
122 reviews12 followers
August 25, 2023
"The Brittle Riders: Apocalypses are funny that way" presents a narrative that combines elements of science fiction, alien encounters, artificial intelligence, and post-apocalyptic themes to create a unique and intriguing story. The book's premise is undeniably original, with a plot that begins with Earth's encounter with the hedonistic Sominids and subsequently explores the consequences of advanced AI and its exploitation.

The story takes an unexpected turn when Edward Q. Rohta's creation of organic laborers, designed to circumvent anti-AI laws, leads to unintended consequences. The concept of these creatures developing flu-like symptoms and rebelling against their mistreatment is thought-provoking and offers an engaging exploration of the ethics and consequences of advanced technology.

The author's world-building is commendable, painting a vivid picture of a future Earth that has given up on space exploration due to past catastrophic events. The writing style is descriptive and immersive, allowing readers to visualize the settings and characters effectively. The book also touches on themes of human nature, power, and rebellion, adding depth to the narrative.



Overall, "The Brittle Riders: Apocalypses are funny that way" offers a fresh and imaginative take on science fiction and post-apocalyptic storytelling. It is a thought-provoking and original work that explores complex themes within a richly constructed world. Readers who enjoy thought-provoking and morally challenging narratives will find this book to be a compelling and memorable read.
304 reviews2 followers
August 25, 2023
Bill McCormick’s The Brittle Riders is the first book in a trilogy. This is a thrilling book of fantasy and science fiction involving a post-apocalyptic world. The book is the result of the author’s rich and vivid imagination and the readers will get immersed in the world created by this talented author.
The story at the start is about a very talented scientist who has created, yes created, various species. They are created solely to help humans and are being used as labour by humans. Everything was going smoothly but then nothing was smooth and the chaos prevailed. The chain of events that involved revolt by this slave species led to an apocalypse and the mass destruction of the human species.
Then starts a post-apocalyptic struggle, a journey to find a new way of life. However, change is often painful and, in this case, also there will be a lot of challenges. What does this new post-apocalyptic world look like? What are the rules of the game? Who will survive? Who will thrive? To know the answers, you will have to read this very first book of the series. I am eager to learn what happens in the next instalment.
The imagination of the author as well as the storytelling skills are on display throughout the book. The myriad characters with their unique characteristics make the reading experience richer and more engaging. So, if you love this genre and want to get immersed in this fantastical world, do give this book a read.
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133 reviews
August 30, 2023
Bill McCormick's 'The Brittle Riders: Book One' unfolds as an electrifying expedition into a futuristic domain, forged by a mesmerizing encounter with extraterrestrial beings. Through an artful premise, the narrative seamlessly interlaces elements of wit, heart-pounding action, and the allure of science fiction. McCormick's inventive narrative prowess acts as a beacon, stoking curiosity surrounding the enigmatic behavior of the Sominids and its profound implications. A skillfully executed plot twist unravels, unfurling a profound exploration of organic entities in open revolt against their human creators, prompting contemplation on the intricate tangle of ethics and artificial intelligence.

The pulse of McCormick's dynamic prose conjures a vibrant tapestry, evoking echoes of the opulence found within Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. The narrative transports readers to uncharted cosmic realms, resplendent with their own unique lexicon and ambiance, heightening the sensation of the unknown yet strangely resonant immersion. 'The Brittle Riders: Book One' transcends mere storytelling; it emerges as a transformative escapade that not only meets but gracefully surpasses expectations, offering an irresistible sojourn that leaves readers yearning to delve even further into the unending expanses of McCormick's meticulously nurtured cosmos.
178 reviews1 follower
August 30, 2023
So, like, "The Brittle Riders I" takes us on this totally mind-blowing trip to "Arreti." It's like this whole new world that pops up after humans are outta the picture, and these AI beings called brands come into play. Brands can actually sense the changing seasons – Dark Sun, Dim Sun, Full Sun, Warm Sun – which is seriously cool. But, no lie, the start of the book was a bit of a maze, especially with all the brand info in the first chapter. If you're looking for an easy in, you might wanna skip that part. I'm thinking it's like a 4-star vibe. And hey, I'm low-key picturing this as the next hit TV series. Are you?
The story? Yeah, it's racking up a solid 4.2 stars from me. Picture this: Earth meets these wild Sominids, these rowdy aliens who flip everything upside down. Society, tech – you name it. Fast forward, like, a whole millennium, and this genius scientist breaks all the rules by making organic workers. Talk about a twist, right? Ethics and consequences are the name of the game, and it's raising the bar.
Summing up: "The Brittle Riders I" is this wild ride into the unknown of "Arreti." Crazy twists in the story and characters ready to pop. With a bit of a smoother flow, we could be looking at a legit 5-star contender.
949 reviews12 followers
August 25, 2023
Strap in for a wild ride with "The Brittle Riders: Apocalypses are funny that way." It's like someone tossed sci-fi, aliens, AI, and a dash of post-apocalyptic goodness into a blender. First up, Earth's mingling with the pleasure-loving Sominids, and then bam, AI chaos storms in.

But wait, it gets wilder. Edward Q. Rohta cooks up these organic laborer beings to dance around anti-AI rules, and guess what? They catch a flu and kick off a full-on rebellion. Yeah, tech ethics just hit the fan.

But the author? They're the real deal. They build this future Earth where space is a big no-no after some past mess-ups. And the writing style? You're practically in the scenes, soaking it all in.

Oh, and don't miss the themes: human quirks, power showdowns, and a rebellion that's off the charts. "The Brittle Riders" isn't holding back.
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September 5, 2023
I was supplied an ebook in exchange for an honest review.

This had such a gritty, punk-like premise. Much of the story falls outside the blurb, which serves to set the book up rather than summarise the plot. The sominids are mentioned a couple of times but after the halfway mark. We join a ragtag crew of different 'brands' (species) on what's revealed to be a mission of revenge. I liked the clever use of 'brand' here, as a reminder of the commercial origin behind genetic experimentation.

There were changes between past and present tense throughout the narrative which threw me, and interrupted the flow. I enjoyed the different species and how they were all set up with their unique characteristics, but I struggled to picture some of the settings. I would've liked to see 5-senses immersiveness- or even 6 in this case?!

TW: sexual assault
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September 18, 2023
This is such an excellent series! Imagine Orson Scott Card with the comedic affect of Douglas Adams. This series takes the idea of alien races and the invention of a workforce for free and then slaps apocalypse and a humorous retaliation into the mix. It was hilarious, but still had the serious nature needed to make it exciting.
The series is packed with details, which is brilliant with the races and species you need to get to know. It also has excellent world building, which continues to grow and evolve throughout the aeries.
I loved the characters and the variety of personalities we had within the series. It was much needed, to give us a well rounded cast, which was done so well and carried throughout the series.
Overall, I was very impressed and needed a series like this to truly dive into and enjoy.
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April 9, 2023
This book is quite a good story. To be honest, bill is a friend from some years ago and I was surprised to see he had written anything. It's a great surprise! This book, so far, is a very enjoyable read! The plot is a lot of fun and once I got used to the characters and such, I found myself zipping along and not wanting to put it down. I've only read Book one, of which there are three, and I can hardly wait. The only suggestion I could make is, buy each book separately. All three together make for a cumbersome tome. And, since it's a paperback, it's a little hard to handle reading in bed. Well worth the effort however!
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Author 58 books29 followers
January 14, 2025
Being the first novel of a trilogy, The Brittle Riders left me with a sense of unfinished business. Like ‘Tell me more, FFS!’
The story is self conclusive though. Still, it sets up curiosity to know more.
From page one, the reader is introduced to a post-apocalyptic fantasy Earth where mankind is extinct. Something called the Gen-O-Pod War happened and now all other species originated from experiments with animals, wander the earth and rule.
It reminded me of the ending of RUR (Rossum’s Universal Robots) by Karel Capek, as a continuation of it. While the Gen-O-Pod War resulting in different brands made me think about The Uplift Series by David Brin.

Bill McCormick did a good job with worldbuilding, the background, the brands, the places, everything is described with vivid details to drag the reader into this strange world of sentient genetically-modified animals.
It’s a complicated story with a useful glossary at the beginning of the book, explaining all the brands. I’m a big fan of this kind of stories.
Author 10 books143 followers
March 11, 2018
Apocalypses are funny that way.

The Brittle Riders by Bill McCormick was an unexpected pleasure to read. While I love science fiction and fantasy, it took me a while to immerse myself in this new and creative world. This debut novel commences with a preamble establishing the atmosphere that caused the apocalyptic demise of humankind. We’re introduced to Edward Q. Rohta, who is a brilliantly arrogant geneticist (and avowed hedonist). Since the “Plato Wars,” the creation of artificial intelligence was forbidden. Howbeit, Rohta circumvented that law by developing organic hybrids designed to assist humans. The transgenic beings he created were categorized as pseudo-humans and granted no rights. Rohta continued his research, creating more mutated and intermixed species called gen-o-pods, selling them as international slave labor and sex slaves. After fifty prosperous years, a succubus visited Rohta, stating that her contemporaries had studied humanity and deemed humans unscrupulous and indecent creatures that were a blight on their world. War soon followed.

Once the humans were defeated, the gen-o-pods constructed new communities and rid themselves of anything that was reminiscent of their human creators. However, like in all societies, not everyone desired a world of peace. Instead, they launched a war of their own, enslaving other brands (species) they deemed inferior. Xhaknar and Yontar (super soldiers), devastated the new world, and decimated numerous brands.

So, what happens when a succubus, a wolfen, a badgebeth, a rangka, and a braarb walk into the haven bar for a meeting over a few flagons of skank? No, seriously, that’s what happens. What comes next is an intriguing tale regarding those fringe dwellers of the wasteland, and an unfathomable plan by “the dead one,” Geldish.

The Brittle Riders is a well-crafted and intricate tale about these unlikely ‘heroes’ on a quest to free Arreti (formally earth) from its new, tyrannical leader. Author McCormick interweaves the backgrounds and the histories of their brands into an engaging, multi-layered plot. It isn’t merely a good vs evil story. Both concepts are interspersed with gradations of each, creating a compelling tale that you won’t want to stop reading.

As an added benefit, there’s a meticulous accounting of all brand names and descriptions, as well as the new measurements of time, days, years, etc. I referred to it a few times, but after I was well into the story, I didn’t need it. However, it’s always a pleasure when an author includes such details for the readers’ benefit.

The Brittle Riders is full of multidimensional characters, great battles, and the complexities of seeking new allies amongst sectarian brands to benefit the whole of Arreti, whilst rectifying wrongs of the past. In some places, the prose appeared a tad stilted, but once the story unfolded, it flowed quite well. There’s also some adult content, but not overly so. It’s used to demonstrate the turpitude and maleficence of integral characters. Definitely a “Zanubi” of a story, well worth 4.5 stars.

“La’Kyee Shhak.” You’ll understand once you’ve read it.
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