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368 pages, Hardcover
First published June 13, 2017


“That's why I like the blackest nights-the darkest, obsidian skies of winter. When the world is coldest and darkest, the stars shine brightest.”
As complex and attention-grabbing as Julie Eshbaugh's debut novel
Ivory and Bone --but improved with experience! The first book, told from Kol's storytelling perspective, recounts a tale of convoluted motives and a twisted past. Its sequel, Obsidian and Stars, only differs in the maturity of the telling.
The story is told from Mya's perspective, giving us more insight into her relationship with Kol (among other things). Although it's evident she cares deeply for him, it would be much more meaningful and touching for us readers if we were able to connect better with their sometimes cold, distant, and aloof relationship. It just feels that there's something missing (like the spark), even though Mya and Kol act like a paired couple.
Heck, this probably applies to the whole book. The storyline and plot is almost flawless, but the character portrayal could use better attention. It's like you somewhat feel related to the characters, but at the same time, distanced. For example, , you feel detached and callous. There's some mention of it, but the events get turned over quickly. More emphasis should be placed so the reader feels how the plot is changed.
Speaking of the plot, I'd comment that it is very well written. Reminiscent of Ivory and Bone's brewing turmoil (but events are very different, trust me), this keeps you on the edge of your seat at all times. Just when you expect it the least, a surprise pops in. I must say that I admire the series and Ms. Eshbaugh for this. But for me, a reader at the audience's targeted age, it's a little confusing at times. Perhaps if Ms. Eshbaugh was a little more descriptive, there would be less confusion and the story flow smoothly.
Back to Mya's perspective, readers can understand her loyalty to her clan, Olen, and those whom she loves. Her very actions are based off that loyalty, and from hereon, her struggles are impactful. The end wraps up the loose threads quite nicely, but readers can tell there would be future issues ahead.
After finishing Ivory and Bone, I was excited to enjoy Obsidian and Stars, and it did not disappoint. Given, the description may not seem as appealing as Ivory and Bone, but give it a try. It focuses on the finer points of Mya's and Kol's relationship, but also involves major changes to their clans' lives. I recommend it to those who enjoyed Ivory and Bone (but don't binge-read like me, it'll give you a head-ache). These events are to me taken in moderation. Rating: 4.5 stars