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Dearest Friends
Librarian Note: Alternate/new cover edition for ISBN-10 #1502778866 / ISBN-13 #978-1502778864.
What if . . . ? We often speak those words when we finish a novel and the characters remain with us, tempting us to complete the story in our own view. The historical romance Dearest Friends retells Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice as a sensual adventure that will delight a modern audience. Fitzwilliam Darcy left Hertfordshire following a friend’s betrayal, but his heart remained with Elizabeth Bennet, the impertinent beauty who captured his attention in ways no woman ever had before.
When he encounters her unexpectedly in London, he realizes he can no longer live without her and begins his pursuit for her hand. When he finds that Elizabeth is not free to marry, will he again walk away or will he fight for the lady he loves?
While Darcy and Elizabeth pursue their own happiness, around them friendships progress to love and infatuation leads to disappointment. Join a group of unlikely friends as they support our dear couple on their journey, each treading unique paths along the way.
**Contains Mature Content
What if . . . ? We often speak those words when we finish a novel and the characters remain with us, tempting us to complete the story in our own view. The historical romance Dearest Friends retells Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice as a sensual adventure that will delight a modern audience. Fitzwilliam Darcy left Hertfordshire following a friend’s betrayal, but his heart remained with Elizabeth Bennet, the impertinent beauty who captured his attention in ways no woman ever had before.
When he encounters her unexpectedly in London, he realizes he can no longer live without her and begins his pursuit for her hand. When he finds that Elizabeth is not free to marry, will he again walk away or will he fight for the lady he loves?
While Darcy and Elizabeth pursue their own happiness, around them friendships progress to love and infatuation leads to disappointment. Join a group of unlikely friends as they support our dear couple on their journey, each treading unique paths along the way.
**Contains Mature Content
306 pages, Paperback
First published November 3, 2014
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About the author
Pamela Lynne
8 books109 followersPamela Lynne grew up in the American South, surrounded by Southern Gothic works by Faulkner, O'Connor and the like. These authors helped shape her evolving mind and continue to influence everything she produces as an adult. It was a Regency-era wit from across the Atlantic, however, who lit a life-long interest in 19th Century England.
Pamela cites Jane Austen as her primary literary influence and she delves into the darker aspects of Regency life in all her novels, most particularly in the upcoming Granville Legacy Series, where she explores the bonds of family and what it costs to break them.
Dearest Friends: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel, Pamela’s debut work, won the Independent Publishers 2016 IPPY Awards Bronze Medal for Romance.
Pamela currently lives in the rolling hills of Tennessee with her husband of more than a decade, four kids, two cats and one very blond dog. She is still a Marianne hoping to grow into Elinor, or Clairee from Steel Magnolias.
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September 22, 2016
Following the Netherfield ball, Elizabeth and Darcy flee to London in different circumstances. Both are betrayed by people they least excepted––Elizabeth with Mr. Bennet and Jane, and Darcy with Charles. After an accidental run-in at a bookstore in the city, the two find comfort in each other's company and sooner than later, they're on their way to falling in love.
It took me a while to get into the story, but once the ball started rolling, I couldn't put it down!
This is definitely a darker and a more different story than the other existing Pride and Prejudice-inspired novels. Obviously, it's quite different than the original, and some of the characters' behaviors deviate from the original. One point to mention is Mr. Darcy and his having taken certain liberties with Elizabeth quite early in the book. I didn't have a problem with it, but others may not feel the same.
Mr. Bennet and Jane, usually portrayed as Elizabeth's most loyal champions, are the main detriments to her happiness. The former is fueled by addiction and his looming mortality, and the latter by jealousy and desperation. While the former could be easily forgiven and understood and maybe even excused for his madness, I couldn't say the same about the latter. I guess I'm more of a Mr. Darcy than an Elizabeth.
It was interesting to see Jane as something other than the docile angel she was in P&P, and it was even more interesting to see a stark difference between Elizabeth and Jane. One has got all the goodness, and the other has all the appearance of it.
In Pride and Prejudice, Jane and Bingley's relationship was a complete contrast to Elizabeth and Darcy's, and it seems it's the same case here but because of different reasons. In Dearest Friends, while Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy bring out the best in each other, Jane and Mr. Bingley bring out the worst. While one pair is seen as sincere and kind, the other is revealed to more cruel than imagined. Don't judge a book by its cover and all that, I suppose.
Mr. Darcy was quite frisky in this story; a Fitzwilliam trait, so it seems. While Elizabeth managed to keep her virtue with her until their wedding, I can't say Mr. Darcy didn't take liberties. Other than that, he's still the same caring, protective, and decent man we know in P&P.
The Fitzwilliams are a colorful bunch! It was quite entertaining to see them painted in a different light as the usual regal family they're often portrayed––Lady Catherine, especially. You will not see her as a villain in this story. She is still as imposing as ever, but Pamela Lynne has given Lady Catherine an additional layer of a doting and caring mother who only mostly means well for her daughter. I had a laugh with some of her antics. Surprisingly risqué sketches, arguments about headpieces, and poor attempts at giving someone a new hairdo may or may not be involved.
I really like how Anne de Bourgh and Mary Bennet had their own time to shine here! They're often cast off because they're seen as weak and plain, so it was great to read about them and see them have a more proactive role in the story. I like how they can turn two rowdy men such as the Fitzwilliam brothers into more serious and loving folks.
I love the different relationships and marriages shown in the story––Darcy and Elizabeth, Jane and Mr. Bingley, and two other couples. We'll see the different inducements and detriments to marry; be it love, lust, friendship, financial gain, and financial loss among others.
The best thing I loved about Dearest Friends was that it kept me on my toes. I expect one thing to happen, but something entirely different happens instead. Pamela Lynne put a different spin on Pride and Prejudice and made a story of her own, with characters old and new weaved together in a wonderful universe. I'm glad I gave this book a chance! I've fallen in love with the Fitzwilliam men (yes that includes Mr. Darcy!), and have learned to appreciate two lovely wallflowers named Anne de Bourgh and Mary Bennet.
I can't wait to read the sequel!
*Complimentary copy given in exchange for an honest review
It took me a while to get into the story, but once the ball started rolling, I couldn't put it down!
This is definitely a darker and a more different story than the other existing Pride and Prejudice-inspired novels. Obviously, it's quite different than the original, and some of the characters' behaviors deviate from the original. One point to mention is Mr. Darcy and his having taken certain liberties with Elizabeth quite early in the book. I didn't have a problem with it, but others may not feel the same.
Mr. Bennet and Jane, usually portrayed as Elizabeth's most loyal champions, are the main detriments to her happiness. The former is fueled by addiction and his looming mortality, and the latter by jealousy and desperation. While the former could be easily forgiven and understood and maybe even excused for his madness, I couldn't say the same about the latter. I guess I'm more of a Mr. Darcy than an Elizabeth.
It was interesting to see Jane as something other than the docile angel she was in P&P, and it was even more interesting to see a stark difference between Elizabeth and Jane. One has got all the goodness, and the other has all the appearance of it.
In Pride and Prejudice, Jane and Bingley's relationship was a complete contrast to Elizabeth and Darcy's, and it seems it's the same case here but because of different reasons. In Dearest Friends, while Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy bring out the best in each other, Jane and Mr. Bingley bring out the worst. While one pair is seen as sincere and kind, the other is revealed to more cruel than imagined. Don't judge a book by its cover and all that, I suppose.
Mr. Darcy was quite frisky in this story; a Fitzwilliam trait, so it seems. While Elizabeth managed to keep her virtue with her until their wedding, I can't say Mr. Darcy didn't take liberties. Other than that, he's still the same caring, protective, and decent man we know in P&P.
The Fitzwilliams are a colorful bunch! It was quite entertaining to see them painted in a different light as the usual regal family they're often portrayed––Lady Catherine, especially. You will not see her as a villain in this story. She is still as imposing as ever, but Pamela Lynne has given Lady Catherine an additional layer of a doting and caring mother who only mostly means well for her daughter. I had a laugh with some of her antics. Surprisingly risqué sketches, arguments about headpieces, and poor attempts at giving someone a new hairdo may or may not be involved.
I really like how Anne de Bourgh and Mary Bennet had their own time to shine here! They're often cast off because they're seen as weak and plain, so it was great to read about them and see them have a more proactive role in the story. I like how they can turn two rowdy men such as the Fitzwilliam brothers into more serious and loving folks.
I love the different relationships and marriages shown in the story––Darcy and Elizabeth, Jane and Mr. Bingley, and two other couples. We'll see the different inducements and detriments to marry; be it love, lust, friendship, financial gain, and financial loss among others.
The best thing I loved about Dearest Friends was that it kept me on my toes. I expect one thing to happen, but something entirely different happens instead. Pamela Lynne put a different spin on Pride and Prejudice and made a story of her own, with characters old and new weaved together in a wonderful universe. I'm glad I gave this book a chance! I've fallen in love with the Fitzwilliam men (yes that includes Mr. Darcy!), and have learned to appreciate two lovely wallflowers named Anne de Bourgh and Mary Bennet.
I can't wait to read the sequel!
*Complimentary copy given in exchange for an honest review
February 11, 2024
“ Luca Brasi held a gun to his head, and my father assured him that either his brains or his signature would be on the contract.” – Michael Corleone The Godfather
This is a darker P&P variation or a 'what if' many of the characters you love are truly loathsome while the characters you dislike are actually fun.
This book covers some unpleasant topics like drug abuse, spousal abuse, extramarital relations and spitefulness. Additionally there are three explicit sex scenes and several other less explicit. So it is for mature audiences.
In essentials this begins the day after the Netherfield ball and the first twist is that all of the Bennets are forcing Lizzie to marry that odious man, Mr. Collins. Jane is revealed to be much less good and much more self serving than most could imagine.
Luckily the Gardiners come and whisk her off to London; leaving Jane behind to deal with the repercussions. In London a depressed and frightened Lizzie encounters a sad and lonely Mr. Darcy and Bob's your uncle they are soon courting. But nothing is easy for ODC. Luckily he has Uncle Gardiner around to make people an offer they can't refuse ( I love this guy). Here we learn that Mr. Gardiner is quite a businessman, with a little Michael Corleone mixed in. While the Fitzwilliam side of Darcy's family are a lot like Jersey Shore characters. Lady Catherine and Anne are wonderfully created and will pleasantly surprise the reader. I must warn any Jane and Bingley fans that both are disdained repeatedly in this version. While Mary Bennet rises at every attempt to intimidate her. Also Wickham has been dealt with... again by Gardiner.
When a deluded Mr. Bennet arrives in London to force Lizzy to marry Collins the entire group moves to Scotland and Jane becomes even more unpleasant. Lizzy and Darcy's relationship becomes more explicit. And Mary Bennet charms a Viscount.
This is a book where I would love a sequel all about Uncle Gardiner OMG there is one coming https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3...
This is a darker P&P variation or a 'what if' many of the characters you love are truly loathsome while the characters you dislike are actually fun.
This book covers some unpleasant topics like drug abuse, spousal abuse, extramarital relations and spitefulness. Additionally there are three explicit sex scenes and several other less explicit. So it is for mature audiences.
In essentials this begins the day after the Netherfield ball and the first twist is that all of the Bennets are forcing Lizzie to marry that odious man, Mr. Collins. Jane is revealed to be much less good and much more self serving than most could imagine.
Luckily the Gardiners come and whisk her off to London; leaving Jane behind to deal with the repercussions. In London a depressed and frightened Lizzie encounters a sad and lonely Mr. Darcy and Bob's your uncle they are soon courting. But nothing is easy for ODC. Luckily he has Uncle Gardiner around to make people an offer they can't refuse ( I love this guy). Here we learn that Mr. Gardiner is quite a businessman, with a little Michael Corleone mixed in. While the Fitzwilliam side of Darcy's family are a lot like Jersey Shore characters. Lady Catherine and Anne are wonderfully created and will pleasantly surprise the reader. I must warn any Jane and Bingley fans that both are disdained repeatedly in this version. While Mary Bennet rises at every attempt to intimidate her. Also Wickham has been dealt with... again by Gardiner.
When a deluded Mr. Bennet arrives in London to force Lizzy to marry Collins the entire group moves to Scotland and Jane becomes even more unpleasant. Lizzy and Darcy's relationship becomes more explicit. And Mary Bennet charms a Viscount.
This is a book where I would love a sequel all about Uncle Gardiner OMG there is one coming https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3...
March 21, 2015
IMAGINE Lady Catherine with a sketch pad in a carriage, admonishing Anne and Georgiana to close their eyes and cover their ears, while she gives Elizabeth a talk/lesson on what to expect on her wedding night, along with illustrations (ROFL) and those drawings are not a result of her own experiences with her deceased husband but (gasp!) her lover.
And then there is the locket of Col. Richard Fitzwilliam's hair...gained not from him giving it to (WON'T TELL as that would be too much of a spoiler) but from the above mentioned lady pulling his hair out.
I must say that this author does some very creative things with the Darcy, Fitzwilliam and Bennet families. But two things are needed: a proofreader and a sequel. There are just too many loose strings and I do hope the author is writing Volume II. Jane's story, Anne's story, Mary's story, Lydia's story all beg for follow-up.
There are scenes of passion but Darcy does restrain himself somewhat until their wedding night. The Darcy here is very resolute on keeping those he loves safe, as is Uncle Gardiner. Really liked the latter's actions: in guarding Elizabeth while in London, in clearing house at Longbourne when he discovers the actions of Mr. Bennet, and in dealing with members of the ton who allow their debauchery to send them into penury. The plot has been detailed in other reviews and I can only add that it keeps you turning pages.
Friendships: Viscount/Henley's attitude and change of character and then his friendship with Mary, Anne's coming to London with her mother and her FINALLY taking steps to secure her own happiness, (although at times she does show some of her mother's abrasiveness), Georgiana also making friends and speaking out and then there are Lady Susan and Lady C. = all that is not a friendship. I had to laugh when the former "invites" her two sons for tea and then spoils their appetite by disclosing that her husband is re-claiming his rights due to his lack of money for his mistresses. Jane's being Elizabeth's best friend undergoes a change - and you must read to understand this. The author gives this a very reasonable treatment but it is a shock to lovers of canon. Mr. Bennet's relationship with Elizabeth, with her being his favorite shakes foundations of the family, extending to in-law in London.
This story was a very imaginative variation to P&P. I recommend it to lovers of such.
And then there is the locket of Col. Richard Fitzwilliam's hair...gained not from him giving it to (WON'T TELL as that would be too much of a spoiler) but from the above mentioned lady pulling his hair out.
I must say that this author does some very creative things with the Darcy, Fitzwilliam and Bennet families. But two things are needed: a proofreader and a sequel. There are just too many loose strings and I do hope the author is writing Volume II. Jane's story, Anne's story, Mary's story, Lydia's story all beg for follow-up.
There are scenes of passion but Darcy does restrain himself somewhat until their wedding night. The Darcy here is very resolute on keeping those he loves safe, as is Uncle Gardiner. Really liked the latter's actions: in guarding Elizabeth while in London, in clearing house at Longbourne when he discovers the actions of Mr. Bennet, and in dealing with members of the ton who allow their debauchery to send them into penury. The plot has been detailed in other reviews and I can only add that it keeps you turning pages.
Friendships: Viscount/Henley's attitude and change of character and then his friendship with Mary, Anne's coming to London with her mother and her FINALLY taking steps to secure her own happiness, (although at times she does show some of her mother's abrasiveness), Georgiana also making friends and speaking out and then there are Lady Susan and Lady C. = all that is not a friendship. I had to laugh when the former "invites" her two sons for tea and then spoils their appetite by disclosing that her husband is re-claiming his rights due to his lack of money for his mistresses. Jane's being Elizabeth's best friend undergoes a change - and you must read to understand this. The author gives this a very reasonable treatment but it is a shock to lovers of canon. Mr. Bennet's relationship with Elizabeth, with her being his favorite shakes foundations of the family, extending to in-law in London.
This story was a very imaginative variation to P&P. I recommend it to lovers of such.
December 29, 2015
One of my favorite P&P variations!!
It took me a little while, but after a few chapters, I was in love with these characters! The story is a little darker than other P&P variations, but it held together well and ultimately, I really enjoyed the characters and their relationships as a family! I really look forward to the author's next book!!!
It took me a little while, but after a few chapters, I was in love with these characters! The story is a little darker than other P&P variations, but it held together well and ultimately, I really enjoyed the characters and their relationships as a family! I really look forward to the author's next book!!!
February 8, 2025
A spicy romance, a gothic plot, and a large colorful cast of characters living and loving against the backdrop of Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice was a feast for my ears as I listened in to this historical romance variation story.
In the original Pride & Prejudice one gets a genteel, witty story of class difference romance, duty and family, and a light classical delight. In this nod to the original, there is added to the Regency world intrigue, manipulation, an exploration of sensual delight for the main romance pair, and a large cast of characters who are given sub-plots of their own. It becomes a family saga that expands from the early section of the book that focuses on the courtship- a very sexy one for a pair who come together quickly, I might add- to take in the scope of members of their extended family and friends building friendship and romantic relationships of their own.
For those coming to the story with a basic historical romance in mind, this change-up in the story might come as something of surprise because the romance of Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth is not the only focal point through a portion of the end story. They are there and definitely loving their way through life, but other character stories and elements rise to share equal focus. At its core, this story explores how people respond to life’s trials. Do they step up and cling to good principles or do they give in to base instinct- even throwing a loved one under the carriage wheels to save themselves? I thought it was an interesting way to strip people down to their core selves. Some fell, but rose again and others chose to take the easiest path. So, yes, great character exploration going on besides the salacious romance and intrigue.
In fact, I will commit a sacrilege to P&P lovers to say that I was more intrigued by some of the side characters in Dearest Friends though not to say I didn’t love this lovey-dovey Darcy and Elizabeth. A warrior and slightly ruthless Uncle Gardiner, a bright and good Miss Mary, a tarnished, but redeemable Viscount Hedley, and even an envious, grasping Jane were all absolutely amazing. I was glad to delve into all their lives and was left wanting more- thankfully there is a sequel.
This was my first time listening to narrator Brigid Lohrey and I thought she wielded a great talent to handle such a large cast of characters of gender, age, and class distinction even some regional dialect changes were evident. She put emotion and pacing to good use. I definitely want more of her work.
All in all, this was a deeply satisfying listen and I can recommend it to not only Austen fans, but those who adore spicy historical romance and family sagas.
My thanks to the author for the opportunity to listen to the book in exchange for an honest review.
In the original Pride & Prejudice one gets a genteel, witty story of class difference romance, duty and family, and a light classical delight. In this nod to the original, there is added to the Regency world intrigue, manipulation, an exploration of sensual delight for the main romance pair, and a large cast of characters who are given sub-plots of their own. It becomes a family saga that expands from the early section of the book that focuses on the courtship- a very sexy one for a pair who come together quickly, I might add- to take in the scope of members of their extended family and friends building friendship and romantic relationships of their own.
For those coming to the story with a basic historical romance in mind, this change-up in the story might come as something of surprise because the romance of Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth is not the only focal point through a portion of the end story. They are there and definitely loving their way through life, but other character stories and elements rise to share equal focus. At its core, this story explores how people respond to life’s trials. Do they step up and cling to good principles or do they give in to base instinct- even throwing a loved one under the carriage wheels to save themselves? I thought it was an interesting way to strip people down to their core selves. Some fell, but rose again and others chose to take the easiest path. So, yes, great character exploration going on besides the salacious romance and intrigue.
In fact, I will commit a sacrilege to P&P lovers to say that I was more intrigued by some of the side characters in Dearest Friends though not to say I didn’t love this lovey-dovey Darcy and Elizabeth. A warrior and slightly ruthless Uncle Gardiner, a bright and good Miss Mary, a tarnished, but redeemable Viscount Hedley, and even an envious, grasping Jane were all absolutely amazing. I was glad to delve into all their lives and was left wanting more- thankfully there is a sequel.
This was my first time listening to narrator Brigid Lohrey and I thought she wielded a great talent to handle such a large cast of characters of gender, age, and class distinction even some regional dialect changes were evident. She put emotion and pacing to good use. I definitely want more of her work.
All in all, this was a deeply satisfying listen and I can recommend it to not only Austen fans, but those who adore spicy historical romance and family sagas.
My thanks to the author for the opportunity to listen to the book in exchange for an honest review.
March 3, 2025
Still 5 stars after 2nd read.
This book is a favorite. it's like Pride and Prejudice meets Days of our Lives. I enjoy the characters and the romance. it is for mature audiences, so be warned. I really like the Fitzwilliams with all their faults and Sebastian is an interesting character. Darcy and Lizzy come to an early understanding and it is bautiful to watch. Lots of Drama, Caroline is involved but mostly off page. I also like this Lady C and think Anne is an interesting character as well.
Highly recommend if you enjoy reading JAFF.
This book is a favorite. it's like Pride and Prejudice meets Days of our Lives. I enjoy the characters and the romance. it is for mature audiences, so be warned. I really like the Fitzwilliams with all their faults and Sebastian is an interesting character. Darcy and Lizzy come to an early understanding and it is bautiful to watch. Lots of Drama, Caroline is involved but mostly off page. I also like this Lady C and think Anne is an interesting character as well.
Highly recommend if you enjoy reading JAFF.
January 24, 2015
Curiosity always takes me when I open each new variation tale based on one of Jane Austen's books. Authors can be so creative with the storyline, the characters or both and I like to see what unfolds as a result. In this case it was both as this tale was based on the story, but took liberties with the plot early on and very much so with the characters. I suppose that can be taken as a warning to those who don't care for that sort of thing. Personally, I'm rather flexible and enjoying pursuing lots of vague possibilities for the story. This one did some amazing things. I loved most of it as it brought characters and their story to life, but I confess that my eyes nearly popped out of my head at a few of the liberties taken with the characters that made for a much more interesting story let me tell you.
In this case the story asks the question of what if Mr. Bennet for his own purposes doesn't support Lizzy and insists on the match with Collins and what if Jane too demands it forcing Elizabeth to flee to her Gardiner relations for sanctuary. It also wonders what would happen if a startling event drives a wedge between Darcy and Bingley so that Darcy is startled out of his complacency. This sets a whole new chain of events in motion that really upsets the apple cart.
After the Netherfield Ball, Darcy flees Hertfordshire to London confused and concerned about his undesired feelings about the vivacious and beautiful Miss Elizabeth Bennet, concerned about the sister who nearly ran off with a scoundrel, and disillusioned with a man he thought of as friend. He is under pressure to marry well and he knows there are expectations from his upper class family and from all of London society, but he can't stop thinking about the woman he secretly loves. She was his chance at love and he threw it away. He is feeling lonely and very low until the day he unexpectedly encounters Elizabeth in London. Darcy takes this as his second chance to pursue the woman that he should have never left in the first place particularly after he discovers what a hard time she experienced after his departure.
Elizabeth knows she needs to rouse her spirits from the despondence she has felt since her family hurt her so deeply when they all pushed for her to marry the odious Mr. Collins just to secure their future. Elizabeth loves her family and would make many sacrifices for them, but that is not one of them. Her sweet sister and best friend, Jane's horrid attack of words was the biggest blow and she would have given in if the Gardiners had not come and taken her away. Now she is surprised at her own warm welcome of Mr. Darcy like he is an old friend since she hadn't especially liked him when he was visiting Hertfordshire. It is with amazement that she observes a wholly different man it seems who is solicitous and kind and not only to her, but also her merchant class relations. His courtship is welcome and makes her the most happy she has ever been in spite of the machinations of her relations and the oddities of his.
And so the courtship and love affair begins that must battle class differences, thwarted matchmakers, conniving and dangerous relations, duty to family and other unforeseen circumstances. Surrounding Darcy and Elizabeth, their relations get their own story lines with some triumphant and hopeful, others to disappointment and still others to heartbreak. Through it all, Darcy and Lizzy fight for their own happiness.
Alright, so as I have stated, this story was all its own. It's focus is mainly on Darcy and Lizzy, but also has many other narrators and story lines. I enjoyed experiencing each character reveal to see what the author had done with them. The Gardners, Georgiana Darcy, the Fitzwilliams, the DeBourghs, the Bennets and a few more original characters all get much more page time than in the original.
The story was engaging from page one and trotted along at a nice pace. I loved the tender heartwarming moments, the tense moments, and the humor that was tucked in for good measure. The plot seemed to be two parts in its focus. The first half focuses almost exclusively on Darcy and Elizabeth and then the second half opens it up to pursue several directions that are all tied together around Darcy and Lizzy. There is a tremendous amount going on and I had to stay on my toes to follow each switch to a new narrator and story thread. I was startled a few times when it would switch over from thread to thread because I was caught up in one so deeply. I don't want to spoil any of the surprises for anyone so I won't share about these threads because the best part for me was some of the big character changes and where these changes took these people's stories. However, some of the things I loved was this new Darcy, Georgiana's stronger less timid presence, a more powerful and less congenial Mr. Gardiner and the intrepid 'come into her own' Mary Bennet.
And that last one, Mary? Yep, the Mary of sermons and bad solos was my favorite character in the story nudging out even Darcy and Lizzy for me (gasp, I know). This girl's story left me tearing up. She was like a rock with her compassion, concern and adherence to duty in the face of all that was against her. I totally wanted a different ending for her and have made up a whole sequel just for my gal, Mary, in my head.
The author did a little something different with Darcy's relations. I cracked up a few times over their antics. The Fitzwilliams are a family of rogues and they have oh so many vices. A family reunion is a chancy thing with their volatile behavior. I had a good time every time the group of them were together.
The romance- or should I say romances- in this book are warmer and spicier than the original. Darcy might put on a cold, haughty face toward society, but the Darcy with his Lizzy is playful, passionate and protective. His love is strong and sure. I loved seeing him so steady and solicitous. Lizzy was less blinded by prejudice so early on she was very much in love. Their barriers were all exterior ones so there was thankfully very little angst. Others come together in this story and I was shocked out of my socks with who ended up running away to Gretna Green, who paired off and courted, who had the marriages of convenience and well- it was like impish cupids were busy with their bows and arrows mixing and matching. I will admit to wanting to see a bit more of where the side romances went and checking in with our main pair in the future.
All in all, I enjoyed this one and look forward to more from the author in future. Austenesque lovers who don't mind a lot of liberty taken with the original tale and like their romance on the slightly spicy side will probably want to give this one a try.
In this case the story asks the question of what if Mr. Bennet for his own purposes doesn't support Lizzy and insists on the match with Collins and what if Jane too demands it forcing Elizabeth to flee to her Gardiner relations for sanctuary. It also wonders what would happen if a startling event drives a wedge between Darcy and Bingley so that Darcy is startled out of his complacency. This sets a whole new chain of events in motion that really upsets the apple cart.
After the Netherfield Ball, Darcy flees Hertfordshire to London confused and concerned about his undesired feelings about the vivacious and beautiful Miss Elizabeth Bennet, concerned about the sister who nearly ran off with a scoundrel, and disillusioned with a man he thought of as friend. He is under pressure to marry well and he knows there are expectations from his upper class family and from all of London society, but he can't stop thinking about the woman he secretly loves. She was his chance at love and he threw it away. He is feeling lonely and very low until the day he unexpectedly encounters Elizabeth in London. Darcy takes this as his second chance to pursue the woman that he should have never left in the first place particularly after he discovers what a hard time she experienced after his departure.
Elizabeth knows she needs to rouse her spirits from the despondence she has felt since her family hurt her so deeply when they all pushed for her to marry the odious Mr. Collins just to secure their future. Elizabeth loves her family and would make many sacrifices for them, but that is not one of them. Her sweet sister and best friend, Jane's horrid attack of words was the biggest blow and she would have given in if the Gardiners had not come and taken her away. Now she is surprised at her own warm welcome of Mr. Darcy like he is an old friend since she hadn't especially liked him when he was visiting Hertfordshire. It is with amazement that she observes a wholly different man it seems who is solicitous and kind and not only to her, but also her merchant class relations. His courtship is welcome and makes her the most happy she has ever been in spite of the machinations of her relations and the oddities of his.
And so the courtship and love affair begins that must battle class differences, thwarted matchmakers, conniving and dangerous relations, duty to family and other unforeseen circumstances. Surrounding Darcy and Elizabeth, their relations get their own story lines with some triumphant and hopeful, others to disappointment and still others to heartbreak. Through it all, Darcy and Lizzy fight for their own happiness.
Alright, so as I have stated, this story was all its own. It's focus is mainly on Darcy and Lizzy, but also has many other narrators and story lines. I enjoyed experiencing each character reveal to see what the author had done with them. The Gardners, Georgiana Darcy, the Fitzwilliams, the DeBourghs, the Bennets and a few more original characters all get much more page time than in the original.
The story was engaging from page one and trotted along at a nice pace. I loved the tender heartwarming moments, the tense moments, and the humor that was tucked in for good measure. The plot seemed to be two parts in its focus. The first half focuses almost exclusively on Darcy and Elizabeth and then the second half opens it up to pursue several directions that are all tied together around Darcy and Lizzy. There is a tremendous amount going on and I had to stay on my toes to follow each switch to a new narrator and story thread. I was startled a few times when it would switch over from thread to thread because I was caught up in one so deeply. I don't want to spoil any of the surprises for anyone so I won't share about these threads because the best part for me was some of the big character changes and where these changes took these people's stories. However, some of the things I loved was this new Darcy, Georgiana's stronger less timid presence, a more powerful and less congenial Mr. Gardiner and the intrepid 'come into her own' Mary Bennet.
And that last one, Mary? Yep, the Mary of sermons and bad solos was my favorite character in the story nudging out even Darcy and Lizzy for me (gasp, I know). This girl's story left me tearing up. She was like a rock with her compassion, concern and adherence to duty in the face of all that was against her. I totally wanted a different ending for her and have made up a whole sequel just for my gal, Mary, in my head.
The author did a little something different with Darcy's relations. I cracked up a few times over their antics. The Fitzwilliams are a family of rogues and they have oh so many vices. A family reunion is a chancy thing with their volatile behavior. I had a good time every time the group of them were together.
The romance- or should I say romances- in this book are warmer and spicier than the original. Darcy might put on a cold, haughty face toward society, but the Darcy with his Lizzy is playful, passionate and protective. His love is strong and sure. I loved seeing him so steady and solicitous. Lizzy was less blinded by prejudice so early on she was very much in love. Their barriers were all exterior ones so there was thankfully very little angst. Others come together in this story and I was shocked out of my socks with who ended up running away to Gretna Green, who paired off and courted, who had the marriages of convenience and well- it was like impish cupids were busy with their bows and arrows mixing and matching. I will admit to wanting to see a bit more of where the side romances went and checking in with our main pair in the future.
All in all, I enjoyed this one and look forward to more from the author in future. Austenesque lovers who don't mind a lot of liberty taken with the original tale and like their romance on the slightly spicy side will probably want to give this one a try.
August 9, 2023
There is definitely what to like about this book, but for me personally, there is more not to like.
I am not a fan of gratuitous obligatory lust scenes in JAFFs, (although I know many do like it) it is just so far from the genre. This author might have been better spending more time on the language of the book and getting it more accurate for the genre, instead of the many modern phrases used in dialogs and inner thoughts.
Also, Jane? Puh-leeze girl! you don't mess with the Jane character! Just - no.
MAybe because it is a shorter book, and limited on character and story development? Idk, by the time I got to the end, I felt like, whatever, didn't get anything out of that one.
One point- Mary and the Viscount- only really nice switch up that I enjoyed, but like others noted-an unfinished part of the story.
I am not a fan of gratuitous obligatory lust scenes in JAFFs, (although I know many do like it) it is just so far from the genre. This author might have been better spending more time on the language of the book and getting it more accurate for the genre, instead of the many modern phrases used in dialogs and inner thoughts.
Also, Jane? Puh-leeze girl! you don't mess with the Jane character! Just - no.
MAybe because it is a shorter book, and limited on character and story development? Idk, by the time I got to the end, I felt like, whatever, didn't get anything out of that one.
One point- Mary and the Viscount- only really nice switch up that I enjoyed, but like others noted-an unfinished part of the story.
April 20, 2015
What if after the Netherfield Ball, both Darcy and Elizabeth were hurt by people very close to them?
What if Mr. Bennet’s insistence for Elizabeth to marry Mr. Collins and Jane’s support of his decision caused Elizabeth to cut ties with her relations and escape to London and live with the Gardiners? And what if Caroline Bingley’s failed attempt to compromise Darcy and Bingley’s selfish demands that he marry his sister forced him end his relationship with his closest friend?
What if, a chance encounter in London brings these two lonely, burdened, and betrayed characters together, and allows them the opportunity to find friendship, happiness, and love…
Similar to several other Austenesque authors, Pamela Lynne has altered a few personality traits of several of Jane Austen’s characters to instigate a change in course – Mr. Bennet is forceful and scheming, Jane is jealous and resentful, and Mr. Bingley is selfish and lazy. There is a reason for these surprising alterations though, and as the story unfolds, the reader will understand the changes made and find them more believable. Even though I adore Mr. Bennet, Jane Bennet, and Mr. Bingley (you know I do!), it is interesting to explore a variation where they are the antagonists instead of the usuals – Wickham, Caroline Bingley, and Lady Catherine.
The first third of this story is very Darcy-and-Elizabeth centric. Their reunion procures an understanding rather early on, but the plot grows with intensity and drama as the story branches out encompass more story-lines for their families. Stepping into the spotlight and fleshed out are the Fitzwilliams, de Bourghs, and Mary Bennet. I loved the story-lines for ALL these characters, each one was well-written, unique, and captivating. In addition, I greatly enjoyed how the story often changed point-of-view, giving readers a chance to understand and observe what was going on in many of the characters’ heads!
While I greatly enjoyed my time with Darcy and Elizabeth – their playful banters, their fervent devotion and need for each other, and their stolen sensual moments, I found myself equally enjoying the time spent with other characters, especially the Fitzwilliam family. In this variation, nearly all members of the Fitzwilliam family are debauched, derelict, and often…drunk! But for the sake of Darcy and supporting his decision to marry Elizabeth, they pull it together and reform some of their habits. It is believed that these negative impulses, baser instincts, and lack of self-control come with being a Fitzwilliam – something all Fitzwilliam descendants have and pass on to their offspring. I found this genetically flawed family so very entertaining, I loved learning about the dreaded and uncontrollable “inner Fitzwilliam” they all possess!
One story-line I was completely riveted to was Mary Bennet’s story-line. The difficulties at home with her parents force her to make some realizations and while she is very prim and proper, she loses her self-importance and sermonizing ways. I loved her development – her simplicity, openness, and kindness greatly endeared her to me. I especially loved her unconventional friendship with Viscount Hedley, I eagerly awaited each of their scenes together and found myself wanting many more! Besides Mary, I loved seeing a different side to Mr. Gardiner, Lady Catherine, and Anne de Bourgh. Lots of hidden secrets to be discovered about these characters!
Dearest Friends is an “excessively diverting” and enthralling Pride and Prejudice variation! I recommend this story to readers who love sensual romances and don’t mind seeing some of Jane Austen’s characters slightly altered. I can hardly wait to read more thoughtful and inventive tales by Pamela Lynne!
Warning: Due to the several intimate and romantic scenes that take place in this novel, I’d recommend this novel for Mature Audiences only.
What if Mr. Bennet’s insistence for Elizabeth to marry Mr. Collins and Jane’s support of his decision caused Elizabeth to cut ties with her relations and escape to London and live with the Gardiners? And what if Caroline Bingley’s failed attempt to compromise Darcy and Bingley’s selfish demands that he marry his sister forced him end his relationship with his closest friend?
What if, a chance encounter in London brings these two lonely, burdened, and betrayed characters together, and allows them the opportunity to find friendship, happiness, and love…
Similar to several other Austenesque authors, Pamela Lynne has altered a few personality traits of several of Jane Austen’s characters to instigate a change in course – Mr. Bennet is forceful and scheming, Jane is jealous and resentful, and Mr. Bingley is selfish and lazy. There is a reason for these surprising alterations though, and as the story unfolds, the reader will understand the changes made and find them more believable. Even though I adore Mr. Bennet, Jane Bennet, and Mr. Bingley (you know I do!), it is interesting to explore a variation where they are the antagonists instead of the usuals – Wickham, Caroline Bingley, and Lady Catherine.
The first third of this story is very Darcy-and-Elizabeth centric. Their reunion procures an understanding rather early on, but the plot grows with intensity and drama as the story branches out encompass more story-lines for their families. Stepping into the spotlight and fleshed out are the Fitzwilliams, de Bourghs, and Mary Bennet. I loved the story-lines for ALL these characters, each one was well-written, unique, and captivating. In addition, I greatly enjoyed how the story often changed point-of-view, giving readers a chance to understand and observe what was going on in many of the characters’ heads!
While I greatly enjoyed my time with Darcy and Elizabeth – their playful banters, their fervent devotion and need for each other, and their stolen sensual moments, I found myself equally enjoying the time spent with other characters, especially the Fitzwilliam family. In this variation, nearly all members of the Fitzwilliam family are debauched, derelict, and often…drunk! But for the sake of Darcy and supporting his decision to marry Elizabeth, they pull it together and reform some of their habits. It is believed that these negative impulses, baser instincts, and lack of self-control come with being a Fitzwilliam – something all Fitzwilliam descendants have and pass on to their offspring. I found this genetically flawed family so very entertaining, I loved learning about the dreaded and uncontrollable “inner Fitzwilliam” they all possess!
One story-line I was completely riveted to was Mary Bennet’s story-line. The difficulties at home with her parents force her to make some realizations and while she is very prim and proper, she loses her self-importance and sermonizing ways. I loved her development – her simplicity, openness, and kindness greatly endeared her to me. I especially loved her unconventional friendship with Viscount Hedley, I eagerly awaited each of their scenes together and found myself wanting many more! Besides Mary, I loved seeing a different side to Mr. Gardiner, Lady Catherine, and Anne de Bourgh. Lots of hidden secrets to be discovered about these characters!
Dearest Friends is an “excessively diverting” and enthralling Pride and Prejudice variation! I recommend this story to readers who love sensual romances and don’t mind seeing some of Jane Austen’s characters slightly altered. I can hardly wait to read more thoughtful and inventive tales by Pamela Lynne!
Warning: Due to the several intimate and romantic scenes that take place in this novel, I’d recommend this novel for Mature Audiences only.
July 1, 2021
Entertaining & jam-packed
First and foremost, in hopes that you might not be caught unawareness as I, the first couple of chapters, quite frankly, sucked. Serendipitously, akin to our dear Mr Darcy, it improves upon acquaintance, and has merited my forgiveness for such a rocky start.
Synopsis:
Lizzy and Darcy run into each other a couple of weeks after they both fled Hertfordshire (separately) after the Netherfield ball. Lizzy was driven from her home due to the pressure from everyone in her family (excluding Mary) to wed Mr Collins.
Lizzy’s world has been turned upside down, betrayed by the two she loved most: Mr Bennet and Jane. As much as I adore Jane, I am a sucker for the occasional Jane villain story, although here she is more weak willed & selfish, than blatantly mean.
Jane:
Literally Everyone:
Betrayal is a heavy theme & the catalyst for the plot.
Impacting not only Lizzy, but also Darcy, who in turn is betrayed by his pal Mr Bingley who tries to force Darcy to wed his sister after Miss Bingley tried to compromise him.
Darcy rightly refuses and severs his friendship to Bingley.
For some reason, though not well explained, Lizzy- before she is reunited w/ Darcy- is filled with warm feelings of friendship and understanding for Mr. Darcy. Quite the 180. This is what was hardest for me to swallow and delayed my regard as it made the beginning quite silly & contrived.
This is newfound regard is taken even further when Lizzy and Darcy run into each other at a bookstore in London Bond street, and without rhyme, reason, or an adjustment period, sparks fly. They are officially courting the next day and already taking liberties.
They really go from 0 to 100, and it’s a hard to wrap the mind around as is any insta love, and due to this, and how it affected the dialogue, it make them both sound simple, not the intelligent, logical creatures Jane Austen created that we all esteem. I almost quit the book several times as it was a cringe fest to plow through.
However, patience is a virtue oft rewarded as after this illogical patch things start to get interesting, well written and plausible. I found myself heartily laughing and falling in love with the author’s depiction of the Fitzwilliams and Mary Bennet.
The Fitzwilliams have this genetic predisposition to having a bit too much fun and submitting to baser instincts, which I found as a charming way to even the claim on whose relations are more embarrassing. There is a scene when Lizzy has her first glimpse to a Fitzwilliam family gathering, and it is quite what you would expect.
What Tickled my Fancy:
✿Darcy x Georgiana sibling relationship. One scene I particularly enjoyed was Darcy easing Georgie's guilt on her near elopement by explaining that Fitzwilliam blood has a propensity for debauchery and licentious behavior, and that he himself struggled against it and had failed previous.
Darcy even offers Georgiana her first glass of brandy, which goes down smoothly right away, to ease her into a frank conversation.
Georgie:Why didn't you tell me about the Fizwilliam genes before?
Darcy, pretty much:
Georgiana is very relieved, and Darcy and her bond over this, I thought it a realistic family moment.
“So we are both sad excuses for Darcys?”
✿Anne and Lady Catherine were formidable and strong women. I loved Anne getting to be livelier and sturdier and passionate, and Lady Catherine getting more layers to her
✿All the respect to Darcy taking Lydia, Kitty, and Mrs Bennet to hand. So cathartic!
✿Georgiana, Anne, and Mary being besties made so much sense, and I can't believe it's not done more in JAFF!
✿Viscount Sebastian and his friendship with Mary; the dichotomy of their personalties surprisingly contributed a tangible chemistry.
✿How playful ODC are with each other- adorable!
✿Mr Gardiner can really get it in this, he is a straight up gangster, Cosa Nostra level, and it suits him. I always love when the Gardiners succeed in JAFF. They deserve naught but the best!
What Courted My Displeasure:
These complaints refer to the beginning of the novel, these cease to be relevant as with time familiarity makes sense, just not right off the bat.
➳ Darcy just distributes kisses on her hand, calls her by her christian name, and drops “My love” and other endearments not to mention liberties in caressing her cheek starting 5 minutes from their reunion and Lizzy takes this with insouciance? Pardon me but I think not! Odd indeed and took me out of the story
I respect a little self awareness on the authors part!
➳ Author plays fast and loose with rules of propriety, it wouldn't phase me if it was just between Darcy and Lizzy, but every character seems to disregard it in terms of addressing each other, touching, etc.
Verdict
Charming, funny, thematic, and explores other side characters in a fulfilling manner. As I stated ad nauseam, I was perplexed with the nonsense start, but the rest felt akin to a different book, and boy was I glad. I was satisfied enough that I do intend to read another of Ms Lynne's work soon.
Edit: And I did! Sketching Character is her superior work and in my top ten JAFFs, I recommend that foremost.
2nd Read: Bumped up from 3 to 4 stars.
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Coquette Cayenne 🌶 🌶🌶/5 ꙳
First and foremost, in hopes that you might not be caught unawareness as I, the first couple of chapters, quite frankly, sucked. Serendipitously, akin to our dear Mr Darcy, it improves upon acquaintance, and has merited my forgiveness for such a rocky start.
Synopsis:
Lizzy and Darcy run into each other a couple of weeks after they both fled Hertfordshire (separately) after the Netherfield ball. Lizzy was driven from her home due to the pressure from everyone in her family (excluding Mary) to wed Mr Collins.
Lizzy’s world has been turned upside down, betrayed by the two she loved most: Mr Bennet and Jane. As much as I adore Jane, I am a sucker for the occasional Jane villain story, although here she is more weak willed & selfish, than blatantly mean.
Jane:
“But I can call Jane a shrew?”
Sebastian shrugged. “You may call her whatever you like, and unless you call her kind or loyal, it would likely be true.”
Literally Everyone:
Betrayal is a heavy theme & the catalyst for the plot.
Impacting not only Lizzy, but also Darcy, who in turn is betrayed by his pal Mr Bingley who tries to force Darcy to wed his sister after Miss Bingley tried to compromise him.
Darcy rightly refuses and severs his friendship to Bingley.
For some reason, though not well explained, Lizzy- before she is reunited w/ Darcy- is filled with warm feelings of friendship and understanding for Mr. Darcy. Quite the 180. This is what was hardest for me to swallow and delayed my regard as it made the beginning quite silly & contrived.
This is newfound regard is taken even further when Lizzy and Darcy run into each other at a bookstore in London Bond street, and without rhyme, reason, or an adjustment period, sparks fly. They are officially courting the next day and already taking liberties.
They really go from 0 to 100, and it’s a hard to wrap the mind around as is any insta love, and due to this, and how it affected the dialogue, it make them both sound simple, not the intelligent, logical creatures Jane Austen created that we all esteem. I almost quit the book several times as it was a cringe fest to plow through.
However, patience is a virtue oft rewarded as after this illogical patch things start to get interesting, well written and plausible. I found myself heartily laughing and falling in love with the author’s depiction of the Fitzwilliams and Mary Bennet.
The Fitzwilliams have this genetic predisposition to having a bit too much fun and submitting to baser instincts, which I found as a charming way to even the claim on whose relations are more embarrassing. There is a scene when Lizzy has her first glimpse to a Fitzwilliam family gathering, and it is quite what you would expect.
What Tickled my Fancy:
✿Darcy x Georgiana sibling relationship. One scene I particularly enjoyed was Darcy easing Georgie's guilt on her near elopement by explaining that Fitzwilliam blood has a propensity for debauchery and licentious behavior, and that he himself struggled against it and had failed previous.
Darcy even offers Georgiana her first glass of brandy, which goes down smoothly right away, to ease her into a frank conversation.
Georgie:Why didn't you tell me about the Fizwilliam genes before?
Darcy, pretty much:
Georgiana is very relieved, and Darcy and her bond over this, I thought it a realistic family moment.
“So we are both sad excuses for Darcys?”
✿Anne and Lady Catherine were formidable and strong women. I loved Anne getting to be livelier and sturdier and passionate, and Lady Catherine getting more layers to her
✿All the respect to Darcy taking Lydia, Kitty, and Mrs Bennet to hand. So cathartic!
✿Georgiana, Anne, and Mary being besties made so much sense, and I can't believe it's not done more in JAFF!
✿Viscount Sebastian and his friendship with Mary; the dichotomy of their personalties surprisingly contributed a tangible chemistry.
✿How playful ODC are with each other- adorable!
✿Mr Gardiner can really get it in this, he is a straight up gangster, Cosa Nostra level, and it suits him. I always love when the Gardiners succeed in JAFF. They deserve naught but the best!
What Courted My Displeasure:
These complaints refer to the beginning of the novel, these cease to be relevant as with time familiarity makes sense, just not right off the bat.
➳ Darcy just distributes kisses on her hand, calls her by her christian name, and drops “My love” and other endearments not to mention liberties in caressing her cheek starting 5 minutes from their reunion and Lizzy takes this with insouciance? Pardon me but I think not! Odd indeed and took me out of the story
“Common sense may say that their understanding happened far too quickly”(Actual quote from book)
I respect a little self awareness on the authors part!
➳ Author plays fast and loose with rules of propriety, it wouldn't phase me if it was just between Darcy and Lizzy, but every character seems to disregard it in terms of addressing each other, touching, etc.
Verdict
Charming, funny, thematic, and explores other side characters in a fulfilling manner. As I stated ad nauseam, I was perplexed with the nonsense start, but the rest felt akin to a different book, and boy was I glad. I was satisfied enough that I do intend to read another of Ms Lynne's work soon.
Edit: And I did! Sketching Character is her superior work and in my top ten JAFFs, I recommend that foremost.
2nd Read: Bumped up from 3 to 4 stars.
꙳ Spice Scale rating: Coquette Cayenne 🌶 🌶🌶/5 ꙳
August 19, 2015
An emotional roller coaster with a HEA for ODC!!!
To be fair I must first state that I have read this story already and knew that I absolutely loved it. I read it as Miss Lynne was writing and posting it on JAFF website. Though I must say she had an extra chapter in that version, Letters Between Brothers (the Fitzwilliam brothers), so was thrown off not to find it in the published version.
This is a dark Regency retelling of P&P. dearest Friends starts with both Mr Darcy and Elizabeth in London, and both are extremely unhappy with how their life, family and friends have turned out. Elizabeth escaped to Cheapside to live with the Gardiners to avoid being made to marry the devil of a toad that is Mr Collins. Her spirit has been repressed because those of her immediate family that she loved, and thought loved her, had shown their true colors and showed no regard to her feels and desires on the match.
Mr Darcy left Netherfield after the ball angry and betrayed by the friend he thought Mr Bingley was. He continues to feel sad and responsible for what Mr Wickham did to his sister, and has distanced himself because he doesn't know how to interact with her and help her alleviate her pain.
Though with one fateful meeting these two, who feel totally alone, embark on a spectacular journey together. I love this Elizabeth and Darcy. Through the incidents that lead them up to this meeting, they recognize "kindred spirits" (taken from my fav story Anne of Green Gables) in each other and are like bees to honey, drawn to each other. They must navigate the murky waters of crazy relations and deal with those who would hurt them, thankfully having someone to rely on for support.
Some of the funniest scenes in this story happen curtesy of the Fitzwilliam family. The antics of the Viscount and Colonel, the animosity between Lady Catherine and Lady Susan, the silliness of Anne..... oh and throw in some brandy and sherry to the mix and the roof will come down!!!! LOL Miss Lynne really knows how to add comedy to a darker tale!!! Love it!!
I loved having a Mr Bingley and Jane out of character worked, I felt relieved not to read another story where Jane is the "angel" and Bingley is the "puppy dog" (my own description). It tends to irk me that Jane is so infallible and so naive.
I initially had mixed feels for Mary's character. She was pretty true to canon, though to me seemed even more stern. But the fact that she and the Viscount got along softened her to me, that by the end of the book these two have me in tears (not happy tears) and all choked up. I will admit, that this was a big part as to why it took me so long to read the published version. The first read through as Miss Lynne posted the story, I believe I actually cried and had the biggest lump in my throat with their story. Thank goodness I was aware and could prepare myself for the ending.
I will emphatically recommend this book to any and all JAFFers, though there are scenes for mature audiences so will say you should be older than 18 y/o before reading it. Pamela Lynne is a gem in the JAFF world and I look forward, no highly anticipate, her books to come. She has become a favorite author of mine very quickly.
To be fair I must first state that I have read this story already and knew that I absolutely loved it. I read it as Miss Lynne was writing and posting it on JAFF website. Though I must say she had an extra chapter in that version, Letters Between Brothers (the Fitzwilliam brothers), so was thrown off not to find it in the published version.
This is a dark Regency retelling of P&P. dearest Friends starts with both Mr Darcy and Elizabeth in London, and both are extremely unhappy with how their life, family and friends have turned out. Elizabeth escaped to Cheapside to live with the Gardiners to avoid being made to marry the devil of a toad that is Mr Collins. Her spirit has been repressed because those of her immediate family that she loved, and thought loved her, had shown their true colors and showed no regard to her feels and desires on the match.
Mr Darcy left Netherfield after the ball angry and betrayed by the friend he thought Mr Bingley was. He continues to feel sad and responsible for what Mr Wickham did to his sister, and has distanced himself because he doesn't know how to interact with her and help her alleviate her pain.
Though with one fateful meeting these two, who feel totally alone, embark on a spectacular journey together. I love this Elizabeth and Darcy. Through the incidents that lead them up to this meeting, they recognize "kindred spirits" (taken from my fav story Anne of Green Gables) in each other and are like bees to honey, drawn to each other. They must navigate the murky waters of crazy relations and deal with those who would hurt them, thankfully having someone to rely on for support.
Some of the funniest scenes in this story happen curtesy of the Fitzwilliam family. The antics of the Viscount and Colonel, the animosity between Lady Catherine and Lady Susan, the silliness of Anne..... oh and throw in some brandy and sherry to the mix and the roof will come down!!!! LOL Miss Lynne really knows how to add comedy to a darker tale!!! Love it!!
I loved having a Mr Bingley and Jane out of character worked, I felt relieved not to read another story where Jane is the "angel" and Bingley is the "puppy dog" (my own description). It tends to irk me that Jane is so infallible and so naive.
I initially had mixed feels for Mary's character. She was pretty true to canon, though to me seemed even more stern. But the fact that she and the Viscount got along softened her to me, that by the end of the book these two have me in tears (not happy tears) and all choked up. I will admit, that this was a big part as to why it took me so long to read the published version. The first read through as Miss Lynne posted the story, I believe I actually cried and had the biggest lump in my throat with their story. Thank goodness I was aware and could prepare myself for the ending.
I will emphatically recommend this book to any and all JAFFers, though there are scenes for mature audiences so will say you should be older than 18 y/o before reading it. Pamela Lynne is a gem in the JAFF world and I look forward, no highly anticipate, her books to come. She has become a favorite author of mine very quickly.
November 29, 2015
I must admit to really loving this very thought provoking, deep and insightful book.
My heart broke when l read of Lizzy and Darcy staring out a window,lost in thought, lonely and very much alone, while they both resided mere streets away from each other.
My heart jumped for joy when he braced himself and decided he would enter the bookshop and meet the woman who had haunted his dreams, the one person in the world who would be his friend when he dearly needed such in his life......yes, they were to be friends....... and thankfully they realised that what they both desperately needed at this low point in their lives was simply each other.....
This book is so much more that just the story of Darcy and Elizabeth.
It is a tale of the ties of love, family and friendship. It gently probes the family dynamic, how personalities can change due to illness, stress and coercion.
While we may be very familiar with the names of characters, in this story we see other facets of their personalities, we learn their true feelings and the sometimes selfish and hateful reasons for their behaviour.
I thought this book was really fantastic-the love story that is Lizzy and Darcy, the support system provided by close family, the lengths that some will go to to secure a spouse, not to mention the motivations driving each character.
This is truly a book that I heartily recommend. It will cause you to stop and think and will remain in your head and heart
for a long time after you've reached the story's end.
My thanks to Ms Lynne for such a treat!
.
My heart broke when l read of Lizzy and Darcy staring out a window,lost in thought, lonely and very much alone, while they both resided mere streets away from each other.
My heart jumped for joy when he braced himself and decided he would enter the bookshop and meet the woman who had haunted his dreams, the one person in the world who would be his friend when he dearly needed such in his life......yes, they were to be friends....... and thankfully they realised that what they both desperately needed at this low point in their lives was simply each other.....
This book is so much more that just the story of Darcy and Elizabeth.
It is a tale of the ties of love, family and friendship. It gently probes the family dynamic, how personalities can change due to illness, stress and coercion.
While we may be very familiar with the names of characters, in this story we see other facets of their personalities, we learn their true feelings and the sometimes selfish and hateful reasons for their behaviour.
I thought this book was really fantastic-the love story that is Lizzy and Darcy, the support system provided by close family, the lengths that some will go to to secure a spouse, not to mention the motivations driving each character.
This is truly a book that I heartily recommend. It will cause you to stop and think and will remain in your head and heart
for a long time after you've reached the story's end.
My thanks to Ms Lynne for such a treat!
.
December 31, 2019
Pride and Prejudice variation
I loved it! The dark ambience, hot, heavy, funny and unputdownable!
I adored this portrait Elizabeth and Darcy.
Other caracters had been developed nicely as well, although some were quite alteret from Canon.
Anne, Lady C and Darcys butler made me laugh out loud on several occasions with their snarky comments. Jane and Bingley on the other hand, came out less advantageous...
Mr Bennet supports his wife in her quest to marry Lizzy and mr Collins. Lizzy fled to the Gardiners in London where she ran in to mr Darcy. No missunderstandings in this book, they fall head over heels in love but mr Bennet would have nothing of it. He was determind that she should marry mr Collins to keep Bennet blood at Longbourne.
Loved how Caroline got a very deserved set down from both Elizabeth and Darcy.
Heartily recommend this book!
Reread August 2019 and it held up very well.
I loved it! The dark ambience, hot, heavy, funny and unputdownable!
I adored this portrait Elizabeth and Darcy.
Other caracters had been developed nicely as well, although some were quite alteret from Canon.
Anne, Lady C and Darcys butler made me laugh out loud on several occasions with their snarky comments. Jane and Bingley on the other hand, came out less advantageous...
Mr Bennet supports his wife in her quest to marry Lizzy and mr Collins. Lizzy fled to the Gardiners in London where she ran in to mr Darcy. No missunderstandings in this book, they fall head over heels in love but mr Bennet would have nothing of it. He was determind that she should marry mr Collins to keep Bennet blood at Longbourne.
Loved how Caroline got a very deserved set down from both Elizabeth and Darcy.
Heartily recommend this book!
Reread August 2019 and it held up very well.
November 14, 2020
Still love this one! I would love to just start every day reading this book. And now, I can happily say that I have read the sequel as well. Favorite Matlock family for me of any JAFF.
I loved, loved this book. Mary is just terrific and Jane! Yes, I like Jane as the heel.
I loved, loved this book. Mary is just terrific and Jane! Yes, I like Jane as the heel.
September 5, 2021
One of my all time faves. I really want a sequel to this one.
Reread: I read the sequel first and then this one. Wow, they are awesome!
Reread: I read the sequel first and then this one. Wow, they are awesome!
March 7, 2016
Dearest Friends: A Jane Austen Inspired Novel
Whirlwind of a story. Darcy and Elizabeth's love was handled efficiently and effectively upon their accidental meeting at the bookstore. They both have spent months regretting lost chances while he visited Netherfield. Still with his pride and her prejudice, both had feelings for the other. His feelings for Elizabeth were overwhelming, but Elizabeth took more time to warm up to his desires. It was not long befuwore she recognized the changes in this man, changes that gave her hope. Estranged from her family, especially her Father and Jane, she was now living with the Gardiners. Her Father was demanding that she marry Mr. Collins. When she refuses, Jane hateful remarks clinched her decision to be in London. The Gardiners were furious with Mr. Bennet's lack of feeling for his favorite daughter. Jane finally realized
that she was feeling the loss of Bingley and her desires to marry, is why she was so hateful. She writes a letter asking for forgiveness and warns her that their father and Collins will eventually come to claim her in London so she should get out of London. Collins comes to Longbourn and in the morning were leaving for Elizabeth. Jane and Mary set out before them, and make it before their father and Collins. When she sees the love that Elizabeth and Darcy share, she becomes jealous and envious even more so than before. When she sees Darcy House, her hate returns since her mother told with her beauty she'll marry well, but although Bingley brought her and Mary to London that morning, little has been said between them. Darcy doesn't trust her so he keeps her away from Elizabeth as much as possible. With the help of Richard and the Viscount, they move the entire group out of London to Darcy's estate in Scotland. Their traveling group includes the Fitzwilliam brothers, Bingley, Georgiana, Anne, Jane, and Mary, and the Gardiners following the next day. Darcy remains behind to face her father and Collins. Mr. Bennet is worn out, but it is Collins that raises Darcy's ire. When he arrives, Collins has a young maid against the wall and threatening viscous things he'll do to her if she doesn't tell him where Elizabeth is. Hearing this discussing physical and verbal attack, he wheeled Collins around and clocked him one breaking his jaw. However; when he turns around, Mr. Bennet has a gun focused on him. Darcy can see that Mr. Bennet is not in his right mind, and as Darcy tries to reason with him, Darcy realizes that he means to shoot him. Just as Mr. Bennet pulls the trigger, Darcy hits the floor and Remy takes down Bennet. Darcy has only a flesh wound and Remy stitches. it closed. Darcy is on the way to catch up with his traveling group. The Viscount has arranged for the inns, but some need to share rooms. Unknown to Darcy and Elizabeth they had adjoining rooms. When Darcy arrives, Elizabeth insists that he take a warm bath. When she steps into the room and calls him, she gets no answer. Trying the same several times while walking closer and still no response, she enters behind the screen to find him sleeping. The ever adventurous Elizabeth begins to touch Darcy's bare skin. Lot wanting her to stop her ever lower searching, he shows her how to please him. Gathering Elizabeth in his arms he sets her on the rug in front of the fireplace, grabs the covers and pillows from the bed, and covers them as he brings Elizabeth to satisfaction. They fall asleep, and in the morning, Jane finds them together. She rushes out of his room, through Elizabeth's room, and enters the hallway. Sebastian, the Viscount, stops her from what that she was attempting to do. Back in her room, Mary is bewildered seeing Jane curled up in a fetal position sobbing. Elizabeth comes in to speak to Jane, and finally lets every thing come out. Elizabeth forgives words, but tells her trust will not be so easily done. Reaching Scotland, his servants from Pemberley have everything ready for their arrival. Mrs. Reynolds, per instructions, has brought the parson from Darcy's home parrish to marry them on tomorrow. Georgiana stands up for Elizabeth. Many questioned why her elder wasn't asked. Those that knew the reason were shocked. After marrying, two other couples had their marriages over the blacksmith's anvil: Jane and Bingley, Anne and Richard. When Darcy and Elizabeth come back to Longbourn, and they spend three miserable weeks before Mr. Bennet dies. Elizabeth tries to remember the father that was, but it was hard because of his confrontation with her. The only situation I regretted was Mary and Sebastian. He had to marry for a dowry. Kitty gets asked to the Gardiners resident so she and Georgiana can get to know each other. Mrs. Bennet sees the letter Jane wrote Elizabeth, and wonders if she and Lydia can change their behaviors.
Whirlwind of a story. Darcy and Elizabeth's love was handled efficiently and effectively upon their accidental meeting at the bookstore. They both have spent months regretting lost chances while he visited Netherfield. Still with his pride and her prejudice, both had feelings for the other. His feelings for Elizabeth were overwhelming, but Elizabeth took more time to warm up to his desires. It was not long befuwore she recognized the changes in this man, changes that gave her hope. Estranged from her family, especially her Father and Jane, she was now living with the Gardiners. Her Father was demanding that she marry Mr. Collins. When she refuses, Jane hateful remarks clinched her decision to be in London. The Gardiners were furious with Mr. Bennet's lack of feeling for his favorite daughter. Jane finally realized
that she was feeling the loss of Bingley and her desires to marry, is why she was so hateful. She writes a letter asking for forgiveness and warns her that their father and Collins will eventually come to claim her in London so she should get out of London. Collins comes to Longbourn and in the morning were leaving for Elizabeth. Jane and Mary set out before them, and make it before their father and Collins. When she sees the love that Elizabeth and Darcy share, she becomes jealous and envious even more so than before. When she sees Darcy House, her hate returns since her mother told with her beauty she'll marry well, but although Bingley brought her and Mary to London that morning, little has been said between them. Darcy doesn't trust her so he keeps her away from Elizabeth as much as possible. With the help of Richard and the Viscount, they move the entire group out of London to Darcy's estate in Scotland. Their traveling group includes the Fitzwilliam brothers, Bingley, Georgiana, Anne, Jane, and Mary, and the Gardiners following the next day. Darcy remains behind to face her father and Collins. Mr. Bennet is worn out, but it is Collins that raises Darcy's ire. When he arrives, Collins has a young maid against the wall and threatening viscous things he'll do to her if she doesn't tell him where Elizabeth is. Hearing this discussing physical and verbal attack, he wheeled Collins around and clocked him one breaking his jaw. However; when he turns around, Mr. Bennet has a gun focused on him. Darcy can see that Mr. Bennet is not in his right mind, and as Darcy tries to reason with him, Darcy realizes that he means to shoot him. Just as Mr. Bennet pulls the trigger, Darcy hits the floor and Remy takes down Bennet. Darcy has only a flesh wound and Remy stitches. it closed. Darcy is on the way to catch up with his traveling group. The Viscount has arranged for the inns, but some need to share rooms. Unknown to Darcy and Elizabeth they had adjoining rooms. When Darcy arrives, Elizabeth insists that he take a warm bath. When she steps into the room and calls him, she gets no answer. Trying the same several times while walking closer and still no response, she enters behind the screen to find him sleeping. The ever adventurous Elizabeth begins to touch Darcy's bare skin. Lot wanting her to stop her ever lower searching, he shows her how to please him. Gathering Elizabeth in his arms he sets her on the rug in front of the fireplace, grabs the covers and pillows from the bed, and covers them as he brings Elizabeth to satisfaction. They fall asleep, and in the morning, Jane finds them together. She rushes out of his room, through Elizabeth's room, and enters the hallway. Sebastian, the Viscount, stops her from what that she was attempting to do. Back in her room, Mary is bewildered seeing Jane curled up in a fetal position sobbing. Elizabeth comes in to speak to Jane, and finally lets every thing come out. Elizabeth forgives words, but tells her trust will not be so easily done. Reaching Scotland, his servants from Pemberley have everything ready for their arrival. Mrs. Reynolds, per instructions, has brought the parson from Darcy's home parrish to marry them on tomorrow. Georgiana stands up for Elizabeth. Many questioned why her elder wasn't asked. Those that knew the reason were shocked. After marrying, two other couples had their marriages over the blacksmith's anvil: Jane and Bingley, Anne and Richard. When Darcy and Elizabeth come back to Longbourn, and they spend three miserable weeks before Mr. Bennet dies. Elizabeth tries to remember the father that was, but it was hard because of his confrontation with her. The only situation I regretted was Mary and Sebastian. He had to marry for a dowry. Kitty gets asked to the Gardiners resident so she and Georgiana can get to know each other. Mrs. Bennet sees the letter Jane wrote Elizabeth, and wonders if she and Lydia can change their behaviors.
May 26, 2015
4.5/5
This book was so close to being a 5/5! I just adored this book, and couldn't put it down.
What I liked: She alters nearly every character just a bit, but in a way that it makes sense. I normally don't enjoy it when authors take liberties and change characters too much, but I think she did so in a way to twist the story in an interesting way. Jane and Bingley are not great people. Jane is jealous of Lizzy, and that's interesting. Bingley actually supports Caroline when she tries to compromise Darcy, and insists on him marrying her, driving Darcy away. Once in London he bumps into Elizabeth after she has to run away because her parents insist on her marrying Collins. With her new understanding about Wickham's character, and without Darcy's interference with Jane and Bingley, she already has gotten over her misunderstandings with Darcy. I liked that. Although misunderstandings are fun, I think some versions of P&P make Elizabeth unnecessarily mean, vindictive, and downright rude to Darcy even after these misconceptions are cleared. This author didn't do that. Their love story takes off nearly from the beginning and it's very heart warming. I love how Mary takes on such a major role in this book, and I love her character. I also enjoyed the Fitzwilliams and their drunken antics. Finally...I like Lady Catherine. Yeah...how many variations can you say that about? lol.
I like how she switches and alternates between POVs. There are some typos, but really the book is well written.
What I do NOT like: Basically the end of Mary's story. It may be more realistic....but I don't read these books for reality. I kind of want to cry with the way she ended that. I was like wait...no epilogue? That can't just be it! Up until that point it was 5/5.
Just note: This is a mature audience only book!
This book was so close to being a 5/5! I just adored this book, and couldn't put it down.
What I liked: She alters nearly every character just a bit, but in a way that it makes sense. I normally don't enjoy it when authors take liberties and change characters too much, but I think she did so in a way to twist the story in an interesting way. Jane and Bingley are not great people. Jane is jealous of Lizzy, and that's interesting. Bingley actually supports Caroline when she tries to compromise Darcy, and insists on him marrying her, driving Darcy away. Once in London he bumps into Elizabeth after she has to run away because her parents insist on her marrying Collins. With her new understanding about Wickham's character, and without Darcy's interference with Jane and Bingley, she already has gotten over her misunderstandings with Darcy. I liked that. Although misunderstandings are fun, I think some versions of P&P make Elizabeth unnecessarily mean, vindictive, and downright rude to Darcy even after these misconceptions are cleared. This author didn't do that. Their love story takes off nearly from the beginning and it's very heart warming. I love how Mary takes on such a major role in this book, and I love her character. I also enjoyed the Fitzwilliams and their drunken antics. Finally...I like Lady Catherine. Yeah...how many variations can you say that about? lol.
I like how she switches and alternates between POVs. There are some typos, but really the book is well written.
What I do NOT like: Basically the end of Mary's story. It may be more realistic....but I don't read these books for reality. I kind of want to cry with the way she ended that. I was like wait...no epilogue? That can't just be it! Up until that point it was 5/5.
Just note: This is a mature audience only book!
March 1, 2017
In this second reading of this Pride and Prejudice variation (it seems I have the paperback and the Kindle copy) Darcy and Elizabeth are both staying in London, after the Netherfield Ball. Elizabeth because she feels betrayed by members of her family because of Mr. Collins and her rejection of his proposal, and so she is now living with the Gardiners.
Both are unhappy but a chance meeting may bring a start to a new understanding.
While some of the characters are not true to canon, I enjoyed their portrayal anyway. I enjoyed the storyline with the Fitzwilliams more than the Darcy/Elizabeth one. With all their faults shown in this book who can fail to love the Fitzwilliams. But my favourite part was Mary Bennet's story and how she was made to grow. More of her story I hope will be in the sequel.
So yes, I loved this book.
Both are unhappy but a chance meeting may bring a start to a new understanding.
While some of the characters are not true to canon, I enjoyed their portrayal anyway. I enjoyed the storyline with the Fitzwilliams more than the Darcy/Elizabeth one. With all their faults shown in this book who can fail to love the Fitzwilliams. But my favourite part was Mary Bennet's story and how she was made to grow. More of her story I hope will be in the sequel.
So yes, I loved this book.
June 12, 2018
Mr Bennet goes mad and wants Elizabeth to marry Collins, he wants to force her. Jane is despicable.
Elizabeth escapes Longbourn with her aunt and uncle Gardiner, she is unhappy, very unhappy until destiny crosses her path with Mr Darcy, then happiness awaits... but not everything around them is fine.
Lovely story. I need to point out that there is mature content.
I have to say that my heart broke with Mary's :(
Elizabeth escapes Longbourn with her aunt and uncle Gardiner, she is unhappy, very unhappy until destiny crosses her path with Mr Darcy, then happiness awaits... but not everything around them is fine.
Lovely story. I need to point out that there is mature content.
I have to say that my heart broke with Mary's :(
November 24, 2016
Reread this one to prepare for its sequel, Family Portraits.
But if you are interested, my original review can be found here: http://austenesquereviews.com/2015/03...
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars!
But if you are interested, my original review can be found here: http://austenesquereviews.com/2015/03...
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars!
August 12, 2018
“One loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.” –Euripides
“The strong bond of friendship is not always a balanced equation; friendship is not always about giving and taking in equal shares. Instead, friendship is grounded in a feeling that you know exactly who will be there for you when you need something, no matter what or when.” –Simon Sinek
This review may contain spoilers… although I do try not to. RATING: MA: mature audience: bawdy humor [but cute], sexual innuendo, sensually charged scenes prior to the wedding although they do not anticipate their vows. One character stated that her virtue may be intact but she was no longer an innocent. Also, descriptive scenes of a disgusting, sleezy nature with a reprehensible pig. Violence from a madman. The angst was intense but short-lived and there were a lot of undertones that you really had to watch carefully or it went over the readers’ head. I had to go back and reread several chapters because: 1) I enjoyed them, 2) to be sure of what I had just read, and 3) to get ready for the 2nd book.
Bennet Family: “Wounded parents often unintentionally inflict pain and suffering on their children and these childhood wounds causes a laundry list of maladaptive behaviors commonly called codependency. These habits restrict people to love—limiting relationships causing much unhappiness and distress.”
–David W. Earle
Wow! Talk about your canon being off the charts. Man, the OOC [out of character] behavior of many of our P&P characters will just blow you away. Mr. Bennet had agreed with Mrs. Bennet that Elizabeth must marry Collins in order to secure the estate for the family. He refused to even consider any of the other girls. In fact, Collins liked what he saw in the feisty Elizabeth too much to be persuaded to marry another. Elizabeth’s attributes were very alluring and he couldn’t take his eyes off of them... um… her. However, he let Mary know that he would welcome attentions from her… what a pig.
“In the minds of my parents, they are the victims; I am the abuser.” –Christina Enevoldsen
We learned more about the reasons behind Mr. Bennet giving Elizabeth a classical education and training her in estate management. From an early age she was being groomed as the son he never had and he handed over the running of Longbourn when she was about fifteen years of age. She had been running the estate for years and it was never his intent that she would leave. She was always slated for Collins as Bennet considered her his heir. Bennet did not appreciate her refusing Collins, and when the Gardiners arrived, he agreed to let her go to London with them in order to cool off and rethink her decision.
Lydia and Kitty were background characters, they were present but not major focus. I think they will play out in the next book. Mrs. Bennet was herself until she received a reality check that she will never recover from. It was not something usually seen in JAFF and was a big surprise when it happened.
Jane: “Making amends is not only saying the words but also being willing to listen to how your behavior caused another’s pain, and then the really hard part…changing behavior.” –David W. Earle
This was a very different Jane that I labeled the NSNJ [not-so-nice-Jane] trope. Throughout the story, we see her every emotion run the gamut from anger, bitterness, fear, jealously, resentment, hatred, envy and disdain. Yep, she acted out on several occasions and didn’t necessarily come out the winner. She was distraught over Bingley and wondered what happened after he left Netherfield and never returned? She resented how the Darcy, Fitzwilliam, and de Bourgh families rallied around her sister and placed a protective barrier between them. Even Uncle and Aunt Gardiner showed Lizzy preference. Jane was the beauty in the family, and it was she who was to secure the family by marrying a rich man. Her mother had always said it was so. Why was Bingley hedging in his pursuit? How was it that Lizzy caught such a wealthy suitor? Why did he choose Lizzy over herself? What did Darcy see in Lizzy? And, Jane wondered why everyone watched her with concern and distrust? Yeah, a very different Jane.
Mary: “Since children from dysfunctional families are so good at judging others, they also judge themselves finding themselves unacceptable when compared to others, always assuming they are second best, not enough. This is a painful realization so often they hide behind righteous arrogance.” –David W. Earle
Mary was a major focus along with Elizabeth. She had her own growth and a chance to find friendship. Her heart began to blossom as she was treated with respect and kindness. I really liked this Mary. Her story had just started in this book. Book 2: Family Portraits: continues her story and that of others. We ended with her having a suitor and she expected a proposal.
Elizabeth: “But what happens to the girl with no positive parental examples? What happens to the girl with the cold mother who conditioned herself to bury her emotions? And what happens to the girl with the father who is an example of who not to marry?” –LaTasha “Tacha B.” Braxton
Elizabeth and Darcy were both in London and completely miserable as they lamented the presumed loss of the other. Call it fate or chance, but they encountered each other in a book store and the rest… well, you know. I love the page time with ODC [our dear couple]. Once their relationship was underway, they never wanted to be parted. Only one problem… Bennet had not given Gardiner permission to broker a betrothal nor had he given consent for Elizabeth to marry. What to do… what to do? Well, Darcy did own an estate in Scotland. Perhaps that would work. But that would be a spoiler and you don’t want that.
Darcy: He and Georgiana were a big part of this story. I loved his budding relationship with Lizzy and Georgiana’s acceptance of Lizzy as her new sister. They were so cute. I loved their page time together. Georgiana grew up right before our eyes. She was adorable and smart. She handled all her relations with aplomb. She also had the difficult duty of managing the traits within her from both her Fitzwilliam and Darcy families. One side wanted to be free to play while the other fought for control. She did an amazing job… considering her cousins were Richard and Sebastian. They provided a lot of the angst as well as the comedic relief.
Gardiner Family: OMG! Who was this man? Edward and Madeline Gardiner are the aunt and uncle that we all love in JAFF. Their influence helped form Elizabeth and Jane into gracious gentlewomen rather than silly, ignorant, flirts like their two youngest sisters who emulated their mother. Elizabeth especially took to the extra educational opportunities town had to offer and she enjoyed working with masters as she improved herself. Jane … was just Jane, who believed their mother when she advised her girls they didn’t need school or any education other than what she could teach them about setting a good table and the running of an estate household. Good grief.
We learn a bit more about Mr. Gardiner’s business prowess, what he stored in his warehouses and why there were armed guards everywhere. OMG! This was a man not to be messed with. You did not cross Edward Gardiner… ever… not if you wished to see the light of day, that is. Yep, he was amazing.
Fitzwilliam Family: “I come from a completely dysfunctional alcoholic family, so we kind of parented ourselves a little bit.” –Sean Hayes
Lord and Lady Matlock, Viscount Hedley [Sebastian], and our dear Colonel Richard. What a family. Apparently, they are hot blooded [no kidding… no skirt or pair of pants was safe around them], hot tempered and money ran through their fingers like water. Oh, and Georgiana learned real quick to hide the brandy if they were calling. Over the years, the Earl had nearly run Matlock into the ground with his debauchery and numerous mistresses. His eldest son Sebastian was little better until he received a reality check that changed his life. Only Richard seemed to have any sense.
Lady Catherine de Bourgh: “Family is not an important thing. It’s everything.” –Michael J. Fox
Lady Catherine and Anne traveled from Rosings to Darcy House in London where she insisted that Darcy marry her daughter right away. Things didn’t go exactly as she planned.
Anne: “Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.” –Ann Landers
While at Darcy house, Anne finally found her voice and told her mother how things were going to be. She gave Darcy her opinion of him and stated that he was the last man on earth… yeah, that speech. She also gave him her opinion on the way he had treated her over the years. Wow! You go girl! Her outcome was amazing. Sort of saw it but not the manner in which it came about. Oh, Anne… your Fitzwilliam blood is showing. That was not de Bourgh at all.
Bingley: “To be of good quality, you have to excuse yourself from the presence of shallow and callow minded individuals.” –Michael Bassey Johnson
Oh, Bingley what have you done? Or rather… what did you not do? This was a hen-pecked, weak willed, lily-livered, coward that sister Caroline led by the nose. She ruled the roost… em… house and he just went along with her to keep the peace. In his heart and mind, he wanted to court Jane Bennet but knew he couldn’t until he could get rid of Caroline. What to do… what to do? When an opportunity presented itself… rather when Caroline presented the opportunity to be rid of her… Bingley jumped on it with both feet. Oh, Bingley… what you lost in that few moments of madness can never be regained. You somehow forgot… a good opinion, once lost…
“Some bad friends are so crafty in such a way that by the time their mission is reveal[ed], they have already executed portions of it.” –Israelmore Ayivor
Caroline was mentioned a lot and even given a bit of page time as she witnessed D&E together as an engaged couple. Yeah, she was a real b-witch and Darcy reminded Bingley that she would never ever be invited to Pemberley or any of his homes. She was barred for life. Yeah, she really pulled a good one before they left Netherfield. It was an all-out debacle of such magnitude that it could ruin reputations, destroy lives and would eventually break a friendship of long standing. Yeah, she did it up right.
“Be true to yourself, help others, make each day your masterpiece, make friendship a fine art, drink deeply from good books – especially the Bible, build a shelter against a rainy day, give thanks for your blessings and pray for guidance every day.” –John Wooden
“The strong bond of friendship is not always a balanced equation; friendship is not always about giving and taking in equal shares. Instead, friendship is grounded in a feeling that you know exactly who will be there for you when you need something, no matter what or when.” –Simon Sinek
This review may contain spoilers… although I do try not to. RATING: MA: mature audience: bawdy humor [but cute], sexual innuendo, sensually charged scenes prior to the wedding although they do not anticipate their vows. One character stated that her virtue may be intact but she was no longer an innocent. Also, descriptive scenes of a disgusting, sleezy nature with a reprehensible pig. Violence from a madman. The angst was intense but short-lived and there were a lot of undertones that you really had to watch carefully or it went over the readers’ head. I had to go back and reread several chapters because: 1) I enjoyed them, 2) to be sure of what I had just read, and 3) to get ready for the 2nd book.
Bennet Family: “Wounded parents often unintentionally inflict pain and suffering on their children and these childhood wounds causes a laundry list of maladaptive behaviors commonly called codependency. These habits restrict people to love—limiting relationships causing much unhappiness and distress.”
–David W. Earle
Wow! Talk about your canon being off the charts. Man, the OOC [out of character] behavior of many of our P&P characters will just blow you away. Mr. Bennet had agreed with Mrs. Bennet that Elizabeth must marry Collins in order to secure the estate for the family. He refused to even consider any of the other girls. In fact, Collins liked what he saw in the feisty Elizabeth too much to be persuaded to marry another. Elizabeth’s attributes were very alluring and he couldn’t take his eyes off of them... um… her. However, he let Mary know that he would welcome attentions from her… what a pig.
“In the minds of my parents, they are the victims; I am the abuser.” –Christina Enevoldsen
We learned more about the reasons behind Mr. Bennet giving Elizabeth a classical education and training her in estate management. From an early age she was being groomed as the son he never had and he handed over the running of Longbourn when she was about fifteen years of age. She had been running the estate for years and it was never his intent that she would leave. She was always slated for Collins as Bennet considered her his heir. Bennet did not appreciate her refusing Collins, and when the Gardiners arrived, he agreed to let her go to London with them in order to cool off and rethink her decision.
Lydia and Kitty were background characters, they were present but not major focus. I think they will play out in the next book. Mrs. Bennet was herself until she received a reality check that she will never recover from. It was not something usually seen in JAFF and was a big surprise when it happened.
Jane: “Making amends is not only saying the words but also being willing to listen to how your behavior caused another’s pain, and then the really hard part…changing behavior.” –David W. Earle
This was a very different Jane that I labeled the NSNJ [not-so-nice-Jane] trope. Throughout the story, we see her every emotion run the gamut from anger, bitterness, fear, jealously, resentment, hatred, envy and disdain. Yep, she acted out on several occasions and didn’t necessarily come out the winner. She was distraught over Bingley and wondered what happened after he left Netherfield and never returned? She resented how the Darcy, Fitzwilliam, and de Bourgh families rallied around her sister and placed a protective barrier between them. Even Uncle and Aunt Gardiner showed Lizzy preference. Jane was the beauty in the family, and it was she who was to secure the family by marrying a rich man. Her mother had always said it was so. Why was Bingley hedging in his pursuit? How was it that Lizzy caught such a wealthy suitor? Why did he choose Lizzy over herself? What did Darcy see in Lizzy? And, Jane wondered why everyone watched her with concern and distrust? Yeah, a very different Jane.
Mary: “Since children from dysfunctional families are so good at judging others, they also judge themselves finding themselves unacceptable when compared to others, always assuming they are second best, not enough. This is a painful realization so often they hide behind righteous arrogance.” –David W. Earle
Mary was a major focus along with Elizabeth. She had her own growth and a chance to find friendship. Her heart began to blossom as she was treated with respect and kindness. I really liked this Mary. Her story had just started in this book. Book 2: Family Portraits: continues her story and that of others. We ended with her having a suitor and she expected a proposal.
Elizabeth: “But what happens to the girl with no positive parental examples? What happens to the girl with the cold mother who conditioned herself to bury her emotions? And what happens to the girl with the father who is an example of who not to marry?” –LaTasha “Tacha B.” Braxton
Elizabeth and Darcy were both in London and completely miserable as they lamented the presumed loss of the other. Call it fate or chance, but they encountered each other in a book store and the rest… well, you know. I love the page time with ODC [our dear couple]. Once their relationship was underway, they never wanted to be parted. Only one problem… Bennet had not given Gardiner permission to broker a betrothal nor had he given consent for Elizabeth to marry. What to do… what to do? Well, Darcy did own an estate in Scotland. Perhaps that would work. But that would be a spoiler and you don’t want that.
Darcy: He and Georgiana were a big part of this story. I loved his budding relationship with Lizzy and Georgiana’s acceptance of Lizzy as her new sister. They were so cute. I loved their page time together. Georgiana grew up right before our eyes. She was adorable and smart. She handled all her relations with aplomb. She also had the difficult duty of managing the traits within her from both her Fitzwilliam and Darcy families. One side wanted to be free to play while the other fought for control. She did an amazing job… considering her cousins were Richard and Sebastian. They provided a lot of the angst as well as the comedic relief.
Gardiner Family: OMG! Who was this man? Edward and Madeline Gardiner are the aunt and uncle that we all love in JAFF. Their influence helped form Elizabeth and Jane into gracious gentlewomen rather than silly, ignorant, flirts like their two youngest sisters who emulated their mother. Elizabeth especially took to the extra educational opportunities town had to offer and she enjoyed working with masters as she improved herself. Jane … was just Jane, who believed their mother when she advised her girls they didn’t need school or any education other than what she could teach them about setting a good table and the running of an estate household. Good grief.
We learn a bit more about Mr. Gardiner’s business prowess, what he stored in his warehouses and why there were armed guards everywhere. OMG! This was a man not to be messed with. You did not cross Edward Gardiner… ever… not if you wished to see the light of day, that is. Yep, he was amazing.
Fitzwilliam Family: “I come from a completely dysfunctional alcoholic family, so we kind of parented ourselves a little bit.” –Sean Hayes
Lord and Lady Matlock, Viscount Hedley [Sebastian], and our dear Colonel Richard. What a family. Apparently, they are hot blooded [no kidding… no skirt or pair of pants was safe around them], hot tempered and money ran through their fingers like water. Oh, and Georgiana learned real quick to hide the brandy if they were calling. Over the years, the Earl had nearly run Matlock into the ground with his debauchery and numerous mistresses. His eldest son Sebastian was little better until he received a reality check that changed his life. Only Richard seemed to have any sense.
Lady Catherine de Bourgh: “Family is not an important thing. It’s everything.” –Michael J. Fox
Lady Catherine and Anne traveled from Rosings to Darcy House in London where she insisted that Darcy marry her daughter right away. Things didn’t go exactly as she planned.
Anne: “Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.” –Ann Landers
While at Darcy house, Anne finally found her voice and told her mother how things were going to be. She gave Darcy her opinion of him and stated that he was the last man on earth… yeah, that speech. She also gave him her opinion on the way he had treated her over the years. Wow! You go girl! Her outcome was amazing. Sort of saw it but not the manner in which it came about. Oh, Anne… your Fitzwilliam blood is showing. That was not de Bourgh at all.
Bingley: “To be of good quality, you have to excuse yourself from the presence of shallow and callow minded individuals.” –Michael Bassey Johnson
Oh, Bingley what have you done? Or rather… what did you not do? This was a hen-pecked, weak willed, lily-livered, coward that sister Caroline led by the nose. She ruled the roost… em… house and he just went along with her to keep the peace. In his heart and mind, he wanted to court Jane Bennet but knew he couldn’t until he could get rid of Caroline. What to do… what to do? When an opportunity presented itself… rather when Caroline presented the opportunity to be rid of her… Bingley jumped on it with both feet. Oh, Bingley… what you lost in that few moments of madness can never be regained. You somehow forgot… a good opinion, once lost…
“Some bad friends are so crafty in such a way that by the time their mission is reveal[ed], they have already executed portions of it.” –Israelmore Ayivor
Caroline was mentioned a lot and even given a bit of page time as she witnessed D&E together as an engaged couple. Yeah, she was a real b-witch and Darcy reminded Bingley that she would never ever be invited to Pemberley or any of his homes. She was barred for life. Yeah, she really pulled a good one before they left Netherfield. It was an all-out debacle of such magnitude that it could ruin reputations, destroy lives and would eventually break a friendship of long standing. Yeah, she did it up right.
“Be true to yourself, help others, make each day your masterpiece, make friendship a fine art, drink deeply from good books – especially the Bible, build a shelter against a rainy day, give thanks for your blessings and pray for guidance every day.” –John Wooden
December 8, 2025
Refreshingly Different
Reviewed in Canada on June 8, 2019
Great character portrayals, especially the Fitzwilliam family. I didn’t even hate Lady Catherine. Sometimes I cry for ODC in the variations I’ve read, but this time I cried for Mary and Viscount Hedley, heir of Matlock. Sighhh... There must be more coming to this story. The humor had me laughing out loud at times. Mr. Bennet was a complete surprise, but that’s what makes non-canon good. It’s different. There are some proofreading errors, but the story is so good, I didn’t take away from my rating.
February 19-20, 2021 - Second read with audiobook. The narration by Brigid Lohrey is excellent with a very expressive depiction of all the characters, bringing a live-action feel to this great story. I cried for Mary and the Viscount a second time. Highly recommend the book and the audiobook book.
Reviewed in Canada on June 8, 2019
Great character portrayals, especially the Fitzwilliam family. I didn’t even hate Lady Catherine. Sometimes I cry for ODC in the variations I’ve read, but this time I cried for Mary and Viscount Hedley, heir of Matlock. Sighhh... There must be more coming to this story. The humor had me laughing out loud at times. Mr. Bennet was a complete surprise, but that’s what makes non-canon good. It’s different. There are some proofreading errors, but the story is so good, I didn’t take away from my rating.
February 19-20, 2021 - Second read with audiobook. The narration by Brigid Lohrey is excellent with a very expressive depiction of all the characters, bringing a live-action feel to this great story. I cried for Mary and the Viscount a second time. Highly recommend the book and the audiobook book.
January 17, 2015
Well written and really interesting. Takes the P&P story in a new and interesting direction -- which is always my favorite kind of variation!
November 2, 2022
Loved it
Great book couldn't put it down read into night. Can't wait to read next in series family portraits, good series.
Great book couldn't put it down read into night. Can't wait to read next in series family portraits, good series.
August 16, 2016
I have had this variation on my reading list for some time. What was I waiting for? I couldn't put it down. It was a unique spin on our favorite P&P characters with some secondary characters playing more primary roles. I can not wait for the sequel. I am dying to know how some of the characters lives progress.
October 10, 2015
This story is very well written! The re-invention of events from one of my favorite Jane Austen novels is very intriguing and I found the interactions between Elizabeth and Darcy very sweet.
Elizabeth Bennet is in London. She is living with her Aunt and Uncle, the Gardiners. Having, basically, run for her life from Longbourne and the demands from her father and her once dear sister Jane, to marry Mr. Collins and save the family. Heartbroken over the situation, Elizabeth never expects to run into Mr. Darcy in a bookshop.
Mr. Darcy sees Elizabeth Bennet and is stunned. He has thought of her day and night (especially night LOL) since he abruptly left Hertfordshire after the Bingley's ball. Both Bingley and his sister Caroline behaved abominably causing him to cut off the relationship entirely.
When Darcy sees Elizabeth, he must talk to her. He follows her into the bookshop. All of the feelings he has been trying to repress come to the surface and he can not help but love her. He sees the sadness in her eyes though she tries to hide it. He resolves to do whatever he can to take that sadness away.
Through madness, addiction hurt feelings and financial issues, Mr. Darcy, and Elizabeth are bound. They know they want to be together but must wait. While they wait, all sorts of intrigues go on with other members of the family.
I loved the way the author portrays the secondary characters to the story. They are all basically the same people, but more somehow. She has taken the basic characteristics of each person and pushed them to the limits of what they were in the original book. I really liked that.
I, also, really loved Mary in this book! Not just a sermon quoting miss in every situation! She even gets to dance!
This was a wonderful read and a great "visit" with my favorite people. Pamela Lynne brings out the best and the worst in some of these people and makes the story so much more. I highly recommend this title to any JAFF lover.
It is different from any other I've read, but familiar in some ways. It's hard to explain, but I think you will truly love this one! I know I will read it again and again over the years.
Elizabeth Bennet is in London. She is living with her Aunt and Uncle, the Gardiners. Having, basically, run for her life from Longbourne and the demands from her father and her once dear sister Jane, to marry Mr. Collins and save the family. Heartbroken over the situation, Elizabeth never expects to run into Mr. Darcy in a bookshop.
Mr. Darcy sees Elizabeth Bennet and is stunned. He has thought of her day and night (especially night LOL) since he abruptly left Hertfordshire after the Bingley's ball. Both Bingley and his sister Caroline behaved abominably causing him to cut off the relationship entirely.
When Darcy sees Elizabeth, he must talk to her. He follows her into the bookshop. All of the feelings he has been trying to repress come to the surface and he can not help but love her. He sees the sadness in her eyes though she tries to hide it. He resolves to do whatever he can to take that sadness away.
Through madness, addiction hurt feelings and financial issues, Mr. Darcy, and Elizabeth are bound. They know they want to be together but must wait. While they wait, all sorts of intrigues go on with other members of the family.
I loved the way the author portrays the secondary characters to the story. They are all basically the same people, but more somehow. She has taken the basic characteristics of each person and pushed them to the limits of what they were in the original book. I really liked that.
I, also, really loved Mary in this book! Not just a sermon quoting miss in every situation! She even gets to dance!
This was a wonderful read and a great "visit" with my favorite people. Pamela Lynne brings out the best and the worst in some of these people and makes the story so much more. I highly recommend this title to any JAFF lover.
It is different from any other I've read, but familiar in some ways. It's hard to explain, but I think you will truly love this one! I know I will read it again and again over the years.
February 3, 2015
My standard disclaimer goes here: I had the pleasure of reading this P&P what-if as it posted on AHA, so I must admit I knew I would enjoy it as a published novel. The author and I have a famously public on-going love/hate relationship with Mr. Bennet (she hates, I love), but this story is so compelling and well-written that I bought into the premise of him being one of the story's villains with not a moment's hesitation.
Another way this story impressed me was the introduction of a few key new characters. Usually I'm not keen on authors inventing new characters for the P & P dramatis personae, but I'm thinking of three in this story (don't want to be a spoiler) who are, each in a different way, a perfect addition, and they are well-blended into the plot, not just standing apart like a poorly attached third arm.
This author writes mature scenes very well (understatement, but again, not going to spoil anything).
So if I bought into the premise, was charmed by the new characters, and fanned myself during the hot bits, why only four stars? The lack of thorough proof-reading was saddening. No book is ever perfect in this regard, but in this case there were some typos and uncaught spell-check errors at crucial moments that, being a fan of this author and story, I found distressing. Running a story through spell check is not a substitute for proof-reading. I hope this author will find a better editor (I do not know who she hired). Also, I'm reading the printed book, and perhaps some of the errors I refer to have been corrected in the ebook version.
Those technical issues aside, this is a great story: it has action, believable character development with some surprising twists, and the E & D love story is swoon-worthy. It is a keeper.
Another way this story impressed me was the introduction of a few key new characters. Usually I'm not keen on authors inventing new characters for the P & P dramatis personae, but I'm thinking of three in this story (don't want to be a spoiler) who are, each in a different way, a perfect addition, and they are well-blended into the plot, not just standing apart like a poorly attached third arm.
This author writes mature scenes very well (understatement, but again, not going to spoil anything).
So if I bought into the premise, was charmed by the new characters, and fanned myself during the hot bits, why only four stars? The lack of thorough proof-reading was saddening. No book is ever perfect in this regard, but in this case there were some typos and uncaught spell-check errors at crucial moments that, being a fan of this author and story, I found distressing. Running a story through spell check is not a substitute for proof-reading. I hope this author will find a better editor (I do not know who she hired). Also, I'm reading the printed book, and perhaps some of the errors I refer to have been corrected in the ebook version.
Those technical issues aside, this is a great story: it has action, believable character development with some surprising twists, and the E & D love story is swoon-worthy. It is a keeper.
October 13, 2016
I will give nothing away of this wonderfully amazing retelling of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. There test and trials were more intense and overall just more. Take this journey again and see what was behind the various stages.
I am awed. I am not sure where to start, but start I must. This was in no way your grandmother's Pride and Prejudice. This was most certainly brought into the current age of readers and what would satisfy some niggling questions in their minds as the various scene took place. There are some serious contrasting moments and characters. There were things that kept you moving forward. If you are a seriously soul deep die hard Jane Austen Pride and Prejudice fan you may take a few steps back but you would also need to stand up and give applause. This inspired novel took the good and added some spice, mischief, and jealousy to make a more intense telling of the growing love story between two of reading history most loved couple.
I am awed. I am not sure where to start, but start I must. This was in no way your grandmother's Pride and Prejudice. This was most certainly brought into the current age of readers and what would satisfy some niggling questions in their minds as the various scene took place. There are some serious contrasting moments and characters. There were things that kept you moving forward. If you are a seriously soul deep die hard Jane Austen Pride and Prejudice fan you may take a few steps back but you would also need to stand up and give applause. This inspired novel took the good and added some spice, mischief, and jealousy to make a more intense telling of the growing love story between two of reading history most loved couple.
November 25, 2018
This is one of the best Pride and Prejudice retellings I’ve ever read! What if Darcy’s aristocratic relations weren’t as perfect as they seemed? What if Elizabeth’s life at Longbourn wasn’t as idyllic as one could think? I really liked how different this story was! At first, I couldn’t believe Elizabeth was alone in this variation without her two faithful allies in both Jane Austen’s and other variations, but it made sense since the plot had a darker twist to it. I loved Elizabeth’s and Darcy’s romance and hopefully Mary will have her happily ever after with Sebastian! I loved how the Darcy’s and the Fitzwilliam’s ,despite their differences, were a united family!
September 23, 2015
This variation is unlike any other I have read! Crazy story line and the behavior of the characters is astonishing! I did like it overall and with the characters personalities altered so much, you never know what they heck they are going to do! Enjoyed it!
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