Let me start off by saying that I am a real fan of Robert Swartwood's books. The Man of Wax series, The Serial Killer's Wife, and his healthy collection of horror stories have made every new book an immediate purchase for me.
"Temple" is another great story from Swartwood. As the description says, the main character is kindred to Jason Bourne or a superhero (without crazy abilities like flying, laser eyes, etc.). But instead of following an extraordinarily-powerful man as he dominates all of his enemies, we get a different kind of story. Temple has enhanced abilities, yes, but he is frequently stuck with just enough information to get him into dangerous situations, but not enough to completely unravel who or what is trying to destroy him. He is often behind the curve, surviving on instinct and ability as he tries to figure out what exactly he is supposed to be stopping.
In the meantime, the "bad guys" have tons of information and resources at their fingertips, which more than makes up for their lack of special powers. It is clear that they are after Temple. It is clear that they can move in the world with near-impunity. But who exactly are they? And why do they want Temple dead?
That's a great setup for a novel. And it works well, with a constant sense of forward momentum as Temple fights for his life.
Swartwood is known for surprising brutality in some of his stories (the Man of Wax series in particular) and he doesn't let up in "Temple." Shocking things happen. People die in gruesome ways and even though you think "that couldn't have really happened!" it did happen. This adds to the immediacy of Temple's situation, creating real tension and danger for our hero. This isn't the kind of story where everyone lives happily ever after. The stakes for the characters are real.
So why didn't I give the book five stars? It's a matter of clarity and editing. I was sent an advance copy of the book for review, so it is possible that some of my complaints will be fixed before the final manuscript comes out. But the story I read had a few issues.
For example, in the second or third chapter, a character uses a derogatory racial slur in front of Temple and a convenience store owner. I thought it was odd, and it was only after reading a bit further that I realized something: Temple is black. And so is the store owner. I had assumed they were white, since up to that point there hadn't been any indication otherwise (a sign of my own preconceived notions, I know), but it confused me. I wold have preferred some sort of description to make this clear before I stumbled across it via context.
This lack of clarity occurs a couple of other times in the book. At another point a chapter ends by saying a character is staring straight into the eyes of other character(s). But as the next chapter begins, it turns out that the phrase "staring straight into the eyes" didn't mean what I naturally assumed it would mean. The fact that it had a different connotation pulled me out of the story and caused me to have to go back and re-read the previous section. Not a big deal, but definitely something that could have been edited to flow better.
The book also has more editing errors than it should. I have OCD (the real kind that requires medication, not the kind *everybody* claims to have), so these errors snag my thoughts and interrupt the flow of the story. There are a few times the wrong word is used or a word is spelled wrong.
The clarity and editing issues aren't a huge deal, in the end, because the story was good enough to keep me interested in reading. I wanted to find out what the bad guys were doing and how/if Temple would be able to stop it. "Temple" is fast-paced, thrilling, and typical of Swartwood's storytelling style. I would highly recommend it and I look forward to his next book. Just be prepared to ignore some minor mistakes.