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The Vampire Mysteries #1
Murder Bites
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When her best friend is accused of murder, Vampire and reluctant waitress Felicity Twyst must rise to the occasion and find the real killer.
Death is no stranger to Felicity, after all, her mum died forty years ago and it hasn't slowed her down. She still didn't expect the feared Mrs Tranter to keel over in the middle of Whole Latte Love Cafe, let alone for her best friend Betty Haddock to be accused of the crime.
Using her instincts for detection (and trying to ignore those for sucking blood), Felicity attempts to clear her friend and find the real killer.
When her best friend is accused of murder, Vampire and reluctant waitress Felicity Twyst must rise to the occasion and find the real killer.
Death is no stranger to Felicity, after all, her mum died forty years ago and it hasn't slowed her down. She still didn't expect the feared Mrs Tranter to keel over in the middle of Whole Latte Love Cafe, let alone for her best friend Betty Haddock to be accused of the crime.
Using her instincts for detection (and trying to ignore those for sucking blood), Felicity attempts to clear her friend and find the real killer.
160 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 25, 2016
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November 16, 2017
What a great story! I loved that Barnett blended mystery with paranormal. A comical cozy mystery that's a must read!
My Rating: 5 stars
My Rating: 5 stars
July 12, 2017
The good stuff first: this is a lively story written with a lot of verve, well-paced, and you can tell the author had a lot of fun writing it. There are bits of very clever writing here and some very funny moments. The characters are a lot of fun. I really did enjoy reading Murder Bites; my only major concern with it was the editing, or lack thereof. Characters' names change and change back throughout the story (DCI Marsh becomes DCI Shaw for a few chapters, even though Mr. Shaw is another character in the story; the Barter twins turn into the Boon twins for a bit too); there's a good amount of comma errors, both missing commas ("How are you Betty?" rather than "How are you, Betty?") and comma splices; and the word "OK" is usually written in lowercase, "ok", which looks sloppy. It does feel a bit slapdash, as if the book was rushed to publication without much editing.
Nevertheless, this a fun, clever, readable little book to while away a few hours. I do look forward to continuing with the series.
Nevertheless, this a fun, clever, readable little book to while away a few hours. I do look forward to continuing with the series.
June 25, 2018
One sip or two
A really fun, lighthearted read. She is a vampire but has an addiction to sweets. Her job at the coffee house allows her to indulge that. However when a customer is poisoned in front of her and her BFF is suspected of murder she knows she has to do something to help. Can she clear her BFF? Suspects come out of the woodwork and even when it seems that the case is closed, she still has questions. A good plot that looks at vampires in a sympathetic way. Whist the characters vary from our nosy, confident heroine to the slightly dizzy, Barbie like klutz of her BFF.
A really fun, lighthearted read. She is a vampire but has an addiction to sweets. Her job at the coffee house allows her to indulge that. However when a customer is poisoned in front of her and her BFF is suspected of murder she knows she has to do something to help. Can she clear her BFF? Suspects come out of the woodwork and even when it seems that the case is closed, she still has questions. A good plot that looks at vampires in a sympathetic way. Whist the characters vary from our nosy, confident heroine to the slightly dizzy, Barbie like klutz of her BFF.
November 19, 2020
Murder Bites book #1 in the Vampire Mysteries was a that will have you on the edge of your seat or bed. When a Elderly Women fell dead while sitting in her Bosses Cafe and her best friend is accused of the murder will what's a Vamp to do. SOLVE THE MURDER. You will become friends with this family of Vampires, Zombies, Werewolves, and any other Night Creature that may come to the house or coffee house or candy shop.
February 2, 2019
Eh, it was ok
Yeah. I am a bit disappointed with this book. The mystery was okay, but Felicity, and her family (plus the lodgers) brought the whole reading experience down. Even the whiff of a future romance between Felicity and James couldn’t save it.
2.5 stars 🌟
Yeah. I am a bit disappointed with this book. The mystery was okay, but Felicity, and her family (plus the lodgers) brought the whole reading experience down. Even the whiff of a future romance between Felicity and James couldn’t save it.
2.5 stars 🌟
May 19, 2018
Fun
I enjoyed this book. It was not the usual vampire story. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves a fun book.
I enjoyed this book. It was not the usual vampire story. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves a fun book.
October 9, 2016
Fun short read!
This was a cute story line and short read! Would recommend this for a quick morning/afternoon coffee drinking, front porch, read!
This was a cute story line and short read! Would recommend this for a quick morning/afternoon coffee drinking, front porch, read!
April 19, 2017
Funny Cozy Mystery
A quick read with an unexpected ending twist. The book was well written but easy reading. Enjoyable but not an intense mystery.
A quick read with an unexpected ending twist. The book was well written but easy reading. Enjoyable but not an intense mystery.
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