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244 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 4, 2016
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A couple of chapters in this book and I was already hook. It reminded of a movie I watch way back then titled 'DEBS'. Starr Bishop, together with her two girl best friends went to take a leadership test that turned out to be something else.
And then somehow it turned into something like Salt. The scene I'm referring was kinda something close and kind of spark my adrenaline, so there was action involve and quick thinking and awesome stamina.
But, no matter how promising the story is, there are some I'd call stumbling blocks that made me overanalyze things and sometimes makes me take breaks between reading. I think it would be hard discussing the points that kind of didn't go well with me, even if I keep reminding myself this is fiction, but still.
Alert: there may be spoiler involve. Read at your own risk.
Starr Bishop.
She is just too typical of a heroine. A perfect student - both athletic and intelligent, oblivious to the boys who like her, is usually stuck up in her head and also naive and way over her head. I like her at first. I like her sytematic analysis and way of thinking, so it was bother for me at the second part of the book when she showed less of it. It kinda ticks me at some point. She is facing an Organization, she is the best candidate to be an assassin, yes, but she still needs training. I believe she is perfectly suited for it in the way she analyze things, systematic and orderly and smart. But that's just it.
The Organization.
Okay, so at the beginning this Organization is good with everything, top notch facility and equipment with their surveillance and information gathering, so I wonder how it was possible Starr had even escape their grasp in the first place. Fast forward to the scene at the second half, that's just kinda stupid and so in contrast with how they were presented in the beginning. If it was a front, within 2 minutes of Starr stepping foor in that area, she should have been discovered already. Now, I watched The Leverage and The Blacklist (both American TV series) and we're talking about military facility and equipment that are way beyond advance than what is available in the market. I've also read a lot of assassin/mercenary/military books and I know a lot about recons and setting base. Also, if Starr was able to escape in the first place, with the kind of objective and emotionless aura of The Organization, Starr would have been expendable for me. And I would have Christian Evergood dead because he has proven to be worthless. Or there maybe a mystery working somewhere there about it all.
The Sidetrips. I love and hate them at the same time. It is just cheesy in some way, and well I do cheesy sometimes, but it just doesn't sit well with me. I love that the details are so great and so dreamy as well as the touch on the culture, and meeting Christian's cousin, but it slowed the pace of the book that makes me lose interest as times oppose to its fast paced beginning.
Aside from my issues, this book has quite a combination to it. Love, loyalty, humor, suspense and mystery. There is still a huge mystery surrounding the Organization, and as to Christian. It was well written and hopefully, the questions would be answered in its sequel.
**Complimentary copy received in exchange for an honest review.
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