Update, 4th Dec 2017: I had a quick look through some of my old reviews/ratings and saw this one, and you know what? I'm changing my rating to one star. It is a 1.5 star read at best (for me).
Original review, written 27th March 2017:
This book had a creepy, interesting sounding premise and a lot of potential. Unfortunately, it was long winded, drawn-out and just rather dull, honestly.
So: This book is about an American guy, Ethan, who lives in Japan. One weekend, he, his girlfriend and 3 of their friends plan a trip to climb Mt Fuji. However, it looks like it is going to rain so they have to postpone their climb. While deciding what to do instead, they meet an Israeli couple who are going to camp the night in Aokigahara - Japan's notorious 'Suicide Forest', where hundreds of people a year go to kill themselves and which is said to be haunted by 'Yūrei', the ghosts of those left to die during the practice of 'Ubasute' (where people would abandon the young or elderly in the forest to die if they couldn't afford to feed them) and the 5 of them decide to tag along. However, when morning comes one of them is found hanging from a tree, dead. Could it be the Yūrei?
Sounds like a great premise for a creepy horror story, right?? I thought so! Especially because this book is portrayed as a horror story... but it's not. I mention that last part in my description of the book - that one of them is found hanging - only because the blurb mentions this itself. You know when this actually happens? Halfway through the freaking book. HALF the book is literally just them deciding to go camping, and then walking through the forest to find a good camping spot. HALF THE BOOK. The author tries to create suspense, I think, by questioning things such as 'why are there no animals/birds here? Why's there no wind? Why's it so quiet? OoOoOohh' but it doesn't work for me. It's just dull and hard to read.
This book finally started to pick up for me around 75% of the way in, and then I started to almost enjoy the next 20%. This is the only reason it gets 2 stars, not one.
...Then the last 5% happened (for some reason). Without spoiling anything: as with all horror-style stories, the survivor/s go/es back home at the end of the story. Usually we see a little bit of them trying to cope with whatever happened to them while trying to fit back into their previous life. Sometimes, if the writer plans a sequel, we see a little glimpse of the horrors they faced finding them at home. Neither of these things happen in this book - instead, the few pages of being back home are vague and just absolutely ridiculous. And had nothing to do with the whole rest of the book!
Also: I really did not like any of the characters.
I'm disappointed in this book.... I think, the author could have written an ok story. But not a full length horror.
If he'd written this as a short story, I think I might have enjoyed it. The amount of things that actually happened would have been perfect for a short story. Instead, to bulk it out as a full length novel, it takes 4 pages for Ethan to take a piss in the bush (literally. Not exaggerating here. 4 pages).
Alternatively, I think the author could write an ok drama as a full length novel. His writing works for that. But just not for horror/thriller in my opinion. Sorry, Jeremy Bates.