1 1/2 stars (bumped down for non-ending after nearly 400 pages)
Had potential in ideas and world but fell flat for me. The beginning had me hook for a millisecond then it started to drag and never stopped. Pretty much it is Drantos finding his mate and bringing her to the clan that is biased because she is half human, and blood of the enemy and... Dusti finding out her whole life of where her mother came from, and what she is, was a lie and now she is mated and in love. She gets to learn this whole new world of combination paranormal creatures that don't fit into the mainstream creatures, yet she is totally not accepted by anyone but Drantos.
So what I liked (not much but there were somethings, and it could've been much better)
- I liked the take on the combination paranormals and the infighting among paranormals and themselves.
- The erotic.
What I didn't like
- The Slog through the repeats and unnecessary to get to the romance.
- The fights between them don't seem resolved, ever. Even these seem to repeat and flipflop.
- The story of the enemy is left, in the air. (cliffhanger)
- The TSTL moments of the heroine and the deception (or lying) of mostly Drantos, but even Dusti.
- The clan's attitude towards Dusti as she cannot change who she is. She doesn't know their rules and yet has to agree to abide by them.
- The dragging through the story line that doesn't go very far and leaves much up in the air.
- The names irritated me. First it was Batina, Dustina, Antina... it was just... ergh. Then the names of creature Vamplycan, Garlycan,... the town, 'Howl', really Howl?
- The editing, OK the "I" used where the object, "me" should be almost always happened with Dusti talking, so maybe she is just bad at spoken English. But... the grammatical errors were throughout. Just bad wording in the sentence or putting words twice in a sentence needing it once. Where for were, etc... I started noting them, as it was dragging anyway, and they were continuous. I think I probably wouldn't have cared much if I were enjoying the story more. When you are irritated, everything irritates you more.
This book is 400 pages long but really is a story worth about 200, if that. At least for me. I don't know if I'll go on to the second book, normally I would say, "no" right off, but the author did surprise me with Cyborg Seduction, after not liking Flint at all. Still I was more interested in the characters there and the books are much shorter. It'll be a pass for now.
So below you can read my updates while I was reading. I only do that when I am really enjoying or really upset with a book.
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3/4 through and this is a slog to get through. I would've DNF if it were an author I didn't know and like. But... since I don't rate and review books I do not finish, I'm pushing on. This book is heading for the 1-2 star range. I really think that she published this independently and either didn't have an editor or had a bad one. Ah, looking at it, it is self published. I don't know where her normal editor went but there was so much repeating and drag along with misspellings and grammatical errors, so far it is craze worthy. If the book/story wasn't maddening in itself, I probably could have over looked the drag and definitely the editing/grammar. Good storylines and I read right past them wanting to get to the end. I've push and dragged myself to get this read. Nearly a month in and 5%-10% at a time frequently, I just cannot stand more than that. Really this doesn't have more story than her normal New Species or Cyborg, it just drags the scenes out and repeats things frequently. Add to that the romance where she is frequently TSTL and he is holding back necessary information and outright lying, and you get a couple that is TSTL, but hey the clan will save them, they hate Dusti so greatly. I really hope she gets an editor that will give her some of these and hopefully even better suggestions because she needs them. I wonder with this self-publishing, if she is going to drop the New Species and Cyborgs because they are owned by the publishers. I liked those worlds so much better.
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25% in update- Although this is the normal Dohner fair of a story, this one is dragging quite a bit. This is close to a 400 page book and 25% in and I'm thinking she should really stick to the 200-250 page format. 85 pages in and finally we get to the romance and bonding, along with understanding the world... slightly. Mostly we have the crash survival (yea sure there, not) and then the making the camp with the other survivors. Mostly, it is just... slow. In addition to this, the editing is driving me crazy... well maybe she meant to have Dusti speak with "I" as a object and "me" as subject, but it is driving me batty. You use "my sister and I" when you can use "we" instead and use "my sister and me" if you can substitute "us", not that hard. I know it is very accepted to mix object and subject pronouns, especially 'me' but for some reason 'I' as an object drives me nuts. I can accept 'He is as old as me' (read 'He is as old as I am' instead) but not, 'Give that to my sister and I'... it just drives me batty! I'm usually pretty good at reading over these things but I think the slowness of the story... which is pretty good other than slow... is making the editing glaringly obvious to me.