I was hopeful that the writing in this book would be good, however it's extremely cheesy. I couldn't even read one of these books let alone all that are included as bonuses..... My honest opinion would be for the authors to go back and make some improvements to the dialog... The 2nd story has potential, as I'm sure the rest do as well, but the dialog is way over the top cheesy and it's excruciating to try and read.