Savannah

by Brian Evans, Theodore Hamby III

Valerie LeVeau is getting older, and with age comes intolerance. That wouldn't prove itself to be that big of a problem...except Valerie has the ability to obtain revenge using her abilities with Voodoo Dolls.While she in the beginning used these powers to hunt down evil-doers, the older she gets, the smarter it would be to not cut her off at the check out counter at the local grocery store.Welcome to Savannah. If you're lucky, you won't cut Valerie LeVeau off when she's attempting to cross the street.If you do, you might just have your entire life played out from the inside of a shoe box.

265 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 20, 2016

Reviews

[Juanita · Rating 2 out of 5]

The story was very interesting. My type of story but the book was poorly written. The editor needed to proofread the book because it was a lot of repeated words and I was getting really confused.

[Eg13 · Rating 1 out of 5]

As a character said"What a pile of shit!"!.

No punctuation,no proper paragraphs. Tons of redundant words describe same thing in same sentence. Two words in part of a sentence when author decides to cut the sentence into to form an odd paragraph!. No, tenses,that is no RIGHT tenses for what's going on.
Then thee storyline MAKES NO SENSE!. If this guy is REALLY a musician and actor, I hope he's better at that than writing!. Or else he's going to be on welfare soon. That is the TRUTH,about this total piece of crap!.