If you've ever read a decent fantasy book in your life, you probably shouldn't read this. There are better books to spent your time reading. If you haven't read a decent fantasy book, then go ahead and read this one. Actually no, don't, cause then you'll get a bad first impression on fantasy books and never read another one again, and we don't want that now, do we??
I don't enjoy being negative about books, so I'm dreadfully sorry. But...EEP, this book! Yeah.
I don't even know where to start. So, ask me what I know about the main character.
"What do you know about the main character?"
Okay, um...she's got brown hair, pale skin, brown eyes...she likes reading...um...oh, right, and she has a best friend named Penny. Ta-dah! There is no character complexity, no character arc, no character...anything. As if the author tried too hard to make the MC relatable, and thus made her all the more not relatable.
What about Jax? Well, black hair, green eyes, and he's really mischievous. A rule-breaker. Never heard that one before.
Darius, who's the ALMOST cowardly best friend who we know almost nothing about.
Revus, the dad, who's a jerk and then kinda nice and then a jerk again...and then kinda nice again!!
And of course, the Evil. The mysterious old guy from ages past who's been cooped up in a tower getting stronger in order to break out and take over the world. YAY. Lots of complexity there.
(this honestly hurts)
Ask me what I know about the World setting.
"What do you know about the World setting?"
Right, so there's magic...more magic...a council, some rules called the Code, books aren't allowed...yeah, that's it.
REALLY?
I don't even know what the world looks like! What kind of houses they live in! What the terrain is like, where it is in relation to our world, what kind of food they eat, or transportation, or medical information, or ANYTHING in those lists of Mandatory Questions to Answer When Worldbuilding.
No one talks like these people talk. '"No, father," Jax said. "Do not let your impatience cloud your judgement."' Yeah, cause we all talk to our dads like that. UM...
Basically this was the epitome of cliche, predictable, cookie-cutter books. All showing, no telling, no description, no realistic thought processes...
The thing is, it's a good plot! The plot in its pure, unrefined form is relatively good! But the writing style, boring characters, and lack of emotion, detail, and excitement ruined the idea of the plot completely.
To try to end this slightly encouraging-ly...there are a bunch of good books out there! Truly! I would suggest those over this one!!
(Maybe more like 1.5 stars...)
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