A new serial killer is on the loose and this time he's more cunning than the last. Logan Hunter is the best forensic scientist in his field and in this case he has a more personal motivation to apprehend the killer. A foreign beauty is brought in to help. Logan studied her for a moment before his dark eye calmed a bit; turning his gaze from her his gaze focused instead on the pictures of Shanelle's brutally beat up body, he felt chocked up and full of rage once more but blinked several times quickly to avoid the build-up of tears. He would not cry around this French woman. He would not allow her the pleasure of seeing him weakened. Aimée sighed, taking his silence as a refusal. She closed her eyes for a moment and took a deep breath. How will Logan take to her encroaching on his turf? Together will they be able to stop the killer before he strikes again?
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I downloaded 4 of these books (for gratis from Kindle) which appeared to be a series but ended up being a serialisation of a novel.
The story revolves around a serial killer, although it seems that our female and male protagonist, along with the male antagonist, have had devastating childhoods and a hatred of their parents as a result - particularly their mothers. It will be interesting to see how this story arc progresses as the novel delves deeper into the story.
Well written with a plot line that held your attention, it was however, let down dramatically by formatting/editing/proof reading.(Not quite sure who does what in that regard) The way the book was set out led to confusion for me and significantly halted the flow of reading while you worked out what was happening.
Within a chapter there were often two or three different scenes, and although each new scene was the start of a new paragraph, there was nothing to separate them to understand that a new perspective had been drawn. They just seemed to flow on together and you were left going "Huh?? .... what's happening? Ohhh ... ok .... they're talking from the other person's perspective."
I feel the flow of the book and the overall enjoyment of reading it would be significantly improved with a little tweaking. If there was a "break" built in between the changes of scene/perspective, like a couple of lines spaces, or perhaps with a line space, a couple of asterisks and another line space it would be undeniably easier to read.(I have seen other authors do this in the same situation) Maybe the author could remedy this with an updated version? I'd be more than happy to review again. Onto the second serialisation!
From the get-go, there were a number of punctuation, grammatical, and spelling errors...which only progressed to construction, as your reading progressed, as well.
There was no mystery to the way it was written, but instead the simplistic words were obviously inclined (wistfully, at that) to satiate the "...Shades of Grey..." fans. It had a forced "mystery/thriller" to it.