This story was basically a blow-by-blow rewrite of “Prisoner of the Raven”, which I hated for a number of reasons. A very long sea voyage during which one protagonist gets sick (while being nursed and fretted over by the other protagonist), then protagonist #2 gets sick (and gets nursed by protagonist #1) and then repeat this cycle again and again, ad nauseum. Almost everything was redone here, right down the UTTERLY POINTLESS heterosexual encounter. What, again, was the point of writing a scene where Liall gets his privates fondled by his old female mentor and enjoys it enough to get sexually aroused, make out with her, and almost cheat on Scarlet? What was the point? To show him getting excited just so as to reiterate (yet again) that Liall is super masculine and can get it up for the ladies? What point AT ALL was there in the author including this scene? At least his didn’t completely have hardcore straight sex with her in FRONT of Scarlet like the character did in “Prisoner of the Raven”, which was utterly debasing and revolting, and not because it was lady parts, I’m not that squeamish. I was disgusted because it was cheap and pointless, and it didn’t add anything to the storyline. And what of the storyline with Liall’s ex-wife? It was pointless as well. And in the end it came to nothing at all. Other than portraying her as a trite, immature, hysterical b*#ch, which surprises me coming from a female writer. What irritates me now is that so often, even in gay literature, there is a lack of legitimacy and dignity regarding the homosexual relationship arc. Gay characters can’t even reign supreme in their own literary domain now?! It's like we're going backwards and I think that really speaks to some deeper issues. Anyway, I’m done ranting to noone. I didn’t care for this story and I skimmed through the third one just to wrap it up, and, BIG NEWS: I didn’t really care for it either. What started as a very promising potential plot basically just went off the rails on a crazy train. I don’t even care enough to write another whiney review about the third book.