Not my favourite
3 ⭐️
I’ve sat on this one for a day trying to get my thoughts together.
I’ll be honest and say that I read a friends review of this one before I started it, and that friend was majorly disappointed with this instalment so my expectations were not high.
I think taking it out of Honolulu changed the feel of this one and there were a few things that annoyed me.
The storyline started off well (there was one thing at the start that majorly annoyed me, I’ll come back to this later) but took a left hand turn somewhere into the unbelievable. Suspending belief made this one an OK read, but up until now I’ve not had to suspend belief in this series, Kimo has always just stumbled along making mistakes and then picking up and continuing on, so that was a disappointment.
Kimo and Ray are still homicide detectives working with the FBI, so I really didn’t understand why they were the ones that had to go to Japan and then continue onto the mainland USA, are there no others at the FBI capable? It was no longer a murder investigation but a terrorist threat, surely there were others that were more qualified to handle it. Also I can’t believe the FBI agents in Seattle didn’t question absolutely everyone at the port in relation to the plutonium coming in, this is a major problem so how did they miss a witness and the only witness with some actual information? And then you get to Kimo’s agreeing with the reasoning of the terrorists. Is he an actual police officer? How in gods name can he agree with the terrorists logic – I just can’t, I’ve got nothing for this stupidity.
Mike – Mike annoyed me at times during this one. Yes he was disappointed that Kimo was traveling, but the guy was traveling for work, suck it up, it’s not like he was galivanting around the world for pleasure leaving you at home, and yet all he did was complain every time Kimo rang and then to fall of the wagon (still not sure if this was actually an accident or not) but as an adult you need to be a bit more responsible for your own sobriety, it can’t be Kimo’s responsibility to keep you sober. You can’t lay that at Kimo’s feet, that’s not fair on any partner.
I also felt like Ray’s wanting to move back to Philadelphia came a bit out of the blue. I thought after working together for so long, that he would have talked to Kimo before he talked to the FBI boss, at least tell him he was thinking about it.
But the one thing that majorly annoyed me for this one was the way Kimo’s dad’s death was handled. I understand that this is a police procedural but Kimo’s family has appeared throughout the series, and Kimo holds his father in deep affection and respect which has been shown throughout the series. Yes we have seen his dad’s health deteriorate over the series with a lot of time spent in the last book going through his valve replacement and how the family coped with his health issues, so I thought he deserved a better send off than a throw away one line comment. If the author was that inclined to kill him off, no problems no one lives forever, but he could have done it in the last book while going through the valve replacement, at least give him that, tutu Al deserved better than he was given.
Won’t stop me reading the next one. Hopefully it returns to what it was and this was just a minor blimp