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448 pages, Paperback
First published November 17, 2016

“One is never the same at the end of a journey as at the beginning.”
“Watch and you will see truth. Men wear themselves outside their clothes, no matter how much they think they hide.”
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I want you to know, i started this series intending to love the heck out of it.
BUT,
THE VENGEANCE TRILOGY FAILS TO LIVE UP TO THE HYPE.
I am a firm believer in the fact that fantasy books like this don't have lot of word count to dilly dally. This isn't Malazan, LoTR, Stormlight Archive, Wheel of Time or Chronicles of The Black Company where you have the luxury of creating not only truly epic worlds from scratch but also the truly beautiful luxury of not coming right out and saying where the plot is going.
More often than not with these epic fantasies, there's all these strings that come together in the end. My point is, because of the scope of those books, writers that fall in there have the luxury of a truck load of word count and time in putting everything together. This book and the series as a whole did not have that luxury.
I would have appreciated if right from Book 1 Madson had got all her ducks in a row.
Are you going for political intrigue? Are you exploring empaths?
What exactly are you trying to get across?
Right from book 1, this book is plagued with so many contrived plots that i personally felt makes the series struggle to put the story down in a seamless fashion.
Some of the major problems with this series was the under utilisation of major characters. I'm talking of Kin and especially Endyomin. When you start this series, you're led to believe that Endyomin has such a significant role to play that without him, the whole plot would spontaneously combust. As you read, you realise that honestly, this series could be carried without him.
As for Kin, at the beginning he comes in as a sort of supporting character you don't exactly need to worry about, gradually his character is given a voice and starts to play an active role in shaping the plot -at least, that's what the plot tries to convince you is happening- but then you begin to see how wasted Kin's character is & who is ultimately just there to push Hana as a shinning beacon emerging from the shrouds of all 'wrongs' done to her.
I wish Kin was a more complicated character. I felt like someone who had risen to that pinnacle would be more shrewd, more calculating. I mean holding the empire wasn't beans. How did he come undone just like that?
Also Katashi. Now that was another damn good character and i hate the way he was wasted.
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I keep talking about how authors need to come correct with the female characters and honestly see this Hana character, throw her away. Like throw the whole character away. Madson doesn't give Hana's character a whole lot of tools to work with, and simply want's you to root for her for no other reason than she's a woman while consistently -i can't stress this enough- showing her as someone who was not smart and so gaddamn fickle with her emotions...
Also, you see this thing authors' do where they trash a love interest just so readers can be okay with the female characters' skipping to another love interest without consequences? They need to dead that rubbish. Because it's so unfair and i absolutely hate the way, authors' make it easy for the female character to do a 180 like that WITHOUT CONSEQUENCES!!!
Honestly this shouldn't have been a book where you could clearly rope peoples' actions into black and white boxes without going "damn!! i kinda see where this dude is coming from".
I wish the author had put more effort into fleshing out her characters and why were women just referred to as whores willy nilly like that? so puzzling.
I wish the back bone of this book was rooted in political intrigue and not the the empathy thing because i felt it made the whole plot even more disjointed than it should have been.
It really didn't do this series any favours.
Best part of this book was the Errant game. Really thought it was going to pick up from there but i thought wrong.
All in all, a really disappointing read. ⭐⭐ but that Errant game scene was cool as fuck so points for that.