QUICK READ THAT NEEDS BETTER EDITING
The title and book cover really caught my attention. The description was enticing. However, realizing that this is the author's first attempt at writing erotica, I may not be the best audience for this book. I also write erotica and enjoy reading "sexy" books with strong character development and storyline. She probably did not use the services of a good editor which this book needs.
I did enjoy three of the stories but felt each ended too soon- without telling the "rest of the story"! The author did improve as she went along. The first story was my least favorite and the last story was best in my opinion.
The first two stories were so full of nicknames for body parts that I made a list. Instead of using vagina or pussy the author used "her cookie", beauty bud", "sugar walls", "creamy box", "downtown", "cock warmer", "honey pot", etc! A penis, cock or dick were referred to as "sausage", "magic stick", "meat", "third leg", "pipe", "package", "my piece", "magic stick", etc. Condoms were called "a jimmy" and boobs or breasts were "bazookas". My style is to simply call a dick a dick. I don't know anyone who uses the above terms for penis, vagina. condoms or boobs. These expressions simply detracted from the stories!
While I may sound harsh, I want to say I was entertained and laughed out loud a few times. However, I like to read erotica to get turned on and it just DIDN'T happen with this book. I think the author is gifted in crafting an interesting story but I would prefer ANY of these if they were extended and the cutesy body part language eliminated.
As stated, I really enjoyed the last story and think it has real potential for a longer novella or book with more character development and revealing of the character's feelings.