1.5⭐️
Let me start out by saying I learned about some women I’d never heard of before and I appreciate the author choosing to highlight those who have not typically been society’s go-to phenomenal woman (save Maya Angelou). I was glad to be introduced to many of these women for the first time. I also like how the author started with women clear back in 1761, going up to present day.
I understand it is not a small task to write a book. That being said, this book drove me crazy! The chapters are not labeled with the name of each woman, and she never clearly introduces them, so one spends a whole page playing a guessing game about which woman the author is even talking about. So many (and too many) weird metaphors. Though the stories were interesting, they felt scattered and felt as if the author would remember a random fact about the woman and put it right into the middle of whatever paragraph she was writing at the time. Quite frankly, I was confused much of the time and had to reread sentences or paragraphs.
Though I was still convinced that these women were phenomenal in some way, the author did not portray them in a complimentary light. I don’t mean to say one should not learn about the hardships and the terrible upbringings and experiences these women had (most of which pushed them to “still rise”), but the overall tone was negativity about the woman, not her circumstances. Again, the author introduced me to many of these women, and I’m grateful for that, but it ended up being through my own research that I found out how great they were. I felt the author focused too much on their mistakes, not triumphs, and unfortunately didn’t do these women justice.
Also, I have not written a book and am not perfect at all things grammar, but don’t get me started on all the typos, poor sentence structure and syntax, and the (lack of) fluidity in her writing.