New Order

Hidden Vampire Slayers #1

by H.J. Lawson

They were born to fight. Created to win. But the question remains... Who's the real enemy? When Sadie heads out for the night, she hardly expects to witness a murder--much less a murder committed by a dangerous vampire with a thirst for vengeance and destruction. Within a few hours, Sadie and her boyfriend Aaron are pulled into a violent vampire world. Searching for a way to survive, they know they must fight, but this might be a battle they just can't win.

Genres: Vampires, Paranormal, Urban Fantasy

113 pages, Kindle Edition

First published October 11, 2016

Reviews

[Joanne H · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved reading this book! All the action, strong characters, and good storyline. I didn't want to put this book down!

[Nan · Rating 4 out of 5]

New book. I didn't give it too much thought when i read it on Amazon, but now after finished it, it was a nice plot.

[chucklesthescot · Rating 1 out of 5]

When Sadie heads out for the night, she hardly expects to witness a murder--much less a murder committed by a dangerous vampire with a thirst for vengeance and destruction. Within a few hours, Sadie and her boyfriend Aaron are pulled into a violent vampire world. Searching for a way to survive, they know they must fight, but this might be a battle they just can't win.

The MCs are the most obnoxious bunch of teen brats ever. Lakia is a bossy, opinionated girl who has to be in charge of everything and her boyfriend is a thuggish druggie. They spend Prom flirting with other people and fighting non stop. Sadie is self obsessed and annoying. Her boyfriend is a nonentity. After a night of acting like morons and fighting all the time, they check into a cheap and disgusting hotel. Really guys, that is the best you can do for the girls? Ugh. I was looking forward to all of them being eaten by the vampires but no such luck.

Each paragraph is about 1-3 lines long so it looks really weird on the page. It changes paragraph in the middle of sentences which is really annoying, poor spelling, all tell no show, no spacing between one character and another...frankly it's a mess. Add that to the writing style not being great as the characters lack depth, personality or emotion, and the plot not being that gripping...well, I didn't like anything about it.

[Juliah · Rating 3 out of 5]

This story took a while for me to get in to and I think it was the format I downloaded. There were no paragraphs just 1-1/2 or 2 lines then a space and repeat. There were also quite a few errors that should've been edited. I enjoyed the authors idea of vampire slayers and thought it was unique. There is a ton of action and twists to the plot. Overall the story was good and this was a fun quick read.

[Carrie · Rating 5 out of 5]

I was lucky enough to receive an advanced copy of this book. I thought the characters were unforgettable and drew me into the story which was amazing. This is a must read.

[Glenda Dykstra · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good writer and look forward to reading more in the series.

[Véronique Laplante Grenier]

Really good. Looking forward to read more in the serie!

[Petra Urbič · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved it!

[Cherie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great book. Wish I could get Kindle edition for the 2nd book.