[7/10]
When the going gets tough, the toughs escape to Babylon!
It doesn’t get much tougher than the career of C. Card as a private eye. It is 1942 and he is penniless, his car repossessed, his rent several months overdue, his secretary gone and his case list a big zero. He owns money to every former friend, including a police sergeant and he is ready to throw in the towel and move back in with his overbearing mother.
I’d much rather be in ancient Babylon then in the Twentieth Century trying to put two bits together for a hamburger and I love Nana-dirat more than any woman I’ve ever met in the flesh.
The reason our first person narrator is such a wreck is his habit of taking refuge from reality into an alternate universe, modelled after the wonders of ancient Babylon, a place where he is everything he cannot be on the regular plane of existence: a successful baseball player, a smart and tough as nails detective, a lover of the most beautiful woman in town, a DJ, an actor, et caetera.
My Hamlet will have a happy ending.
Ah, paradise! There can be paradise on earth if you’re a Babylonian baseball star.
Everything is possible in this imaginary world, so our hero prefers to spend his hours day-dreaming like a sleepwalker instead of pulling himself up by his bootstraps. C Card is not so much hard-boiled as pickled in a marinade of depression and penury. Yet, things are looking up for him, if only he can control his escapist impulses.
... what a day it has been so far: a client! Bullets for my gun! Five dollars! And best of all, a dead landlady!
Who could ask for anything more?
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I’ve had Brautigan on my radar for years. I was pretty sure I already tried one of his novels, but apparently this is my first foray into his fiction, picked mostly because I am a big fan of classic detective stories and ‘Dreaming of Babylon’ has this special ‘hook’ under the title : a private eye novel: 1942
The story surpassed my expectations up until the last couple of chapters, when the plot unravelled abruptly. I guess this is a case where the journey is more important than the destination, because I laughed out loud over every chapter, and I really enjoyed the delivery that is both satirical and extremely accurate of the idiom of crime fiction from the 1940s.
This whole thing was just like a pulp detective story. I couldn’t believe it. [...]
The world sure is a strange place. No wonder I spend so much time dreaming of Babylon. It’s safer.
The plot starts well, with an engaging narrator and a mystery case delivered by a bombshell lady client. The cast of secondary characters is colourful and wild, with visits to a police station, a morgue, several bars, car chases and even a midnight stroll through a cemetery.
The delivery is deadpan and the writing tight with staccato bursts of very short sentences. Most of the humorous parts rely on the contrast between the reader expectations of a good pulp novel and the mishaps caused by the narrator’s intermittent grasp of reality.
Also by the subversion of conventional characters, like that of the femme fatale:
“I don’t know where she put all the beer,” the hood started talking hysterically. “She had ten beers and she didn’t go to the toilet. She just kept drinking beer and not going to the toilet. She was so skinny. There was no place for the beer to go inside her body but she kept packing it away. She had at least ten beers. There was no room for the beer!” he screamed. “No room!”
I was going to rate the book three stars, mostly from the let down of the muddled finish, but then I read more about the author’s life online, which put the personality of C Card into a different, more tragic perspective.
This book is not a gratuitous satire of the noir genre. The subtext is a study of depression, of isolation and of a society that often sends dreamers and oddballs to the gutter.
My own laugh at C Card’s antics is, if I am totally honest, tinged with a squirming awareness that I am not so different from him when it comes to taking refuge in an imaginary world when the going gets tough. I have just got better at disguising this tendency as I got older, and I was luckier than Card in my choices of friends and careers, but Babylon is a place I used to visit a lot in my youth.
“Hello, swinging cats of Babylon!” I would say. “This is your servant of sound C. Card playing music to light your dreams by, and we’ll start out with Miss Nana-dirat, our songbird of forbidden pleasure, singing ‘When Irish Eyes Are Smiling.”
I hope I will find the time to read more from Richard Brautigan and to confirm the good impression left by this visit to Babylon.