Dead Ground, a Harbinger P.I. novel (Book 4)
by Adam J. Wright
SOME SPOILERS
Again, a very short book, very quick read. I like the characters in this series, and that single "like," in all probability, will keep me reading any future installments.
In this episode, Felicity has gone home to England to help care for her ailing father. Mallory is off, who knows where, evidently still searching for Mr. Scary. But Alec and Leon, plus Leon's butler, Michael, and the Blackwell Sisters are back and joined by Alec's friend and early mentor, Jim, and two Canadian policemen, Frasier and Girard. The initial story is that Jim, who lives in Canada, has been called in to consult with the local police on their investigation of four murders, all which bear the suggestion of preternatural involvement. Leon is feeling extremely bored, and Alec agrees to take him along on this case. Once they arrive in Canada and locate Jim, they also meet the two local police officers who are investigating these cases, Frasier, who is open to the idea of supernatural, and Girard, who is adamantly not open to the same.
While solving what entity is behind the killings, they also need to discover why the creature, one of many referred to as a 'nightwing,' which is usually very reluctant to draw attention to itself, has suddenly become so aggressive. The answer to that seems to lie in the fact that demons are using a portal to travel to our world, and that portal is located in the original territory hunted by the nightwing. By eating the demons, the nightwing absorbs their aggressive, destructive urges, which caused it to wander closer to human populations when hunting and thereby catch the attention of law enforcement. But why are so many demons coming into this world? When Jim, Alec and Leon find the portal, The Lady of the Forest, a Faerie to whom Alec owes a debt, appears and asks that Alec repay the debt by protecting her for 3 days and taking her to her torc -- or magical tiara -- from its hiding place. Alec agrees, wishing to clear his debt to her, and, of course, Jim and Leon refuse to be left out of the action. Only after they agree to do this do they discover that her need for protection stems from a war in Faerie, where three ancient vampires are working with the Midnight Cabal.
From here our heros are pursued constantly by demons, travel to Faerie to escape them, and are captured by one of the vampires and his demon forces. Alec is thrown into Shadowland -- a dark realm of nightmares, and Leon accidently ends up there too. They are attacked by some Shadowland denizens, escape, and figure out that they can find a portal to return to our world by thinking of a nightmare site from our world which would have a counterpart in Shadowland, and using that as a portal to return. This works, and they then turn to the Blackwell sisters for a way to travel to England in an attempt to retrieve the torc before the vampires manage to torture the hiding place out of The Lady of the Forest. While all this is happening, Felicity has found a possible lead in her father's current research to helping Mallory end her Heart Curse. She is also contacted by the acting head of the Society of Shadows, who is searching for Alec's father, who has mysteriously disappeared.
Can they save their friends and The Lady of the Forest?
The novel is fast-paced and full of action. The plot is interesting, as are all the side-plots Pacing is hurried, but okay. Decent editing (I have some issues...) and good proofreading, although I did find two mistakes: (2100 on my Kindle) "Perhaps he has not put Alec may be able to throw some light on what..." That probably should have read "Perhaps he has not but..." and at 2683, "...You just tell me when you want them taking down and I'll do it..." should probably read "...You just tell me when you want them taken down..." So, not bad on the proofing.
But here's what I didn't like, and I didn't like these things so much that I rated this novel 3 rather than 4 stars.
First, I was disappointed in Shadowland. It was touted as the place of all human nightmares. The place where the monsters we fear come from, and a place where all the horror that happens in our world has a twin site. There was only one encounter with the natives of Shadowland, and it wasn't that horrifying and the escape was just too easy (although I admit that I liked seeing a wizard who could actually get himself and his companion out of a situation without help!). I did like the idea of the twin sites, one in our world and one in Shadowland, and the use of that idea to get Alec and Leon back into our world. This might have been a nice spot to spend a bit more time and have the characters challenged a bit more.
Second I was disappointed that Vivian, The Lady of the Lake from the Arthurian legends, and the sister of The Lady of the Forest in this lore, didn't have a larger role in the section where Alec, Leon and Felicity go to retrieve the torc. There was sufficient action there, what with the giant, Tregeagle, who guards the Lake, and the arrival of one of the vampires and his demon followers, but the involvement of Vivian is pretty trite -- as in the Arthur legend, her hand and arm jut up from the surface of the lake, holding the torc and Alec jumps in a row boat to retrieve it. Please. Again, the description of the battle was too short (but again I was pleased to see that Alec was strong enough to help himself here, rather than needing to be saved. Yay for strong wizards.) and given the disproportionate numbers (even with Tregeagle fighting on Alec's side once the demons arrived), they, once again, escaped too easily.
Third, when Alec, Felicity, Leon, Michael, and Victoria Blackwell arrive at the home of the ancient vampires in Greece, there is really very little action, and what there is seems just too easy for our heros to get out of. Sigh. I was very disappointed.
And lastly, yes, Alec did fulfill his debt to The Lady of the Forest, by returning and "rescuing" her -- however, he was supposed to return her to her realm. He did not do that. I put "rescuing" in quotes, because I'm not sure it's a rescue when the rescued dies. The author did put in that he believed her portion of Faerie would whither and die when she did, so that's why he returned her and her torc to The Lady of the Lake. But, I was unimpressed. It just doesn't cue up with Alec's worldview to rid himself of a debt to The Lady by her death.
Anyway, I enjoyed the novel, obviously, as I was able to complete it in two sittings. However, I felt this was the author's opportunity to produce an Epic, and instead, it was a letdown. I'm hoping not only for more books in the series, but for books with more depth and more meat on the bones.