I read this just to say that I've read a light novel and I was SO RIGHT that I would not like this kind of writing. I realize that most anime type plots are best in manga/anime form for a reason. Cuz this is so not it LOL, it comes off so much more corny. It's like when you feel like you wrote smth crazy good until someone reads it back out aloud to you and you realize how silly it sounds.
The plot is practically identical to that of And Then There Were None by Agatha Christie, people invited to stay on an island, people start getting killed off, murders seem impossible, and turns out the killer is one of the "dead" people. Except it's done really weirdly in this book.
I feel like the book did a pretty bad job combining the challenging of the notion of what a genius is and a murder mystery. It really felt like I was reading two books at once : sometimes I'd be getting some random philosophy drop from Ii's inner monologue and other times, I'll have some exciting murder mystery detective work. It's not that it's ever bad to combine two subjects at once but I've never seen an author put so little effort in doing so, it felt like there was so little thought in fusioning the two. There was no subtlety in which part was which, it'd never blend, it felt like I was hopping around on the whim of the author, which made it so I didn't really feel all that immersed. I did always think the "philosophical parts" (idet i can call it that) were extremely lame, not to mention surface level (ill add silly ass quotes later), but I did find that when the author honed in specifically on the murder mystery aspect, I was immersed and enjoyed it. Why didn't he just choose to do that from the beginning? I really don't think his "challenging of the idea of what a genius is" contributed anything positive to the book and the half-baked attempt to add this "deeper" side to this book felt like just a whole nothing burger.
I think this lack of fusion really comes from the incongruency between the character's personalities and the mystery in itself. What made And then there were none so incredible was how Agatha Christie ties in each character's past both to the nursery rhyme and the killings which overall made the characters so attractive and fun to read about. But here, it felt like the author first tried to create cool characters and then as an afterthought, added a murder mystery without considering the characters. The lack of connection between the plot and the messaging makes the book feel very half-baked and overall unpolished.
- Also, all these characters were talking SO MUCH SMACKK to the main character and i was like DID I MISS A MEMO??? Is this not the first book??? Like they're being SO MEAN I DON'T GET IT. All they were saying to critique him, I didn't really witness it much and I couldn't even agree?? Like this one girl just tells him to kill himself and im like whaaat what'd he even do. Istg it's so unwarranted, I reallly don't get this book man
- the book's exposition style is so japanese, it goes like this : quote by a character -> followed by inner monologue by mc to further explain it. Like bruh it get's so tiresome, japanese books are FULL of this, Muarkami does this more subtly, in Battle Royale is the same but this one does it the most obviously.
- Example : "Now now, is that how it is? Kanami and Akane and all of them haven't given you a complex, have they?" Monologue literally right after : a complex. Even supposing it wasn't something you could...
- Example 2: "It's an original OS developed by a friend of yours truly" "A friend..."Monologue after : Kunagisa's friend. The only friend of Kunagisa...
- Example 3: "You know about increasing returns right? With an oS this different, we'd never catch up. Business goes beyond skill or talent." Monologue after : Increasing returns. The law of economics... LIKE STFUFUFUFUFU. Note that these examples are just ones I've found in the first 8% of the book, and I stopped highlighting them all after that. But there were more before and after too
- the cited examples of "genius" aren't even that crazy, like a virtual computer is literally such a normal freaking thing. Like what, pirating and torrenting is high level hacking now??
- i wish i could send a voice recording on goodreads cuz i'd read out these lines and you'd realize just how silly they sound. I HATE THESE SELF-AWARE LINES MAN, it's straight out of those skits where people pretend to be redditers and weebs. Like here's one LMFAO : "Eh? Pardon me, madame, what was the horrible thing you uttered?" or another : "Question. What is trust? Answer. Not minding if you're betrayed. Not regretting if you're betrayed" LMFAO
- i think the translation HAS to have been really poor cuz man saying things like "how you feelin my freaky people" or "she's looked like one of those well-bred young ladies" is WILD
- "I just have a bad memory, all i want is an average one, really." Just enough of one so that I wouldn't forget the fun times. Just enough of one so that I could realize the world is full of good things, too. CORNYYYYYYYY, there's all these random lines that suggest like a dark pass for the MC but it's never concretely brought up. Maybe it's in the sequels but like bruh, such a weird way to write a series
- "i didn't hate being patient. Or at least I was used to it. Suffering and pain. I was used to these things" im sure these lines must sound fire in japanese
- so many of these "genius" speeches are so supercilious and the whole time im just like " YOU'RE ONTO NOTHINGGGG"
- Ii is so unlikeable LMFAO, idk if it's meant to be the character's personality but he somehow makes things all about himself : "I'm not saying Shinya was a monster. People are just wired that way. If anyone was a monster, it was me, for only being able to nitpick at people's flaws", context being that Shinya's master just got killed
- there's this one part that idk if is intentionally cool that ends up reaffirming like this codependency thing this character's got going on with kunagisa but knowing this writing, idt it was meant to be like that LMFAO.
I hope one day someone finds me a good light novel read. I am so not convinced by this genre.