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Shirts vs. Skins
Take two of the most notorious bad boys of pro football and add one bad girl. The game will never be the same.
Ethan Blake and Colt Stackford rule the gridiron each week - amazing audiences with their record breaking conquests both on and off the field. But underneath it all simmers a deep seeded rivalry...
Until it explodes.
Now, with their careers on the line, the one person in the entire league who can save them may be more of a badas$ than both of them combined. Curvy Julianna Heaton, the youngest team owner in the league, chews up bad boys for breakfast and spits them out before lunch.
But is there room for both of them in her…lineup?
As Ethan and Colt compete for the ultimate prize, a tantalizing new possibility presents itself - one that will change their lives forever, if it doesn't destroy them all first.
Come cheer for this sizzling standalone MMF bisexual ménage romance - filled with brooding bad boy alpha males and the one woman who can tame them! No cliffhangers, but it’s a scorcher with super-steamy scenes of MF, MM, and MMF. Happily Ever After? You know it. As an thank you, also included is a bonus Victoria Cabot billionaire romance
Ethan Blake and Colt Stackford rule the gridiron each week - amazing audiences with their record breaking conquests both on and off the field. But underneath it all simmers a deep seeded rivalry...
Until it explodes.
Now, with their careers on the line, the one person in the entire league who can save them may be more of a badas$ than both of them combined. Curvy Julianna Heaton, the youngest team owner in the league, chews up bad boys for breakfast and spits them out before lunch.
But is there room for both of them in her…lineup?
As Ethan and Colt compete for the ultimate prize, a tantalizing new possibility presents itself - one that will change their lives forever, if it doesn't destroy them all first.
Come cheer for this sizzling standalone MMF bisexual ménage romance - filled with brooding bad boy alpha males and the one woman who can tame them! No cliffhangers, but it’s a scorcher with super-steamy scenes of MF, MM, and MMF. Happily Ever After? You know it. As an thank you, also included is a bonus Victoria Cabot billionaire romance
429 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 18, 2016
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About the author
Victoria Cabot
17 books57 followersVictoria Cabot is delirious about having fun in every part of her life. Whether that means being outside in beautiful weather, or sitting at home reading a book, you'll never see her go more than ten minutes without smiling. She prefers to write safe, happily ever after pieces that are nevertheless steamy and exciting. She loves bad boys - whether they are princes or billionaires. But she's a very good girl. Really!
And when she says steamy and exciting, she means, well...you'll just have to find out.
She graduated from Brown University with a degree in English Literature and has traveled the world for several years after college before eventually settling down between San Francisco and New York.
When she's not writing, Victoria loves to read, go dancing, and go shopping. Afternoon tea and a glass of wine with bubble baths are two of her favorite things. She loves getting flowers, especially when not expecting them.
For the last year, Victoria has lived in Manhattan with her golden retriever.
And when she says steamy and exciting, she means, well...you'll just have to find out.
She graduated from Brown University with a degree in English Literature and has traveled the world for several years after college before eventually settling down between San Francisco and New York.
When she's not writing, Victoria loves to read, go dancing, and go shopping. Afternoon tea and a glass of wine with bubble baths are two of her favorite things. She loves getting flowers, especially when not expecting them.
For the last year, Victoria has lived in Manhattan with her golden retriever.
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October 21, 2016
Shirts vs. Skins is a somewhat different take on the MMF romance genre. It features 2 alpha males, Ethan and Colt, who are elite footballers that play for the Dallas Devils. They have a fierce rivalry that extends back into their childhood. This time, though, the heroine, is too an alpha. Julianna owns the football team, the New York Nailers, and she acquires both men in a trade when they initiate a brawl with each other that has the Dallas Devils wanting them gone. She takes what and who she wants, when she wants, and doesn't let anyone or anything stand in her way. While I would normally appreciate this modern take on a female lead, in this case, I'm not sure it was done completely successfully. Instead of coming off as modern and confident all the time, Julianna sometimes came across as rather cold and b---hy, rather than take charge and kicka--. I did like Ethan and Colt, especially Ethan, who is well rounded and interesting. Colt is the opposite of Ethan, he's brash and cocky and brimming with self confidence. Ethan is quiet, self assured and brooding. Both are hot and unsurprisingly attracted to both each other and to Julianna.
The connection between the 3 is rather potent, but it wasn't fully realized and fleshed out. There was only one scene between just Ethan and Colt, not nearly enough for me to be convinced of their feelings for each other. But, I did enjoy the steamy scenes between Julianna and Colt and Julianna and Ethan and the one scene between Ethan and Colt.
On the whole, though, Shirts vs. Skins is well written and steamy with a sizzling attraction between its 3 leads.
I received an ARC for an honest review.
The connection between the 3 is rather potent, but it wasn't fully realized and fleshed out. There was only one scene between just Ethan and Colt, not nearly enough for me to be convinced of their feelings for each other. But, I did enjoy the steamy scenes between Julianna and Colt and Julianna and Ethan and the one scene between Ethan and Colt.
On the whole, though, Shirts vs. Skins is well written and steamy with a sizzling attraction between its 3 leads.
I received an ARC for an honest review.
October 19, 2016
This was another great read by this author. I loved it! In this story we get a cocky, SOB, playboy in Colt. We also get a cocky, SOB, playgirl in Julianna. That’s right, she acts with and treats men the way Colt acts with and treats women. She is unapologetic in her actions and wanting pleasure all for herself, and to heck with whether the man she’s with gets pleasure. One of the things I loved was how her haters were called out for believing in the double standards when it comes to men’s and women’s sexual habits. These two characters are not the only ones we get though. Add in a hot and sexy Ethan who’s more subdued than Colt and Julianna and we’ve got a smoking hot and very combustible trio.
I also loved the style in which this was written. It goes back and forth with first person point of views from chapter to chapter. There were times where the characters were talking directly to us, the readers. I found myself laughing out loud during some of those commentaries.
*I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.*
I also loved the style in which this was written. It goes back and forth with first person point of views from chapter to chapter. There were times where the characters were talking directly to us, the readers. I found myself laughing out loud during some of those commentaries.
*I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.*
October 19, 2016
Shirts vs. Skins is a HOT MMF story that features 2 HOT football players (Colt & Ethan) who are nemesis and they are traded to the only team that will take them on after fighting on national TV. Julianna is the only female Owner of the Nationwide Football League, and she's known for going after what she wants. Julianna takes the trade of Colt & Ethan, and she decides she want them for more than just the team. Colt & Ethan have known each other forever, and when they go to meet Julianna they are instantly in lust. They each want Julianna, and she in turn wants both of them.
This book is full of rivalry, scandal, MMF, sex and more sex with a HEA!
I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.
This book is full of rivalry, scandal, MMF, sex and more sex with a HEA!
I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.
November 2, 2016
Is this a true story? My name is Juliana and I'm a ......
“We just need to get this interview with Victoria Cabot sorted out tonight if since she’s releasing her book about us,” Colt says."
This author is so darn funny. I love it when she writes herself into the story. I'm not sure how I would classify this story other than perhaps as a "sizzling menage romantic sports fantasy".
Well done Miz Cabot.... very well done.
“We just need to get this interview with Victoria Cabot sorted out tonight if since she’s releasing her book about us,” Colt says."
This author is so darn funny. I love it when she writes herself into the story. I'm not sure how I would classify this story other than perhaps as a "sizzling menage romantic sports fantasy".
Well done Miz Cabot.... very well done.
October 19, 2016
It’s funny how many sports romances I read while knowing nothing about sports. I don’t think that knowledge is necessary. I do love the team names, they make me laugh! These 3 are H-O-T. I loved their story and I want more! PS love the girl power and the strong, independent heroine!
I received an arc of this book.
I received an arc of this book.
October 26, 2016
Holy Hotness!
Shirts vs skins
Man this was one HOT read. Steamy from the first chapter. Julianna is a strong character with a back bone and makes any bad boy work for his title. From the moment you meet her you know there's going to be major fireworks. Colt is an arrogant prick who is the worst type of bad boy. I was happily surprised by him throughout the book, but especially at the end. Colt and Julianna are hot together, but when Ethan is added into the mix, it's time to call the fire trucks for a good hose down. Ethan is a bad boy in his own right, but he's no where near the level of Colt or Julianna...that we know of. He's more quiet and secretive. He gets wrapped up immediately and knows he's falling hard for Julianna, but never expected his feelings for Colt. Watching this trio finally admit they're in love was amazing and seeing them back each other up during the press conference was awesome. Thank you for a great read.
Rent with Benefits
Wow, ok let's just say the beginning had me a bit creeped out. Knowing someone was only willing to rent me a room with the payment being basic cleaning and sex would have freaked me out as well and Alicia's thoughts of Tristan being a pervert was agreeable, but that's no reason to be a total pain in the rump and feel angry all the time. She's the one that agreed with the terms, sometimes you just have to suck it up and deal. The more we learn about Tristan, the more I want to know. He should know better than expect a female not to snoop, especially when telling them not to snoop...that just makes it more intriguing. You can really feel the pull between them when they're together. Man, can I just say that those scenes are HOT! Once Alicia finds out more about him, she's even more emotionally involved. Bruno deserves to get his butt beat but I understand the reasoning behind it. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing!
Shirts vs skins
Man this was one HOT read. Steamy from the first chapter. Julianna is a strong character with a back bone and makes any bad boy work for his title. From the moment you meet her you know there's going to be major fireworks. Colt is an arrogant prick who is the worst type of bad boy. I was happily surprised by him throughout the book, but especially at the end. Colt and Julianna are hot together, but when Ethan is added into the mix, it's time to call the fire trucks for a good hose down. Ethan is a bad boy in his own right, but he's no where near the level of Colt or Julianna...that we know of. He's more quiet and secretive. He gets wrapped up immediately and knows he's falling hard for Julianna, but never expected his feelings for Colt. Watching this trio finally admit they're in love was amazing and seeing them back each other up during the press conference was awesome. Thank you for a great read.
Rent with Benefits
Wow, ok let's just say the beginning had me a bit creeped out. Knowing someone was only willing to rent me a room with the payment being basic cleaning and sex would have freaked me out as well and Alicia's thoughts of Tristan being a pervert was agreeable, but that's no reason to be a total pain in the rump and feel angry all the time. She's the one that agreed with the terms, sometimes you just have to suck it up and deal. The more we learn about Tristan, the more I want to know. He should know better than expect a female not to snoop, especially when telling them not to snoop...that just makes it more intriguing. You can really feel the pull between them when they're together. Man, can I just say that those scenes are HOT! Once Alicia finds out more about him, she's even more emotionally involved. Bruno deserves to get his butt beat but I understand the reasoning behind it. This was a great read. Thank you for sharing!
October 19, 2016
I gave this Book a rating of 5 ✩’s
Title: Shirts vs. Skins: A Two Athlete MMF Bisexual Romance
Series: Stand Alone
Genre: Romance, Sports Romance, Ménage Romance
Author: Victoria Cabot
Format: E-book
Published on: Oct 18, 2016
I voluntarily reviewed a Courtesy Advanced Reader Copy of this book
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Main Character’s Descriptions:
Heroine: Julianna Heaton owner of the Dallas Devils
Heroes: Ethan Blake and Colt Stackford football players who have a bit in common and a lot not so in common
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Summary Paragraph:
Ethan and Colt are in some serious trouble after a bit of hijinks and the only one that can save them is their team owner Julianna.
Julianna is a team owner but she can be a bit strong handed when it serves her.
Can they figure a way out of their trouble or do they just get into more trouble?
I received a Courtesy Advanced Reader Copy of this book.
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What I liked/Didn’t Like: I love Victoria Cabot’s books they are all very different from each other but with the same great writing. She has a way with words that just pulls you into the story like you are a part of it.
Title: Shirts vs. Skins: A Two Athlete MMF Bisexual Romance
Series: Stand Alone
Genre: Romance, Sports Romance, Ménage Romance
Author: Victoria Cabot
Format: E-book
Published on: Oct 18, 2016
I voluntarily reviewed a Courtesy Advanced Reader Copy of this book
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Main Character’s Descriptions:
Heroine: Julianna Heaton owner of the Dallas Devils
Heroes: Ethan Blake and Colt Stackford football players who have a bit in common and a lot not so in common
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Summary Paragraph:
Ethan and Colt are in some serious trouble after a bit of hijinks and the only one that can save them is their team owner Julianna.
Julianna is a team owner but she can be a bit strong handed when it serves her.
Can they figure a way out of their trouble or do they just get into more trouble?
I received a Courtesy Advanced Reader Copy of this book.
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What I liked/Didn’t Like: I love Victoria Cabot’s books they are all very different from each other but with the same great writing. She has a way with words that just pulls you into the story like you are a part of it.
December 8, 2016
2/5 Stars, for poor writing, spelling and the book genuinely being full of mistakes.
I was quite surprised to dislike this book so much, despite the incredible ratings I've seen on this site. Let me just start with the obvious flaw - my book was filled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical mistakes, and other just straight up scary writer mess ups, like repeating the same words three times in a single sentence.
This book felt like a first, very very VERY rough draft, of what it could be.
Then I'm going to move onto the actual book. There was literally zero character development. The main folks went from hating each other to falling in love in a turn of a page. If this story was published on a popular writing site for amateurs, it would have been able to slide by, but as an actual published novel?? I don't think so.
And I have to mention how the last chapter was the main characters just talking about the author (yes, the actual author of the book) her email, Facebook, bla bla address. Zero story, just shameless self promotion.
The only reason I'm giving this book 2 stars is because I keep 1 star reviews for books so bad I couldn't even finish.
I was quite surprised to dislike this book so much, despite the incredible ratings I've seen on this site. Let me just start with the obvious flaw - my book was filled with typos, spelling errors, grammatical mistakes, and other just straight up scary writer mess ups, like repeating the same words three times in a single sentence.
This book felt like a first, very very VERY rough draft, of what it could be.
Then I'm going to move onto the actual book. There was literally zero character development. The main folks went from hating each other to falling in love in a turn of a page. If this story was published on a popular writing site for amateurs, it would have been able to slide by, but as an actual published novel?? I don't think so.
And I have to mention how the last chapter was the main characters just talking about the author (yes, the actual author of the book) her email, Facebook, bla bla address. Zero story, just shameless self promotion.
The only reason I'm giving this book 2 stars is because I keep 1 star reviews for books so bad I couldn't even finish.
December 12, 2016
I'm exceedingly happy that I got this book for free. I wanted to put it down and mark it DNF after the first 2 paragraphs into the book, but I pressed on and tried to just accept the book for what it was...a trashy attempt at erotic fiction because there was no love here, only lust. The story is framed around these two bitter rivals who all of a sudden, because of a woman, find that they are attracted to one another. While I attempted to accept this, the over the top way these two acted made it difficult. As for our heroine, she was even more over the top than the guys to the point where I found nothing I liked about her. Now my difficulty with this book wasn't with the actual plot, although it was lacking, but rather with the execution of the story itself. It's poorly written, no question about it, and I guess I shouldn't expected any better. I mean with lines like "That’s two feet of fuck muscle that we’re going to be putting inside this woman" how could you not roll your eyes? Don't even get me started on the names of her supposed NFL teams either, and the sex scenes lacked creativity. Again, I'm just glad it was free and I didn't waste money on this one.
October 22, 2016
Victoria Cabot is known for creating strong alpha characters in her stories and she does it hear by leaps and bounds! Not only is there one alpha male, but two... plus one alpha female...add that together and you have one heck of a hot mix waiting to see who, if any, comes out on top! ;)
Colt is so crass, you want to hate him... but at the same time, just lock him away in your closet. Ethan is a little more subtle on his approach and it's like opening a gift to see exactly what treasures await you. Then add Juliana who knows what she wants and will go after it... it's a dynamic and explosive combination sure to set your thoughts on fire!
I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book.
Colt is so crass, you want to hate him... but at the same time, just lock him away in your closet. Ethan is a little more subtle on his approach and it's like opening a gift to see exactly what treasures await you. Then add Juliana who knows what she wants and will go after it... it's a dynamic and explosive combination sure to set your thoughts on fire!
I voluntarily reviewed an advanced reader copy of this book.
October 19, 2016
I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book
Oh wow....talk about Girl Power. Sexy Julianna Heaton, Team owner of the New York Nailers. A woman with a mind of her own and takes what she wants whenever and wherever. So when she meets QB and Defence players Colt Stackford and Ethan Blake, two hot sexy guys, they real don't stand a chance. Nice change. When fate takes a hand and you have to choose to keep one on the team only, how do you do that. A hot, sexy, funny read that ticked all the boxes off my list. Lots of banter, drama, sex, new surprising revelations and a story that has to be on your definitely to read list. The good thing is, she wants to keep them both. Loved it.
Oh wow....talk about Girl Power. Sexy Julianna Heaton, Team owner of the New York Nailers. A woman with a mind of her own and takes what she wants whenever and wherever. So when she meets QB and Defence players Colt Stackford and Ethan Blake, two hot sexy guys, they real don't stand a chance. Nice change. When fate takes a hand and you have to choose to keep one on the team only, how do you do that. A hot, sexy, funny read that ticked all the boxes off my list. Lots of banter, drama, sex, new surprising revelations and a story that has to be on your definitely to read list. The good thing is, she wants to keep them both. Loved it.
October 19, 2016
I've received this book as a ARC for a review and I must say that I absolutely loved reading this book. This novel not only included some very well-developed characters, but the comedic punchlines within this story was in all the right places to add a bit of humor which made the overall book much more interesting.
Overall, this book was a very well-crafted and intensely hot read that I enjoyed reading all the way through. Because of this, I'm reviewing this book with 5-stars and highly recommending it to anyone who's interested in reading a very good romance.
Overall, this book was a very well-crafted and intensely hot read that I enjoyed reading all the way through. Because of this, I'm reviewing this book with 5-stars and highly recommending it to anyone who's interested in reading a very good romance.
November 11, 2016
I voluntarily reviewed an Advanced Copy of this book.
Shirts vs. Skins is about two footballers and their team owner. Colt and Ethan grew up but were not friends in the least. After a altercation on live TV they are traded to another team which is owned by Julianna. Julianna is in the belief that a woman can use men for sex just in the same way men has since the beginning of time.
There is mutual attraction between Julianna and each of the guys which grows into everyone having an attraction to each other. The sex was off the charts and the storyline was good also.
Shirts vs. Skins is about two footballers and their team owner. Colt and Ethan grew up but were not friends in the least. After a altercation on live TV they are traded to another team which is owned by Julianna. Julianna is in the belief that a woman can use men for sex just in the same way men has since the beginning of time.
There is mutual attraction between Julianna and each of the guys which grows into everyone having an attraction to each other. The sex was off the charts and the storyline was good also.
November 28, 2016
Over the top.
Steamy.
Panty wetting (literally).
The whole thing was ridiculous ... and enjoyable in the same way.
I cannot get enough of an Alpha Female. Then pair her with these 2 men? And some of the hottest sex on a Kindle? Oh goodness.
I'll say it again - way over the top. Not just the relationship(s) but also the plot lines. Not at all realistic but that's why it's such a fun and enjoyable read.
Be prepared for a Polyandrous Menage Romance and Male on Male sex.
Steamy.
Panty wetting (literally).
The whole thing was ridiculous ... and enjoyable in the same way.
I cannot get enough of an Alpha Female. Then pair her with these 2 men? And some of the hottest sex on a Kindle? Oh goodness.
I'll say it again - way over the top. Not just the relationship(s) but also the plot lines. Not at all realistic but that's why it's such a fun and enjoyable read.
Be prepared for a Polyandrous Menage Romance and Male on Male sex.
November 22, 2016
Lots of dramatic scenes.
I found this story to be over the top in every sense, but in a comical way. The sex scenes were hot, even though a little far fetched. The characters are so full of themselves it's hilarious. Definitely worth a read. My only picky judgment is some of the fails on word grammar. I'm no expert by any means, but little things like using 'an' instead of 'a', should be easy to spot doing a read through.
I found this story to be over the top in every sense, but in a comical way. The sex scenes were hot, even though a little far fetched. The characters are so full of themselves it's hilarious. Definitely worth a read. My only picky judgment is some of the fails on word grammar. I'm no expert by any means, but little things like using 'an' instead of 'a', should be easy to spot doing a read through.
October 29, 2016
Loved the storyline
Although I loved Ms. Cabot's storylines, she definitely needs to work on editing. There were quite a few grammatical errors and typos that made reading some sentences confusing. I hope she continues to write good stories. Also, I would love it if she added epilogues that give us a future look into the lives of the characters.
Although I loved Ms. Cabot's storylines, she definitely needs to work on editing. There were quite a few grammatical errors and typos that made reading some sentences confusing. I hope she continues to write good stories. Also, I would love it if she added epilogues that give us a future look into the lives of the characters.
November 2, 2016
Once we're introduced to all 3 main characters I thought I was going to like this story, but it hit a nose dive quickly. This book had too much inner dialogue, endless and endless pages of describing sex became redundant and I started skipping pages. The first sex tape was believable, but after the 4th one it became stupid. Also, I never felt any chemistry in this menage.
November 19, 2016
Wow
This is my first time reading anything by this author. I picked this book up as something to keep me occupied while waiting for the next installment from one of my go to authors. I am very very happy I got this book. I love Ethan. Colt is ok. Great duo. Rephrase. Great trio!! I will be checking out other stories by this author.
This is my first time reading anything by this author. I picked this book up as something to keep me occupied while waiting for the next installment from one of my go to authors. I am very very happy I got this book. I love Ethan. Colt is ok. Great duo. Rephrase. Great trio!! I will be checking out other stories by this author.
November 20, 2016
Amazingly sexy
Shirts Vs. Skins was HOTT and steamy from page 1! I loved how I got to fall in love with Ethan and Colt individually first and Julianna wasn't a weeping willow but a strong Alpha female that was just refreshing and sexy! I thoroughly enjoyed this book and would recommend it to someone who is into a funny, hot, and extremely sexy romance.
Shirts Vs. Skins was HOTT and steamy from page 1! I loved how I got to fall in love with Ethan and Colt individually first and Julianna wasn't a weeping willow but a strong Alpha female that was just refreshing and sexy! I thoroughly enjoyed this book and would recommend it to someone who is into a funny, hot, and extremely sexy romance.
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November 13, 2016Interesting story. I'd like to towel snap the editor; if I saw this many spelling errors in print I'd be worried for the publisher.
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I'm all for pure fantasy, but very sexually-active people should be using condoms. This is stupid and SO unsafe!
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I'm all for pure fantasy, but very sexually-active people should be using condoms. This is stupid and SO unsafe!
November 20, 2016
Amazing!
I've never read this author before but after this book I can't wait to check out her other novels! This book was extraordinarily erotic and well written. I love a good menage and this book hit it out of the park! Definitely recommend it!
I've never read this author before but after this book I can't wait to check out her other novels! This book was extraordinarily erotic and well written. I love a good menage and this book hit it out of the park! Definitely recommend it!
November 29, 2016
Pretty f*cking HOT
I loved the story...especially the team names!! I think I would've like just a lil more MM action, but def a awesome read if you like this kinda thing. I am without a doubt going to read more from this author!!
I loved the story...especially the team names!! I think I would've like just a lil more MM action, but def a awesome read if you like this kinda thing. I am without a doubt going to read more from this author!!
November 13, 2016
Interesting concept
This was a different synopsis that I've never seen. I would have rated it higher but there were errors galore in it & that's a pet peeve.
This was a different synopsis that I've never seen. I would have rated it higher but there were errors galore in it & that's a pet peeve.
November 14, 2016
Lol
This book had me laughing from the beginning these three are bad ass on there own but combined they are a power source...
This book had me laughing from the beginning these three are bad ass on there own but combined they are a power source...
November 25, 2016
Great!!!
Except for the errors in grammar and such, a fun story. Lots of great sex!!!!
Kind of impossible story line, but fun and worth the time and effort.
Except for the errors in grammar and such, a fun story. Lots of great sex!!!!
Kind of impossible story line, but fun and worth the time and effort.
November 30, 2016
naughty!
this story is naughty and nice, also hot, hot, hot. it has messed with my fantasies. ms Cabot could use me as a proof reader to catch the many mistakes and extra words.
this story is naughty and nice, also hot, hot, hot. it has messed with my fantasies. ms Cabot could use me as a proof reader to catch the many mistakes and extra words.
December 12, 2016
DNF, just horrible
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