DNF'd at 34%.
I wanted to like this book, really. This was my first try at historical fiction (romance, it’s honestly just a romance book set in the Wild West, but okay) because I heard it was good.
But #1 and #3 just led this book review into full-on rant mode. So, if you'd like a long review for only the first 34% of this novel, here you go.
1. To begin, this book has the most ridiculous and honestly the stupidest paragraph I have ever read in any novel… ever. It’s so utterly ridiculous I bookmarked it. It is referring to the obvious animosity between the Native Americans and the settlers in the West at the time. It reads: “Those horrible deaths, among others over the winter, were evidence that a state of undeclared war existed with the Indians – at least, undeclared on the white man’s part” (pg. 39).
ARE YOU KIDDING ME.
What, were they just planning on taking over the Native’s land and just expected them to be cool about it? That war was declared in everything but writing.
The fact that the next page and a half goes over the historical aspect of this paragraph does not negate this claim, nor make this claim any less stupid.
2. This book has the most abhorrent case of love at first sight that I have ever seen. She raises the gun to shoot Kincaid and suddenly she’s caught up in him. Ugh.
3. In the cabin after Adam and Reb “rescue” Kincaid, Kincaid is unconscious on the bed and Reb is staring at him in the creepiest way possible. And if staring at his naked body wasn’t enough, well then how about this line – “She dropped the hand and leaned across the stranger to check his other hand, her firm breast brushing lightly across his naked chest. She tried to ignore the exciting sensation that resulted” (pg. 64).
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Are we actually supposed to be okay with this?
Are we supposed to applaud Reb for literally sexually enjoying herself with an unconscious person that she doesn’t know?
In any other book, the idea of Character A sexually enjoying his/herself with unconscious Character B would be considered rape-y. Here it’s supposed to be… I don’t even know, romantic? What?
4. Reb is supposedly a beautiful girl, yet for some reason, Kincaid fully believes she is a boy. As far as I can make sense if it, this does not add up. Yes, I get it, she has short hair and wears a buckskin that hides some of her figure, but seeing as how the books stresses that she has ample… assets… you’d think that a man with any sort of background on females would notice something is a little strange with this “boy”.
5. Reb does not correct Kincaid for thinking she’s a boy. In fact, she goes along with it. Supposedly, Reb is supposed to be this strong female character that can do everything a woman can do and everything a man can do. If she was so strong, she could reveal that she’s a woman and would show Kincaid that she’s boss. But no, she just lets herself get overpowered and underestimated by this guy. Fantastic.
6. Then there is the “fever-delirious Kincaid” almost sex-scene.
Not only is Kincaid delirious and imagining everything and Reb just goes along with it enjoying herself, she finds out that Kincaid has a dead wife.
AND THEN SHE CONTINUES GOING ALONG WITH HIS FEVERED SEX DREAMS KNOWING THAT HE BELIEVES SHE IS HER DEAD WIFE.
How is this supposed to be okay in any sense of the word?
Sure, Reb realizes what she’s done wrong and then tries to stop it – 2 PAGES LATER.
And also, we are supposed to buy that Kincaid – fever-delirious Kincaid – is somehow doing this even though he is both feverish and injured, and is saying stuff like, “Breasts like ripe fruits, belly so firm, one day to grow large with my seed…” (pg. 96).
Apparently, when he has a fever, Kincaid becomes some sort of sex-driven poet. Which for some reason, I am just not believing fits his married soldier background. Plus, I can’t just ignore the fact that what he just said was one of the weirdest things that anyone has ever said.
Going back to Reb just casually going along with having Kincaid think that she is his dead wife (which is morally wrong) and still going along with it after Kincaid talks like the #1 Creeper of the Year: when she snaps out of it – whatever “it” is - for some bizarre reason she blames Kincaid for it, which transitions nicely to my next point…
7. Reb has the worst temper of any character in any book that I have ever read. She gets mad about practically everything, storms off, comes back with a plan to change the source of her rage, and then it happens all over again. She disrespects authority (that authority being her father) and literally uses her dead mother as an excuse to get her way. Charming girl.
8. That’s not to say Kincaid is very likable either. Altogether, both of the main characters are unlikeable, and I very much want Adam to come back as he is the only character I like.
I like the writing style of this book. Usually, that would warrant a two-star rating, but seeing as how two stars is listed as “it was okay” on Goodreads and there are things that are not MORALLY okay in this novel, I am going to give it a 1.25-star rating.