3.5 stars
Dude!!! What happened???? The first half of the story was going extremely well, and then it declined rapidly. Hmm no. That's not how it was suppose to happen at all. Working it was going well as enemies to lovers story. I recall stating in previous reviews that I don't like clingy, needy, or PUSHOVERS as characters. I know realistically they are out there, but I really hate it. Nolan was going well as a character, but then at some point, he decided to be a pushover. It's nothing wrong with it in a committed relationship, but someone like Zach will always be able to pushover a potential lover because he doesn't have to own up to anything. FFS, it wasn't that serious, and a day could have waited. I'm just a strong willed woman, and I refuse to accept certain behaviors from people.
Nolan is trying to get a fresh start again in life. After a life altering accident he is willing himself to get back into the world. Dealing with anxiety and panic attacks doesn't make it easy. He decides to take a job where his skills exceed his skills. Sure he's skittish at first, but something in him calls to Zach. Difficult Zach, who is super abrasive, demanding, and not a people person at all. Zach seems to have all this pent up frustration and anger inside of him. He's super demanding, and doesn't seem to have a heart. With all these qualities, I had to stop to think what about Nolan called to him. Why, Nolan? He was on the cusp of an anxiety attack during their first meeting. It couldn't be attraction, because both stated numerous times how they weren't each other types. Not knowing each of Zach's backstory I can only presume that besides Nolan being the opposite of him, he's always never cared for someone. This is something that I wish the author would have wrote about. I would have loved to see a backstory on Zach. I can definitely see when the chemistry between the two started, sure it moved fairly quickly. I do think professional wise that they work wonders together. It shows a glimpse of how they could be personally. I really loved seeing the difference between Zach and his careers. The CTO job is just a stepping stone to something he loves. The Boxing gym that saved his life is something that he is putting his blood, sweat, and tears into. I think seeing more of this in a potential epilogue would have garnered a higher rating from me.
I didn't like the Miranda obstacle in the story. That sentence seems a little mean, but that story line did nothing for the story. I don't like filler information, and I didn't gain anything from it. Zach's reaction to the situation was spot on. I'm still confused on what the author was trying to show with it. It didn't help at all. **Sigh**, the L word was used at the end. Do I think it was to early? Yes, these two have a lot to work on, and we didn't get to see them grow at all. All in all, I thought it started off really well, but declined around the 50% part of the story. I will read book two. This was an ok read for me.