OMG in so many ways this was RIDICULOUS. I think several elements of the plot were creative, but there is so much excess that any reader would need to abandon any level of believability and their comfort zones. Start with the protagonist Claire Britten, who the author has given a life- threatening illness: narcolepsy and cataplexy which can cause temporary immobility or paralysis, and which she has suffered with since childhood. It requires a rigid schedule of medication, naps, good sleep at night (needing after four hours a hefty second dose of a very strong med), emotional stability and minimal stress. She is a Certified Fraud Examiner and Forensic psychologist, who interviews persons, taking apart their lives, motives and alibis. She is also a Forensic Document Examiner. She owns her own business, Clear Path, that she is building mostly through word of mouth and Facebook. She is a single parent with a four year old, Lexi. Her ex is a jerk, who she did not tell about her illness before they were married. Oops?!? When he finds out he screams and yells and divorces her...she is not perfect. He also wants to continue to control her and isn't above using Lexi as leverage. He is a commercial airline pilot who sees his new life mostly in Singapore as a win. But he also still loves Claire and as the story progresses decides he wants her back, which creates problems. And he consistently misses Lexi.
When we first meet Claire she has just won a case for her client, Fred Myron, against Sol Sorento, who tried to collect an insurance payment from Myron's small insurance company, Lifeboat Insurance, by pretending he was dead. She beats wealthy, successful Nick Markwood, of Markwood, Benton and Chase. As she is exiting the courthouse, and as Nick is approaching her, shots are fired, Myron is killed and Claire is wounded in the arm, which Mick works to contain the bleeding. So begins the constant danger, tension, suspense, stress, confusion and fear of this melodramatic tale. It sometimes reads like a damsel in distress on the railroad tracks film.
With a lucrative contract with Markwood's low-profile charitable organization that represents individuals who have lost loved ones to suicide that may really be murder, she agrees to travel to St. Augustine to interview Jasmine Montgomery Stanton, regarding her relationship with her mother who died of an overdose of her meds. They had disagreed on the future of the plantation. There is a problem with restoration and maintenance costs, and Francine wanted to either gift it to the state, or sell it to a wealthy investor. (Her first attorney later tells them he didn't know the names of the investor, but he was in the Cayman Islands, which is a shocker for Nick wherer he believes his nemisis resides.) She is in the crosshairs of Sheriff Goodrich, who believes that she killed her mother. Francine Montgomery owned the massive, gorgeous and menacing pre-Civil War plantation, Shadowlawn Hall, more spectacular than Tara, that once grew indigo. In addition to Jasmine she will need to talk to Bronco Gates, groundskeeper and buster of alligators on the St. John River and Everglades pythons, Neil Costa, house manager, who has a museum on the property that shows memorabilia of the B-movie "Creature from the Black Lagoon", shot partly on the plantation, Win Jackson, artist and photographer of the plantation, who plans to write a book about Shadowlawn, Lola Moran, who Francine treated like a daughter and Jasmine, fired after her mother died. Lola owns a marionette shop, and makes life size puppets, the shop into which Francine had invested. Jasmine was jealous of their relationship. Lola has a twin sister, Cecilia.
As Claire continues her interview and research into the belongings of Francine, including a diary that she finds in boxes in the attic, she is confronted with the tales of the ghosts that haunt the plantation: Rosalynn, an ancestor, who when she finds herself pregnant by the overseer while her husband is at war, throws herself from the second floor gallery to her death. The overseer once the husband returns challenges him to a duel and when he kills the husband is hanged from the huge oak tree on the property. Various people have reported seeing the ghosts: only women see Rosalynn. During the process Claire smells the perfume that Jasmine wears, jasmine, her mother's personal concoction, throughout the house at odd times.
After being shot, as she and Nick are nearing St. Augustine, they are nearly run off a bridge by a person wearing a mask not unlike the face of Munch's "The Scream". She will later find out that Neil has a mask collection, and has one like that (that he did not reveal). In the course of the investigation she and Jasmine will find the body of Lola Moran, before she has a chance to interview her. She is found hanging among the marionettes. Next Jace is attacked and knocked out when he follows her to Shadowlawn. After she and Nick go to see Francine's first attorney, who tells of the new will Francine was in the process of making, they are run off the road into a ditch, cool thinking getting them out of the car before the water envelops the car. When she is interviewing Bronco, he who is supposed to be a gentle giant, goes off and abducts her on his airboat. There is a considerable portion of story that recounts their conversation which is confusing and weird. Talked into returning to the plantation by Claire and Nick who accidently finds them on the river (Nick has called in all the law enforcement and paid for a helicopter), they are confronted by the sheriff and other officers. At the point they are ready to take Bronco in, shots are fired at the entire group, shooting out the Sheriff's car windshield. It is Cecilia, Lola's twin. And once again Claire is thrown to the ground and shielded by Nick. She is convinced to stay at the plantation for the night, once she has found her purse with her meds. However, someone has fiddled with her meds. She awakes in the night to take her second dose. It tastes different, as had the meal she had eaten. She begins to wander, hallucinating, disoriented. Heck, Nick's tech guy and assistant, who was sleeping outside her room is found on the stairs, bloody, then is gone when she returns. She is then abducted, confused by the voice and circumstances. S/he takes her to the museum, ties her up and gags her, locks her in. In the meantime Nick has returned, and Jasmine finds that Heck and Claire are missing.
Claire is again taken by the abductor, who she finally realizes is Win Jackson. He was supposed to be a consultant/advisor for the plantation in the event of Francine's death. He has also realized that Claire will soon find out from the diary that he and Francine had come to a parting of the ways. Their relationship had not been genuine of his part, which Lola had discovered. He takes Claire to the River to drown her. As he releases her feet and hands, she plans to kick him. Fortunately the ghosts show up to lend a hand. (Had to get that paranormal element in at the end. Maybe now everyone will believe.) And then Nick captures Win and Jasmine pulls Claire from the River.
Are those enough life threatening situations for one novel?!? Mind you Nick has revealed during this time he has a criminal after him. The man who he believes set his father up to fail and then murdered disguising it as a suicide, Clayton Ames, who is elusive and very dangerous, is probably hanging around making life difficult. For instance, often there are drones above, and Jace received several photographs of Claire in dangerous situations. There is a note with it warning not to trust Nick and to get Claire away from him.
BUT that is not all. As Claire returns home to Lexi, and Nick brings Happy Meals for their enjoyment, Jace has decided to change his assignments and fly closer to home, intending to get Claire back. He shows up just after Lexi has run outside and been swept away. Kidnapped. A drone lands on the lawn with a note telling them in order to get Lacy back Nick and Claire need to travel to Grand Cayman Island, using the tickets provided, which look to have been arranged by Nick. Jace is of course livid, but agrees to stay hidden as he follows them. We are left with Lexi on the cliff, and the necessary of finding the next book, if we want to know what happens. I HATE SERIES, TV OR BOOK, THAT HAVE A RECURRING SERIAL KILLER OR CRIMINAL THAT GETS AWAY OR ESCAPES TO APPEAR TIME AND AGAIN. (Remember "The Fugitive", or any number of book series?) Totally frustrating. I decided to look up the teasers provided for the next installments. Sure enough, they get out of one scrap (or maybe more) only to run into the next one in book three and so on.
As I said in the beginning...RIDICULOUS. Not only is it overkill, but by the time she gets to the end of the second book, Claire should be dead from her inability to control her illness. Just RIDICULOUS.