Because it was billed as erotica, I expected a romance, but there was none. I reacted very strongly and negatively to the way Seth treated his partner, Ashley-- mansplains everything, calls her unprofessional diminutives, and makes her go get coffee. Meanwhile, Ashley is obsessed with Seth, even after discovering he is married and meets his wife. The attraction between Seth and his wife didn't convince me. I half expected her to announce she'd been cheating on him and file for divorce, opening the door for Ashley, but that didn't happen. The central detective case is a too-easily-solved mystery, except for why anyone working in law enforcement after would need Police 101 explained so extensively.
Add in grammatical errors, tense confusion, and anatomical incorrectness (vagina and cervix are not the same thing), and I strongly recommend another round of edits to the .mobi file.