For the life of me I could not understand Lana's reasoning for any of what she did in this story, not to mention the Healers or the Preor's. It was emotional and confusing, the first part is great but not when you put it together with the second part.
Having given birth four times I can fully understand that she was hormonal and scared and a whole bunch of confusing things were going on in her head, but honestly I could not understand why she first of all hid that she was in labour then refused to have the medical monitoring device put on (which was as much to monitor the health of her babies as her own... why would anyone refuse that during such a dangerous time both to her and her babies?)
That and the fact that it slammed all over one of my top peeves, I gave birth in a time where the only form of relief from the pain was oxygen. So I did the "natural birth" thing, but honestly any time a child passes through a vagina IMO it's a natural birth, whether it was done while the mother was under drugs, epidural, saddle block, or ass deep in water, whatever, happy healthy baby is all that counts.