Mandy is a tax consultant by day, but by night, she's slave to Mistress D, the futanari with two gimps by her side. Tonight at the BDSM Theater, the Mistress chains Mandy up, gives her a gaping, fisting, and a taste of her very large member, all in front of an audience that's been instructed not to touch themselves... but when someone does, he's brought up on stage to receive an enema and a golden shower!
Well it would probably do well as a long read. Because ultimately there is so much potential there for a good long read (especially in a series as these seem to be) because it is obviously written by someone intelligent. How ever it just rushes through so quickly that it leaves you hanging. If it were drawn out, have .or details..it would make for such a hot hot story that would make you want to buy the others in the series. I really hope the writer takes it from. Short to a long story.