Ever been stuck on a train in a dark tunnel, trapped in an airless sardine tin with a bunch of strangers?
Sure you have.
But don’t be so eager to get out of that train, because what’s waiting on the other side might be even worse …
This short horror story is a dark descent into the subconscious horror that lurks inside all of us. It is a tale of love, money and the shackles of modern city life.
Jack Binding is a Londoner living in Sydney. Inspired by writers such as Stephen King, Clive Barker, JG Ballard and Martin Amis, Jack writes gritty, dark fiction that combines horror, fantasy and twisted, black humour.
Property can also be found in the collection 18 Short Stories.
Jack Binding is a London-born author now living in Sydney. He crafts dark fiction that blends horror with sharp, black humor. His short stories, regularly published on Amazon, have garnered critical acclaim (at least for now).
Jack draws inspiration from literary giants like Stephen King, Clive Barker, J.G. Ballard, and Martin Amis.
Wow! This is a fantastic short story. I love how it's so realistic... because it is... and the ending! I'll be damned.. I saw someone commenting about the ending and I was thinking-thinking-thinking.. what could it be?
The writing and storytelling was so good, I forgot to keep another part of my brain working just to see if I could guess the finale... well, I couldn't. It came as a shock. Like a bucket of cold water! If you like short stories, even if you don't like short stories- you need to get this one and read it!
Jack Binding is one to look out for, so he is... Dot Matrix, his first short story was equally good... Jack seems to take his observations from life and serve them to you with some sharp edge... Sometimes, the writing just has it. And in this case, it does have that something...
This is VERY short. I hate to say it, this, this is more like a creative writing exercise a student would turn in. I can't think of it as a true short story. It takes 10 minutes to read and I think the writer would have been better served to make this longer and mold it into more of a story with a beginning, middle and ending.
Subtle hints, self-realization, and an ending you wish you saw coming. A story that many people today can very much relate to. Not too preachy but just preachy enough to make you think. A worthwhile read.
The second person narrative was a little hard for me to get used to. A young professional living the dream, at least on the surface. The ending was well done, I never saw it coming!
Loved the dark humor in this short story. Great language and description, though I could have lost the bit about the girl on the train. Found myself highlighting a couple of the harder-hitting passages.