A Promising and Enjoyable Start
Hell on Earth, book one of newcomer Tony Urban's Life of the Dead series, is a short, fast-paced read and a hella good book for a first-time author.
Hell on Earth follows an enormous cast of characters from the first day of a zompoc outbreak to about a week after the first regeneration. Urban drops the reader right in the action instead of giving them a stilted scene in a lab or alongside a group of terrorists in an unnamed Muslim country with a bad explanation of the pseudo-science that begat the virus- which is my preferred method of starting a tale in this particular genre.
His physical descriptions of the zombies is top-notch and he does a nice job of relaying little details that tell the reader what the dead were in life. There are little old lady zombies in house coats, cop zombies, soldier zombies, parent zombies, child zombies, teacher zombies, an entire family of farmer zombies and a host of others. His dead regenerate with horrific injuries that sometimes make the reader wince.
Speaking of horrific injuries- Hell on Earth gets the gore just right. It's there- there are plenty of exploding heads, gallons of running blood, and scores of throats getting ripped open (maybe too many ripped open throats, really; after awhile the reader gets the feeling that the dead in Hell on Earth are programmed to instinctively go for the throat). In one riveting passage a man cuts off his own hand and then cauterizes the wound. But you never get the feeling that you're reading a novel written for the sake of the gore. It's a result, not a feature.
Hell on Earth's prose crackles and pops, and rarely gets bogged down. The two main characters are nicely rounded, especially poor Win. Your heart breaks for him as he goes about putting down his only friends, the animals on his farm.
Two strikes keep Hell on Earth from being a five-star book. The first is when Urban makes the classic first-time-author-with-a-novel-that-never-saw-a-competent-editor mistake and gives us too many characters to keep track of. WAY too many. Much time is spent going back and re- reading previous passages to figure out who a particular player is. He would have been better served to eliminate some of the extraneous characters and their storylines, and focused more on Win and Ramey.
The second complaint is about the plot- there isn't one. The narrative in Hell on Earth reads more like a news account than a novel- this happened to that lady and that happened to this man, and so on, until you're at the end of the book. At one point Ramey decides to find the father who walked out on her younger self, and at the end of the book Win makes a monumental decision that affects his story line. Other than that, though, none of the characters have arcs beyond surviving the week and not getting bit is the only thing they are striving for.
But those are quibbles. Overall, Hell on Earth is a fun, raucous ride through the zombie apocalypse and book two of The Life of the Dead series is near the top of my queue.